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Uh Oh!
(or Dougie's Lament)
I wished upon a distant star
For long awaited change
Myself be rearranged
By orb so far...
In a flash my face was smooth
My breasts had grown
Penis went to parts unknown
The altering did soothe
But even changed by that sun
My life was disappointing
Even with fair anointing
Transformation was no fun
For in wishing upon that star
I failed to reckon though
Since no matter where you go
Unfortunately there you are!
Some advice to my erstwhile brother?
If you want to be a sister
A miss instead of mister?
Be someone else…or don’t even bother!
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LOL! Nice Start To Melanie's Challenge!
[email protected] Go for it Drea!!!
Love And Hugs,
Jonelle-Elise(Always Bailey Summers' Cuter Half!);)
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What a cute little and
What a cute little and wonderful poem story all rolled into one. Definitely a most worthy contender. :) Jan
And the first is in!
Thank you, Andrea, for taking me up on my challenge.
Melanie E.
Oh, Dougie!
Right on! My sentiments exactly.
To me, the essence of transgenderism is that not only does a new person dwell inside of you, but potentially a better person.
It makes little sense to fight such a hard battle to become a new being, if you don't like her anymore than your old self.
When I read about what some TGs go through for their inner selves to manifest, I feel deeply moved & sometimes ashamed by my own lack of courage. So many of you are really like jewels, hidden in the uncut rock, but willing to accept the chisel so you may scintillate your beauty to the world.
The Rev. Anam Chara+
Anam Chara
Uh Oh!
Good advice when making a wish.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
interesting poem
it sounds like transformation was a mixed blessing in this case, at best.
"Treat everyone you meet as though they had a sign on them that said "Fragile, under construction"
dorothycolleen
This has a great message Drea, but...
I disagree with the ending. We must all be who we are, even if that means becoming what most men see as a sex object. I have said many times before that being a woman is an attitude, a discipline, a way of life. First in order to be female from a male body, you must have the feelings and thought patterns of a female, or else you will fail miserably. If you don't have female feelings and thought patterns, and you are sick and tired of being or even living as a male, then I do agree, be someone other than a woman. Being a woman is only for the stalwart people who have the courage to be who we are, so if you don't have that courage, then apparently you are not proud enough to be who you so much need to be, and that in itself is a tragedy.
"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."
Love & hugs,
Barbara
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."
Love & hugs,
Barbara
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Uh OH, uh Oh!
Ain't it the truth!
Ole
We are each exactly as God made us. God does not make mistakes!
Gender rights are the new civil rights!
On the Way
RAMI
It looks like Andrea is on the way to complete all the story categoies.
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