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Sorry about how long this took.
I'll most probably have to go over it again.
It's more of a draft.

Anyway..


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Starship 22

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Have you ever found yourself losing several hours of writing to a power failure?
I hate it, wasn't recoverable either.

So I had to rewrite it, raw to the bone it is.
It also came out quite different.

So, if you don't like this version I will try to understand.

I promise that the one I lost was better..


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Starship 18

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Nothing much, just setting a mood.
And hopefully starting to write again.

And it's not 'polished'.


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Starship 17

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Something more, might have to correct this later.
Hope I didn't make too many mistakes, spelling, etc.

(Sorry, made horrible mistakes here, corrected though, well, hopefully so.)


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Starship 16

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A beginning again.
It's like all stories, you see new horizons as they develop.
Also short again. Have too much to do suddenly.
Which is weird :)


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Starship 15

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Some more, slightly boring I'm afraid. And new, may have to correct some of it. Mostly mine ideas, but as far as I know, correct. And although there is a lot more to be said about the physics, behind physics, we won't, for now. And if you're one of those thinking of 'time' in terms of thermodynamics, I do expect a mail in where you ever so patiently explain where I go wrong questioning those ideas :)

Anyway, it's kind'a for the 'hardcore SF fan' probably.
Or those interested in 'time'.

Anyway.
Bear with me.


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Starship 13

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Somewhat boring possibly.
Giving us an idea.

And, as usual, short :)


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Starship 12

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I'm sorry, this one is very short.
It will get better, given some time.

But it's at least getting, somewhere?
ahem.


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Starship 11

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And so we dive, nose deep, if not deeper.
Well, sort of?

And yes, too short again..
A slow writer.


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Starship 10

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ahem.
Let us test the waters.

And no, just wrote it so it can be better, well, hopefully so?
And don't you laugh.


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Starship 9

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More background I'm afraid.
The buildup being i n t e n s e.
Or just, plain boring? :)


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Starship 8

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Background mostly, we all need to see where they come from, don't we :)
(Especially me.)


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Starship 7

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A preliminary, unchecked chapter.
Don't expect too much from it.


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Starship 6

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Had to give up, on making it making sense :)
We'll see?

And yes, another short one.
(a little longer now.)
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Starship 5

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Don't know what you think.
Too contrived?

(and short too:)


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Starship 3

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A part more.

It's hard deciding the mode here, don't know how serious I should be.
Too serious, it becomes boring. To little, and it won't work for me.

Damned if I do, damned if I don't :)

I wring it as I write, and mood has a lot to do with it.
I'm not a very disciplined writer I'm afraid.


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Starship 2

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* This is a tentative continuance, no guarantees.
All because vanity calls.

I hope you won't be too disappointed.
We'll see if it works, or not.

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There’s a mountain, and no, I’m not speaking of one of those thin ones, those fashionably slim, elegantly cutting through the air. You know, the ones that all mountaineers so dearly love.


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Starship 1

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Sorry, I know it's a short one.
And yeah, I'm glad some enjoyed it.
It's, as always, a pleasure writing for you.

(And a slight update)


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Starship

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Haven't been writing for quite some time. And this is more of a test.
So bear with me if you find it ill written, and remember, you've been warned.

It's a SF, or maybe a mutation of fantasy meeting SF :)

(installing a revised, and corrected version of it, hoping it will read better)


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Used -7-

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Suddenly Roland found himself getting an outrageous notion.

“And if light wouldn’t move at all Shadow? And all motion just is that space getting longer and shorter?” As soon as he said it he realized how weird he sounded, but he still couldn’t get the idea out of his head. And if it was true then? That time slowed the faster you went. “What would that sand corn of light see?” he asked wonderingly. “Traveling faster than anything else. Would distances even exist for it? And without a distance, how could one prove a time?”


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Used -6-

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Hope I don't bore bejesus out of you here :)
Anyway, here's the next part..

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“Yes Roland, you’re so right, there was a trick to my explanation.” He smiled.


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Good and evil

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Don't know if you have seen Amelie?

It's set in a dream of a Paris that may or may not exist, and it's a story about a girl growing up. What stroke me watching it was the interpretations made in the movie. Made me start to wonder what the world really is like. Maybe good and evil isn't as much the acts in them selves, not that some acts doesn't scream about egotism and inability of empathy, but in a greater perspective the way we choose to revile ourselves in them. Take a porn movie for example, then take those condemning those being in it, who turns the blinder eye?

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Writing is so much harder than I want it to be.
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It's in plain desperation I throw in every new part here, and when done, I find myself starting to rewrite it, as it's baad.. Bad bad bad. And it's not at all what I want it to be, it should be so much better.

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Used -4-

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This is just a draft, and as such not very good. But it wants to be written, so I'll write it and see :)

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About Used.

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I'm sorry if you find this one changing. I'm constantly finding new shortcomings in it that I have to correct, and the words don't seem to come as they should in this one. So maybe it will be something totally different than what I started out with, as I've gone some way with it? I guess you could call it my most 'ambitious' try so far :)

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Used -3-

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(A draft, and as such constantly changing, or maybe like life itself, always the same although, never the same)

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Used -2-

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A draft only, I will most probably have to rewrite it.
But it's good getting your reactions, and also it's an hard one to write for me.

In many ways.

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Don't know.

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I’m made to hurt
You’re made to hurt

Pain a gift of life

Why does it then hurt so much
If life was meant to hurt

Someone said that God is good.
You’re sure?

Does he hurt too?

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Faith

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A dream a promise of eternity
Someone touching you

softly

The winds breathless laughs emptiness
In that echo someone wants to care


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Testing Teaser -4-

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So, there I stood. Or rather sat, wishing that I was somewhere else. This was wrong. I was starting to get very tired of being threatened. I stood up, smiling at him, then I started to walk towards him. He backed as I moved and forcing him back out in the living room I told him.

“You better shot if you want me to stay, because I’m leaving.”

He looked at me as if trying to gauge my seriousness, suddenly he put his piece away, looking almost embarrassed.


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Adam's own

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I will go with Adam's own for the moment. I may change some more of it to make it 'flow' better, for me that is :). On the other hand, one becomes kind of blind writing, and .. So if you see what you think is a blatant mistake, write me and say so.

Anyway, if you don't mind I will stay with that one and Jellyfish for the moment. I need to finish both, as well as some others. So if I do write something new it will probably be 'short stories. What do you think of Jellyfish btw, Is it boring? interesting, or just plain rubbish?

Gotta admit that to me it's kind of interesting :)

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Trying to make 'Adam's own' readable?

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I've tried to fix on 'Adams Own' a little, don't know if it's noticeable though :)
Up to half chapter 3-10. I don't like that it's so phreaking big, half would be enough especially when, ah, 'editing'..

Hope you had a nice start on the new year. The sad thing is that we all lost something in the exchange, namely the old one :)

Never mind, it will all become clear as I look back at this one too.
Well, hopefully so.
Take care now.

Yor.

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Just some writings.

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Some of those having an impact on me. And I won’t ‘define’ them that much, but I do download those writers.
(Some of the best I suspect I forget to mention, they’re so much of a ‘standing feature’ that you, and me, already reads them, like Angharad f ex, so, I will mention her now. )

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Q.

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Just a question.

I'm getting sort of involved with Jellyfish for the moment :)
Weird ain't it.

And I'm thinking of suspending 'Adams Own' for the time being.
A good idea?

You tell me?

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