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Through the years: Troy's Story part 15

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“Yeah, I know that now. I was young and stupid and I messed up big.” Rachel said. “But I understand, at least I think I do.” She patted at the seat once more, this time Tracy sat down.

“How? I barely understand it. I...I just want to feel right.” Tracy said. “I used to think that being Tracy was a release, the chance to not be Troy.” She shook her head and looked at her feet. “Now....hell I hated the fact I felt that I needed to be Troy when I was here. I can't wait for the weekends where my Grandfather is out of town so Tracy can be out.” Her eyes misted up and she just sat there.

“Hey. No need for the tears.” Rachel slid closer and slipped an arm around Tracy.

Tracy leaned into Rachel. “I don't know what's wrong with me.”

“I do.” Rachel replied. This caused Tracy to look up at her. “You're finding yourself.”

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Too technical?

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I suppose this can be a generalized question as well, but I do have a specific example this time. Is it possible to use descriptions that are too technical in nature to make sense to all but a few readers?

My specific example is for the next chapter of my story, Open Your Heart. In it, my character describes his first time actually having a glove fit like a glove. My character is a major geek and describes the experience as such:

I bought a ladies watch last night

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Well, last night, I gave myself a belated birthday present. I used the gift card my brother had given me for my birthday, and bought myself a ladies watch. I also bought some foundation and cleanser as well. Just wearing the watch last night at work was enough to lighten my spirits considerably. That's a very good thing.

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Hot as Death Valley?

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Not quite, today in Forth Worth TX, on my birthday, It was 110 deg F for our friends on the other side of the pond that is 43.333 C. Death Valley CA. recorded a temperature of 114 F or 45.555C. Tomorrow is suppose to be hotter here. Anybody got a spare bucket of ice.

Paula

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I am not a boy!

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Once upon a time there was a little boy called Jeremy, but that was a silly name because he was really a she in disguise and her secret name was Chloe...

I am not a boy!

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Susan Brown

Angel



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just found out

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Just found out that the group I work for is getting rid of my job on the 21st of August. Not too sure what to do, but I'll figure something out

I hope

I'll try to keep up on Troy's story, but if things get tight I offer no promises

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1429

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1429
by Angharad

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Why I haven't been around as much

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Just thought I would let people know. We're still going through some personal issues. My work schedule has changed and I'm trying to spend as much time as possible with my kids before my son goes to Afghanistan in a couple of months.

Because of the change in my work schedule, I rarely have enough time to devote to writing as I'd like (one reason you sometimes see typos in my work is that I'll try to write as much as possible in a short time and know real private and personal place to save them).

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Big Busts - The Real Thing?

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I was frustrated as an author when I first started writing on Fictionmania in 2002 that I couldn't find the kind of products which would transform my male characters into realistic-looking women. So, the Big Busts shop was born, and I filled it with my own fictional items which I developed in that and subsequent stories.

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Norfolk Broads

Norfolk Broads.
By Angharad.

For Trish–happy birthday, sweetheart.

What d’you buy the person who has everything? Antibiotics. Yes very funny, but that wasn’t my dilemma, it was a little more complicated than that.

A short time ago I had my twelve year old nephew come to stay with me. He’s my sister’s boy, and to say I wasn’t exactly looking forward to it was an understatement. In short, he’s a nightmare–aggressive, arrogant, objectionable, untrustworthy, dishonest, lying little toad–just about sums it up.



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Somewhere Else Entirely -30-

The rest of Garia's guardsmen turn up and she begins training them in earnest. Later the gang go and check out Morlan's quarters, becoming horrified by what they find and realizing that a serious cleaning job is called for. Cue semi-abortive visit to Mistress Yolda and some lateral thinking...

Somewhere Else Entirely

by Penny Lane

30 - Morlan's Laboratory



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Morgan 2

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My muse has been kind. More of Morgan's first day in High School.


The rest of the day I got more odd looks and the occasional question from other kids. Obviously word was spreading.

It was mostly girls with the questions. And I was indeed getting tired of the same ones over and over.

The looks seemed fairly evenly split between guys and gals, though more of the guys tended to have the looks that implied trouble in the future.

A few of the girls seemed to figure I was ok, in spite of my oddity. At least they were willing to talk to me in spite of it. One was in several of my classes. Christine (call me Chris) Watt. We'd gotten to talking in the first one we shared and had compared schedules.

She came up to me in the hall as we approached English class (which I knew we shared).

"So, I hear you're a guy?"



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The app to end all apps

The app to end all apps
By Kerry Brown

When the phone salesman said they had apps for every need I should not have doubted him.



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Happy birthday to me

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today 2 Aug. 2011 I turned four score and seven minus the order that Arizona was admitted to the union, plus Julius Ceasar's big day in march plus the (maximum number of strikes in a game of bowling subtract two and divided by 2) years old.

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A very quiet night at work last night

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Well, last night was a quiet one at work. I don't mean we weren't busy, because we were very busy. But because the people I normally talk with during breaks weren't there, and I ended up feeling rather lonely and isolated. Ah, well.

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WALKING WOUNDED

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Not to make this sound like a bunch of out farts but I am having surgery agin this wednesday 8/3 having my right hip replaced so it will match the left hip the good point about this is if I die in the woods they will know who I am by the serial numbers the bad aprt is it is bad news a the airport I set off so many bells you would think I hit the JACKPOT in Vegas and then a trip to the little room for a strip search WHAT FUN when they find my panties --- see you all the beginning of neaxt week as I am coming home from the hospital THANKS to everybody for being my friends -- LOVE YOU ALL -- RICH

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Through the years: Troy's Story part 14


“So no Tracy?” Shelly asked.

“No, and I told her it'd be okay.” Maggie sighed.

“It that why he was so glum?” Shelly glanced to the door, making sure it was still shut.

Maggie nodded. “Tracy was so lively on the way down here. I think she talked from home to Tracy, the town, where she changed. Once she changed, Troy was miserable.” She shook her head. “Maybe I shouldn't have let her be Tracy for the ride.”

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1428

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1428
by Angharad

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For My Princess: Part 6

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Arabella had overcome many of the challenges she had faced and life was settling into a routine. Then Helene's grandmother came to visit and shook things up.

The countess and Helene walked hand in hand, at the princess's behest Arabella followed behind her, as did the entourage carrying the countess's trunk which they deposited in her chamber before departing.

She stared at Arabella who was unsure of what she should do.

"I have dismissed everyone, please leave us and go about your business."

Helene giggled. "Arabella is not a servant, she is my best friend."

"Then she is fortunate to have you, dismiss her so that we might talk alone."

 



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On writing

I am very new to writing, so I don't know very much about it. All I do konw, is that one comes up with an idea and tries to convey that idea in words and discriptions. My writing process is usually typing/writing down what comes to my head as it comes to my head. I have not used an outline before (in writing) and I'm not too sure how it helps. Im wanting to increase my writing ability and skills, but I'm kind of stuck. If any of you out there in Interweb Land would like to share how you write, it would probably help alot.

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Ok..... So this is the first time I have posted here.(I have been around TG sites ever since I fiq out why I was diff. used to hang out with all the other girls in P.P. with auntie June a lonnnnnnng time ago) So not sure where this is going :P . anyways I put that I play online games in my sig , I notice a few others also play . So my question is what game to you play and what type of Character do you play and why? ok for me DDO (Dungeons and Dragons online) I love my Rogue Types with the ranger/rogue/monk spash and a pure rogue as my fav's.

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Sarah Carerra - 2.47 - The Indiana State Fair

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sc2.jpg "I want to go on some of the rides," Austin said. I did too. He and my parents had enjoyed the California Mid-State Fair while I was forced to wait on the bus. I wanted to experience at least one of the fairs that I was going to be performing at. This seemed like a good one.

Sarah Carerra
Chapter 2.47 - The Indiana State Fair
by Megan Campbell
Copyright  ©2011 Megan Campbell
Released: August 1, 2011


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Originally a comment for Maggie Finsons Shades of Grey

I had originally posted this in the comment section of the final chapter of Maggie Finson's Shades Of Grey, in Lilith Langtree's Comics Retcon Universe.

After posting there, i realized i had to share this broadly..

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Into the Land of the Pinks: Chapter 4

Into the Land of the Pinks: Chapter 4
Samantha Jenkins


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what's in your purse

Here is a quick little game - can you tell what's in your purse, right now, without looking? In mine I have my wallet, keys, a pair of clip-on earrings, an eyeshadow kit with a mirror, a container with 2 types of blush, one tube of lipstick, one tube of lip gloss, and my carry letter. Anyone else want to play?

QnEZ, LLC

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Plans right now are that Piper and I will combine our business interests into a company to be called QnEZ, LLC. I will provide capital and Piper will provide contacts and expertise to operate CyberBrats Hosting as a division of QnEZ. Doppler Press publishing and BigLittleUs marketing will be other divisions, most likely. (QnEZ is a name I own with a non-registered trademark.)

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1427

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1427
by Angharad

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The Angry Mermaid 36 or Y Morforwyn Dicllon 36.

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A chapter that describes the battle to defeat the Alwan Tyrant of the Upper Nile thus saving Khartoum and Nobatia from invasion.

The Angry Mermaid 36

Or

Y Morforwyn Dicllon 36

Mabina. The youngest daughter and Twin to
Drustan Her twin brother.
Grandpa Erin the twins grandfather.
Giana The twins grandmother
Caderyn The twins father.
Herenoie The twins wise and beautiful mother.
Morgaran The Twins oldest brother.
Aiofe The twins oldest sister. Famous for her beauty.
Tara The twins second oldest sister. Famous for her grace.



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My mom doesnt handle stress well

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And her favorite way of dealing with stress tends to be by giving stress to someone else. For example, when my mother woke me up in a panic shortly after I had gotten asleep yesterday to ask me what to do about the dog, and I suggested a vet and went back to bed, Apparently I was supposed to go with her, despite needing my sleep for my night shift. This led her to say there isnt much feminine about me, either now or in the past. Somehow the fact that I held down a job as a nurse's aid for 10 years doesnt count. Ah, well

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The Vacation

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The Vacation

Eric thought he was alone in his grandmother's house.

His mother, older brother and grandmother went to the store to buy food for the Thanksgiving feast.

His father took his younger half-sister and his stepmother to the movies.

He really didn't know why he had the urges he did. And seeing his mother's dress on the floor in the laundry room was a temptation. He planned it out right, just like he had dozens of times before.



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Into the Land of the Pinks: Chapter 3

Into the Land of the Pinks: Chapter 3
Samantha Jenkins


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Through the years: Troy's Story part 13

A frown appeared on William's face. His voice was a whisper again. “I have been pretty bad to him, Vance too. Hell, I'd be surprised if he doesn't hate me by now.”

“He loves you. He's just afraid that you'd punish him for this.” Maggie said.

“A few months back, before mom called me on it at her place, I would have. But I'm trying to get better.” He squeezed his wife once more. “So, no letting on that I know. I think I can do that.”

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My dog had to be taken to the vet today

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Well, my dog had to be taken to the vet today, and it turned out she had an infection in a gland in her rear. She's stuck wearing the cone thing, and will need pain meds for the next ten days, but it could have been worse.

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1426

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1426
by Angharad

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Searching for a story

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I was sure that I had read a story here called "Jill's baby" and there were multiple parts. (I think there were three) I don't recall the authors name. It had not been completed yet. So I went looking to see if more chapters had been posted.
Much to my surprise I couldn't find any of them, let alone a Title page or any authors that may have written it.

Can anyone help here I'm pretty sure it was on BCTS that I read them. I also searched a few other sites but without any luck.

Let me know if anyone has a clue that I could use to trace this story.

Thank You!
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Writer's Block

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I'm a bit more than half way through writing a novel - 63,000 words so far - and I feel like I'm treading in molasses. I've written less than 3,000 words in more than a month. Yesterday, I wrote ONE SENTENCE! What's so frustrating is that I know the story right up through the ending. I just can't find the words. If anyone out there is wondering why I haven't posted anything lately, it's not because I've gone away. I think my muse has taken a sabatical, or she's just enjoying tormenting me. The story I'm working on is part of the California Saga series.

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Capitalisation advice.

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Some advice that was sent to me recently which explains itself succinctly.

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From a Teacher

In the world of hi-tech gadgetry and communication, I've noticed that more and more people who send text messages, and emails have long forgotten the art of capitalization. For those of you who fall into this category, please take note of the following statement...

"Capitalization, is the difference between helping your Uncle Jack off a horse, and helping your uncle jack off a horse." Is everybody clear on that?

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Into the Land of the Pinks: Chapter 2

Into the Land of the Pinks: Chapter 2
Samantha Jenkins


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Need another pair of eyes

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I am working on Ch 2 of "I am NOT Mystique" and I need a beta tester.

Someone who knows Lilith's CRU and can spot my CRU continuity violations before they Jump the Shark.

Someone who also plays a MMORPG would be good too.

I'm torn on this one because someone who doesn't play might have trouble understanding the story and I want even a non-player to get it.

Any takers? :)

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Through the years: Troy's Story part 12

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“And you're worried that you're doing something that may hurt him later?” Shelly asked.

“Yeah.” Maggie choked on her reply. She wanted to help her son, but this had been a growing fear. She didn't want him being a mental wreck in the future, something he could blame on her.

“I see. Does he do it because he wants to be a girl? Or does he get some form of enjoyment out of the dresses? Maybe sexual pleasure.”

“He's only eleven. He doesn't even know about that yet.” Maggie groaned. “At least I hope he doesn't. I'm not ready for my baby to grow up that soon.”



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Oh for Gosh Sakes FM!!!!!

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Who REALLY cares?

A few months ago one of the "writers" on this site asked if anyone minded if he rewrote their stories and published them under his name.

I stated flatly I didn't want him to go near mine and to my knowledge he hasn't. Of course I don't read his stories all that often so . . . when a tree falls in the forest????

However -- a whole gaggle of authors told him they didn't mind at all if he doctored their stories. To a confused person what sort of license did that provide for "rewriting"?

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'Neath Quicksilver's Moon

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As many of you know, Jaye is very ill, although I haven't heard from him in a while. At his request, I'm working to finish his story, retaining as much of his vision for it as my poor skills can manage. I have no information other than this to offer, nor any way to contact him, and can only assure you that his stories will be finished (in fact, that last two chapters of this one have already been written, it's just a few in the middle that are missing)

Levanah

Levanah

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 1425

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The Daily Dormouse.
(aka Bike)
Part 1425
by Angharad

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Purchase of servers and progress on rescue plan

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Just spent $2300 for purchase of four servers to be new homes for BigCloset, Stardust, Fictioneer, Sapphire's Place, TGFiction.net, TG LIbrary, Tuckerspawn, Storysite and at least a dozen more sites. These servers will be the new homes for the next few years of these sites and will also be a lilypad for as many of Bob's sites as we can get moved before Lani has to shut down Bob's internet accounts.

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