Bars
Some days they capture or imprison
preventing, stopping, barring
And some days they fail to protect
stares, questions, invasion
Some days they keep me safe
preservation and vouchsafety
But some days they fail miserably
Misunderstandings and assumptions
Am I the only one?
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Thank you 'Drea,
ALISON
'but you are not the only one as you know,not by a long shot.Beautiful and heart warming.
ALISON
Probably Asked By Millions
There are millions who don't even know who or where to ask the question.
Portia
Portia
behind the bars
no, you're not the only one. Been there, done that. Finally starting to get out of the cage ....
hugs, sis
Dorothycolleen
There are the bars imposed
There are the bars imposed by others. There are the bars we impose upon ourselves. They are the same...kind of... They seperate us from the outside world, no matter who imposed them. They are not as strong as they appear to be. I understand, I think, maybe not. At any rate, it was a nice poetry. I enjoyed it.
I Read This On The Wrong Assumption
I thought it was going to be about places where you can get a drink!
Sorry, 'Drea, for being facetious, but if it cheers you up then maybe some of those other bars will fade away,
Joanne
Think about Chocolate Bars!
Think about Chocolate Bars!
Just to add a lighter note.
Kris
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Kris
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Bars can be good
They're what keeps Patrick McGoohan's face from flying right out of your television- CLANG!!
Well shit, I guess it really CAN happen here..,
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