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Horror for Some...
There once was a boy who suffered no joy for he lived in a world without magic;
He longed to be a girl, but alas in that world, he remained who he was; it was tragic.
Horror for Some...
There once was a boy who suffered no joy for he lived in a world without magic;
He longed to be a girl, but alas in that world, he remained who he was; it was tragic.
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Andera
Short, and bittersweet, This can be a drabble, too.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Couplets...
...are a sadly overlooked verse form. This one is well done with an interesting internal rhyme in each line in addition to the one tying the two lines together. Also, very good expression of your theme, pulling all the way through the emotion and its cause, and reiterating the emotion again.
Spasibo, milaja!
-Liz
-Liz
Successor to the LToC
Formerly known as "momonoimoto"
To me
ALISON
'that is what we used to call,many years ago,a limerick,and in some quarters is considered an art form,although in past years were mainly risque.But 'Drea,as is her wont,makes it into a nice,romantic little piece like no one else can .Thanks,'Drea.
ALISON