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You Have it All Wrong Four - The Kids Story - Part 08

You Have It All Wrong Four

By SaraUK

 

Part 8



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mom

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copy right 2012 are in order post on any free site if you want just give me credit for writing it .
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Mom you gave me the gift of life for that I am so grateful.
Love to you was unconditional even if you were tired .



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About comments

Hi everyone...

I'm registered on this site since about a year and I commented quite a few stories. The problem I encountered was that people really prefer the comments on their stories differently.
I actually avoided registering on this site since I was used a rougher climate from another fiction site and didn't want to melt people in the rain. In the end I did it anyway because someone started to complain she got too few comments.

Wild Magic 29

We had a surprisingly good evening, and when Tim and I got up to leave, Dad got up and shook his hand.

“Thank you, Tim. Although it was inadvertent, we have intruded into your date, and you handled it very well. This has been a wonderful evening, and I believe most of the credit for that goes to you and Emily.”

“Um, well, thanks, sir.” He said, chuckling. “It has been a lot of fun, and since the object was to provide Emily with a date that was different, this seems to have been a success!”



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"My Nanny Transitioned To A Man"

Thought everyone might find this interesting. This is one cool author. Copy and paste link if it doesn't work.

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/rhiana-maidenberg/transgender-...

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The Chosen One Part Two

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The Chosen One

Part Two

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Jacquimac



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Still changing - pictures included

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So here is the thing... I have started my transformation.... Finally. I am doing it rather slowly, though of course I would prefer just waking up female and skipping the process. Though I think the process is going to be important.

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Attack of the Beast - Part 4

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by Anon Allsop
Part 4

Chapter 12

After two and a half hours of decontamination, I was trembling and shaking like a leaf. My nerves had been spent! I had been fearful of speaking and was holding onto Parker as we were finally approached by several of the doctors and military personnel that had observed us when we left the ship. As they approached, Park gently gave my hand a comforting squeeze, trying to let me know that everything would be alright.

At the front was Park's commanding officer, Major Doren... Roger. He studied me for a moment then turned to face Park, "First Lieutenant Parker, we downloaded your flight data from the craft, sounds like something gave you guys hell out there! Explain!"



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The Devil Inside

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The Devil Inside
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Morpheus

A young man finds himself in for a devilish surprise.



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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1631

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1631
by Angharad

Copyright © 2012 Angharad
All Rights Reserved.
  
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Attention: Retcon (CRU) authors and potential authors

Due to the number of inquiries I've been getting as of late...

A number of people have been asking about writing characters that have already been chosen. Sadly, I have to tell them that those particular ones are unavailable at this time, because other people have chosen them.

There are a number of authors/potential authors that have chosen characters and after a number of months, and in some cases over a year, have posted nothing.

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please, make it stop

I'm really struggling with the voice of self-criticism. Every mistake I make lately is being magnified to something terminal, and I dont know how to turn off this voice.

Help?

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The Trouble Maker's Bottom Knockers Are Back

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"Here we are again, Jeffrey."

"And advertising ourselves to a mainly American audience with a reference hardly anyone
will understand, Susie - talk about mad men."

"We'll never learn, Jeffrey."

"And neither will they, even if they read the whole of 'Double Trouble', Susie. It's a
ripping yarn, but it'll probably leave them more confused than ever."

"Maybe we should do a silent movie next time, Jeffrey."

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Double Trouble

Another Ripping Yarn

Crime pays in spades for the perpetrators when Susie and Jeffrey are taken for a ride.

"Any other bright ideas?"

"Yes, failing that, we'll bop him over the head with a blunt instrument - the blunter the better."

"We haven't got an instrument, Susie - blunt or otherwise."

"The wheel brace, Jeffrey - and we'll get out the jack as well. I've just dreamt up a super enhancement to my latest cunning plan."

"That seems barely possible, Susie. What is it?"

"We'll pretend we kicked over the jack and dropped the taxi on Willy while he was inspecting the spondulicks. That'll prove to Wally we're as ruthless as he is."

"Except we don't have a gun," I objected, hurrying after her to the back of the van.

"We won't need one; that's the beauty of my scheme. We'll wait until Wally bends down to pull out his beloved Willy, and then - Kapow!"

"What if Wally's so ruthless, he doesn't care what's happened to his beloved Willy?"

"No man's that ruthless, Jeffrey."



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One person got it? The Princess Bride Reference?

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"Hello! My name is Inigo Montoya (Juan Pablo Montoya) You killed my Father! (You killed my car) Prepare to die!

Does that help?

I understand that NASCAR doesn't appeal to veery many people, but the GREAT reference, relating the amazing crash at this year's race (Thank God no one was seriously hurt) was, to me, inescapable!

The blog was about the reference to the line from the movie, and its similarity to the crash. NOT about the race. Sigh. Maybe mine is the only small mind amused by little things like this.

Oh well. I tried. I STILL think it's very funny.

Cathy

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The Chosen One Part One

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The Chosen One
Part One
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The invaders came the first time bearing gifts, we all thought that they were just traders but a year later they arrived in force with rifles and cannon and attacked us in great numbers. We didn't stand a chance and retreated deeper and deeper into the Great Forest where we would be safe for a time.



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After the transformation

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After the transformation

“I’m a girl now, mom. What do we do?”

“Well, there’s one thing I wont do hon. I wont be forcing you into skirts and heels.”

“You.... wont?”

“God, no. I cant even imagine how traumatic this has been. The last thing you need is me making things worse by throwing you into the deep end of girlhood. You can be a tomboy as long as you need to.”

“Thanks. Maybe I’ll try some skirts too, and see how I feel.”

“Sounds good. Lets go shopping.”



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I write like a girl?

During my little "TG-PMS" time, someone said to me my writing comes across as very female. I'm wondering, in what way? What makes a woman writer different from a male one?

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1630

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1630
by Angharad

Copyright © 2012 Angharad
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TransBike- Renewal

TransBike- Renewal
By Stanman63
2012-Short Story Month
-Second Chances
SynopsisA student finds herself thanks to a visit to the mall.


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The Fourth Countess


The Fourth Countess

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By Karin Beyaert

Kurt had always dreamt about having his own castle. And one or two other minor changes in his life as well, like e.g. becoming very rich.
As so often good deeds get rewarded and wishes fulfilled.
Kurt gets all he ever longed for. And as a real man he is prepared to pay the price for success. Or is he eventually not…?
Be careful with what you wish, you might get it. And, even worse, have to keep it!

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Seattle Gal Part 13

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SEATTLE GAL
Part 13
Taking Charge

 
by Susan Jean Charles
 
Jessica decides it’s time to move forward. Phil’s reaction to her leaving. Deanna gets a gift. A meeting is finally scheduled.

 © 2012, by Susan J. Charles. All rights reserved
Edited by Holly H. Hart



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Dorothy's Onion Burgers

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What you need:

1 pound of ground beef

1 package of onion soup mix

10 crackers

1 egg

Allspice or other seasoning.

How you make it:

take beef, and put into mixing bowl. Add onion soup mix, crackers and egg. Season to taste with allspice or other seasoning. Mix thoroughly, and separate into patties. Cook as many patties as you will eat over medium heat, turning over a couple of times. Dress burgers with cheese, ketchup, mustered, or other condiments and put on buns.

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Nothing Is as Rare as a Day in May, er February

Today is February 29:

Rossini's birthday

Gilbert & Sullivan's "Pirates of Penzance" is based on February 29

"The Family Circus debuted

A woman can propose to a man. Irish legend says St. Bridget & St. Patrick made a bargain for that.

And of course, today is Sadie Hawkins Day, an invention of Al Capp

You may add to the list

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Gaby Book 8 Chapter *09* Secrets

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Chapter *8.09*

Secrets

There is just no way that I'm telling the girls about the Munich trip, well certainly not beforehand! I bet Bern would be having a laugh at my expense. Bern, I hope she's alright, I've been so preoccupied with Munich that I've not really thought about her today, hmm I know, I'll write to her!

I fired up my PC and opened Word.



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Best line from the Daytona 500

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"Hello Jet Track Dryer. My name is Juan Pablo Montoya. You killed my car. Prepare to die!"

Another great one: How many NASCAR drivers does it take to kill a jet track dryer? Only Juan.

Thank you, thank you. I'll be here all week. Try the veal, tip your waitress.

Cathy

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Marker on my screen

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So, some of the stories here are really long and I can't read them in one setting, so I have been using a marker to mark the position of the slide thingie before I shut down for the night. Before you all laugh at me, how else can I do it? It is really troublesome to find my place again when I come back on line.

I am worried about getting the marks off my screen.

Is there some sort of book mark thingie I can use so I can come back to the right place?

Thank you.

Gwendolyn

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so what's new

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Just keeping people updated because, quite frankly, I could use the support.

My friend is still here and i am still inching ever closer to just going full time, or at least part time with an option for overtime and vacation. It has been decided that thursday we are going for makeovers. At that time I will get a feminine hairstyle (not a unisex one that I can change back and forth). I am also contemplating getting my ears pierced. I just guess I finally got tired of putting up the facade.

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Changed location of commenter's name and the date

I've noticed the in the comments the poster's name and the date/time the post was made has been shifted from where it was under the title of the comment over to the right side of the screen. Having had a few years to get used to the original location I can't say I'm fond of the change and I wonder why this was done.

Edit: Not just comments, it look like just about evreything has this change: stories, blogs, etc.

Plump and Pretty - 7


Plump and Pretty — 7



By Katherine Day

(Copyright 2012)


Can there be any reason to ponder
That Brian is soon to wander
Into the sweet desires of a boy
Who finds him such a girl, a joy?



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Wild Magic 28

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Tim was waiting for me at the gate to the parking lot, and he walked me back to my truck.

“I’ve got to get a couple of quick things done for Dad, then get home, clean up, and pick up this extremely pretty lady I’m taking out tonight,” he said, then he kissed me. “I’ll see you around 6:30?”

“Uhmm...yeah, that works. I’ll send my other boyfriend home, and then wait for you.” I said, looking innocent and sweet.



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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1629

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1629
by Angharad

Copyright © 2012 Angharad
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feeling a bit blech

I'm not depressed, exactly, but I feel like ... I dont know. All my life I was stuck in boy world, with my face pressed against the glass looking in at girl world, so envious I was salivating like a starving person watching people enjoying a five star meal. Now, I at last found an entrance into that land, but I wonder if I will ever be seen as anything but an immigrant. Will I ever .... just fit in?

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Attack of the Beast - Part 3

twin_suns.jpgAttack of the Beast
by Anon Allsop
Part 3

Chapter 8

(Changing perspective slightly from Christian’s view to relay what he could not see)

Captain Donaldson held his plasma cannon up near his shoulder as he caught Margie's arm. "Damn it Margie, why couldn't you wait for all of us?"

"That thing killed my only friend here... I will not let it live another day!" She swung her arm in the direction she was heading, "Don't stop me, Captain! I'm going on...one way or another!"



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To Make A Wish Chapter 17



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Who Wears Short Shorts - List Posted Songs Musicals

To all of those interested I posted a list of all the songs, Groups, Broadway Musicals, Composers, DJs and characters that are in my story, Who Wears Short Short Shorts?

It can be found as a comment to the story. Please pardon the way it looks, but my carefully constructed chart failed to make the transfer from Excell to the site.

Thanks for reading the story, the comments, the P.M.s and the Kudos.

Rami

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Too sorry

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This isn't so much a problem as an annoyance. I have noticed recently that I say 'sorry'even when I don't need to, eg. yesterday a guy said we shoud meet at 12 to study. I got there on time and he wasn't there. I waited for him in the library for 30 min. and then went to do something else with an advisor.
I saw him later and he told me he had arrived at 1, but he seemed to be upset so I said 'sorry' even though I'd done nothing wrong. I am writing this more for myself so I can be aware not to apologise when I don't need to. Essentially I'm just venting. lol.

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1628

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1628
by Angharad

Copyright © 2012 Angharad
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Greeks Bearing Gifts

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A different take on a well-known classic tale.



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Bailey (The Name)

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Got to wondering about this while reading here recently.

Anybody know how the first name 'Bailey' got its relatively recent start? The U.S. 'baby names' site (http://www.ssa.gov/OACT/babynames/) shows it reaching the top 1000 girls' names in 1983 and peaking in the 1990's. It shows up as a boys' name in 1993.

(Only Bailey that I was aware of growing up was a male pro basketball player named Bailey Howell, born (according to Wikipedia) in 1937.)

Sarah Carerra - 3.05 - Red Rocks Amphitheatre

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The happy, carefree aura that had settled on the venue was now going to be singed by the blackness of hatred. With a single word I would convert all of the positive energy in the amphitheatre into a powerful force that I could direct into one of my favorite songs to perform.

Sarah Carerra 3: Concerto in A-
Chapter 3.05 - Red Rocks Amphitheatre
by Megan Campbell
Copyright  ©2012 Megan Campbell
Released: February 27, 2012


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A Question to the readers of my 'You Have It All Wrong 4'

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I'm Sorry to bother anyone taking the time to read this, who has also been reading my 'You Have it All Wrong four' But i've noticed a sudden drop in the number of people looking at it, and I'm begining to wonder if people have gone off it, or I've just pushed the story line as far as I can?
I would like to get some feed back as to whether or not I should just give up on it, and focus on other stuff instead. I also don't want to keep posting it and taking up space that better writers could use.

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Nifty Writing Aid, Or Laziness Inducer?

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Let's face it, we've all had our off days in writing. Heck, lately that seems to be ALL I've been having.

Given that, some times we just need a little help kickstarting our creativity, right?

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Wyld Fire

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Wyld Fire
A
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Universe Vignette

by Saless


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