I will go with Adam's own for the moment. I may change some more of it to make it 'flow' better, for me that is :). On the other hand, one becomes kind of blind writing, and .. So if you see what you think is a blatant mistake, write me and say so.

Anyway, if you don't mind I will stay with that one and Jellyfish for the moment. I need to finish both, as well as some others. So if I do write something new it will probably be 'short stories. What do you think of Jellyfish btw, Is it boring? interesting, or just plain rubbish?

Gotta admit that to me it's kind of interesting :)
But yeah, I'm prejudiced.

Cheers
Yoron.

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Jan 6 -10

Almost done re-changing 'Adam's own, -chapters 3-10-'

As for now, that is :)

Please reread and see if it's better, or if I just made it worse.