What lengths would you go to, to help a pretty girl struggling with her past? Especially, if you knew there was the potential to be more than ‘just friends’?
Barbie’s Doll
The Cotton Candy Wars
By Shauna
Copyright© 2018 Shauna
All Rights Reserved.
(All image originals sourced from Creative Commons)
Hi All,
I have to sincerely apologize to my readers for the original version of this Chapter. :-)
I took Barb's comment to heart--I didn't take it as her criticizing me, in the least. But, she was right--I did rush this one, much too much. I am not going into the reasons, but just know that I had them.
At any rate, I hope this is more in line with what those of you that have supported the story deserve. It doesn't change the story, but I hope it adds to it. Please feel to revise/add to your comments, if you disagree (or agree, for that matter).
I left my original comment at the end, so that new readers will have context for the original reader comments. I think I can safely say, there seems to be interest in a continuation. :-)
Once again, thanks to all of you for supporting the story and Happy New Year!
HUGS!
S
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