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Almost completed new short story

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I have "sort of" completed a new story and universe. The working title is "Here Be Dragons", I am unsure if I should give it a few days or post "as is" so to speak and make any changes based on your suggestions.

Happy New Year,
Sunwolf

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could use some help with editing

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I'm a very slow person, that fine sometime I type faster then I am thinking and will really mess up a line or story in a heartbeat. I also have problems with memories, mainly due to age (over 60 young) and brain injuries. However I enjoy all I read here and often wish to post an idea or story that I was thinking about. I also have total forgotten how to write as I was taught back in my jr years of school and collage so any help would be great.

Thanks

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Sarah's place takes a battering

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This is a video of what the weather has done to Aberystwyth, home of Sarah's university in 'Cold Feet' and 'Sisters'. At the end of the video, you get a look at the hill they go up in the panoramic railway.

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-25604697

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Christmas Twins ~ 9

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This is the story of my twin and me; two siblings so closely bonded that we would do anything for each other. It all started a few months before Christmas…

~o~O~o~

Saved a ton of money on SRS

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I always thought that Sexual Reassignment Surgery would be out of reach for me because of the cost. Thankfully that problem was solved and I was able to get a majority of the surgery done at no cost at all. Thanks to my job, while delivering the papers last night I froze my balls off. Now, I'm half way there.

Brr.

I'll be here all week.

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Questions about a human hair braclet of all things

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I've heard of jewelry and bracelets made from human hair before, but I have no actual experience with them. I know they were popular during the 18th (maybe 19th) century, but a lot of people have never even heard of them in these modern times. I don't ever intend to make such a thing or wear one, but I'm thinking of using one in my story. The tale itself is set in a dystopian future Earth where most of humanity has been enslaved by a malevolent race of aliens.

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Havens Salvation Chapter 1 Finding Home

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Ann McLaren
When James meet her at Hadrian's wall.


Havens Salvation -1
Finding Home

A BLESSINGS AND REDEMPTION STORY.

Editorial salvation by djkauf

Creative Consultancy by

Bailey Summers,

My wonderful, funny, insightful and talented girls [ Anna 12y] and[Crystal 9y]

Ms Mary Adelaide Wilkinson [ my mother who dragged me all over the back roads of Colorado bringing those historical souls back to life. ]

Teha Kendi Actress Playwright Director Screen writer. Mother Best Friend, Wife, and the first person to give my writing a good review.

With out all of the efforts from the above this story would never seen the light of an audience.
Misha Nova January 3 2014


Introduction

Phaedrus The Elder

As sleepy little towns go, Haven was about half way between Cat nap and Rip Van Winkle. Unfortunately for the residents it was slipping into Rip Van Winkle more everyday. Sleepy was a tourist attraction, comatose was a ghost town. The town residents are not lazy or stupid but rather ham-strung as to how to solve their problems.

Masks Chapter 31

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Masks Chapter 31

Chapter 31

*Before…

Add that to Mark making apple pie…yeah he made pie and Rob and Will making hot apple cider with spices in the slow cooker.

Dad kills the some of the lights in the house and Mom puts on the radio from the stereo in the den and stuff and we all settle down for a big Saturday evening supper passing food and dishes and talking as the music plays on.

*And Now…

Acting Like a Girl -- Part 1

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This is the story of a theatrical acting opportunity that was so unexpected that it was too good to pass up. A role of a lifetime for our High School thespian may just turn out to be the role for a lifetime.

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Transgender Cinema: The Fuller Breast Man

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Erin's FULLER BREAST MAN Story Challenge

Transgender Cinema: THE FULLER BREAST MAN
In which the titular character makes a clean breast of things...
Film review by Laika Pupkino

THE FULLER BREAST MAN is an odd movie for several reasons, but perhaps the oddest things about this old black + white comedy is that it was released at all, especially in 1957 when it was fairly taboo to even saying the word "breast" in films. It stars Bob Hope (and then Eve Arden) as Chester Buxley, a door to door salesman with a suitcase full of products from the Fuller Breast Corporation, which as the name implies sells a bustline enhancement product. But unlike that junk you see advertised in the back pages of magazines their stuff actually works- a formula with magical properties that makes bosom of whoever drinks it swell almost instantly.

Debriefings 11

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Debriefings

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Anam Chara

Along life’s journey we each encounter those events where all that we know, all that we do, and all that we are may change. But even as we approach such events, we don’t always notice their markers until we look behind us and see them for what they were.

One boy is about to learn that he has already passed such an event, and nothing will ever be quite the same…

The Angry Mermaid 103 or Y Morforwyn Dicllon 103

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Drustina gets involved in a war of attrition with the Viking invaders of Hibernia by plaing a game of 'Cat and Mouse' amidst the various islands and rivers that comprise the estuary of the river Shannon. She achieves a spectacular success at the little town of Askea where the island crossing and rocky gully proves to be a perfect place to set one of her cunning traps.

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The Island at the town of Askeaton where the battle was fought. Though Drustina's fight predates the castle and the present abbey.

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River Deel in full flood. A dangerous and treacherous river.

Reflecting in a Network

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I sit, joyous, alone in my little cottage, in quietude and peace. It took 4 hrs before I could breath without pain from my back and that was OK. Artifacts if a life fully lived but no need for an organ recital. I feel so connected with you all; participate in your pain and joy and I do feel with you. I am supported by networks of trans friends/allies, another network of LGBT friends and allies and a very strong small network of families. Thank you all, you bring me peace and joy and I hope I reciprocate. You all truly have my love.
Joani

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Writing resolutions

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I don't necessarily do New Year resolutions every year, but I found myself looking over my records of my writing in 2013, and thinking about how I could improve, and found myself making a whole passel of writing-related resolutions, some vaguer and more tentative than others.

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Jack and Jill by Trudy - 8 - Jill and Melanie Go On

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Jack and Jill, by Trudy — 8


Jill and Melanie Go On


By JessicaC

I tell Aunt Marti about dancing with Jeff and his interest in dating me...
“I hope you won’t be surprised when the idea looks more attractive.”
“...You'll probably enjoy him showing you a nice time... going on a date could be fun.”
Mel feels things slipping, but convinced he can handle it


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The same story in two different papers.

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The Daily Wail does the usual dirty trick of using irrelevant material in a the tragic story of an astonishing accident, where a large Red Deer stag charged a group of people in a driveway and unfortunately badly injured one of them. A chance in a million. incident.

http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-2531577/Woman-paraly...

or in the Guardian:

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I'm Back

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I'm done being stuck in my rut and back to writing. I have decided to put the DRU on the back burner though....well soon as I finish up I Bump Back and Are You a Good Witch that is. Misty's story comes first, I posted the fourth chapter of it today. I'll move onto Kelly from there. After that I have a few Non-DRU ideas I've been actively brainstorming and working on.

So I hope everyone bears with me for now :)

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Hi

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Hi Brother's & Sister's.I just thought I'd let u know that this morning I had to have Oral Surgery & when they released me around 11:30 am I got a big surprise.My Mother,Father,& Little Sister were there to pick me up & Take me home.My Mother & Little Sister will be staying with me & Jessica until I'm better.

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Changing Sam - The Changes Continue.

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Changing Sam—The Changes Continue.
by Angharad

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Has anyone heard from Lilith Langtree lately?

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I've been going through some of my older unfinished stories and reading them lately. I came across one from Lilith Langtree called 'The Soul Does Not Perish', it's a well written modern day D&D type story. There were 9 chapters of it posted by Lilith and then nothing. I've not seen anything posted by her in a while and was wondering if anyone knew if she was still writing??

Blossom

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Of Paths To Take

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Of Paths to Take

by Zylux

This is a story that begins with a journey in the mind down a path to a point of divergence where the reader will be free to choose down which path he or she wishes to continue. But there is more to it,for there is a second theme at work in this story. This second theme has its roots in ancient cultures where it is believed that a divine force/deity will led/guide a person into the future, one set by the direction a person has chosen or has been influenced to go in. In this group of stories, a version of this belief manifest it's self in the form of a female antagonist called Lynn. This force/deity appears in all five continuations but in a form and capacity it deems best suited in which to entice the traveler down to what waits at the end of the path selected.

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