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Revisions and Retcons

I've been going back and reading through some of my previous work. A few glaring mistakes stood out to me that I corrected asap. Then I started noticing little mistakes. A wrong pronoun here, or the wrong use or spelling of a word. Before long I felt like changing a few things in the story overall. It got me thinking...

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Brand NEW Book on Kindle

I've posted a brand NEW, NEVER BEFORE read on here book to kindle called A Light in The Darkness. Its only the first part of the book, 10 chapters but I'm REALLY excited about it. Its been a LONG time coming. I started it months ago and struggled for a while to get it done. I plan to post the second part in a few months time after this.

Here is a direct link to the store page, I'm sure someone more capable than me can clean this blog up a little better *crosses fingers* I'll also post a look at the cover too :).

Thanks in advance,
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Need reviewer for novel-length story that's in work

I have a collaborator (you know who you are, and you're doing a great job!) who's helping write a new story - it's in work when I find time. Not sure if I'll try to publish for revenue (earn a few $$$) or publish it serially here.

The problem I have is that sometimes I get a little too verbose, and I need someone who can read and then say "this section or paragraph is not needed" or "tighten up the long, boring dialog" or "why don't you narrate it instead of doing the longer dialog thing?" Also any obvious "WTF? This could NEVER happen!" bits.

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Better

Hey everyone,

Good news today. I am now officially off antibiotics and bedrest. I can breathe again, the cough seems to be gone, I'm not exhausted all the time, and my lungs and airways both sound good. So I can now get back to writing rather than spending most of my time in bed doing nothing but driving myself slowly crazy with boredom. I'm hoping that next week I'll be able to get back into my regular posting schedule, or at least close to it, though I am still trying to take it easy as I do that so I'm not getting sick again.

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I am sorry

I was so very wrong, I am so sorry. I understand why people ask for kudos and comments now. It's so depressing when you have tons of reads and no comments or anything.

I didn't realize how upsetting it feels when you work so hard, research like hell, make sure to not be racist in your depictions of monsters, even do tons of research. Even doing things like the EXACT temperature that was there when it was that time period and people still don't care.

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The Fall of Kruhl - Sight Unseen

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The Fall of Kruhl - Sight Unseen

By Daniel A. Wolfe



When Agent Van den Broeke makes use of her abilities in the park, the answers to so many mysteries are uncovered, but new, more troubling ones arise and a dark specter reveals itself.


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Some bonus media for "Jasmine's Last Wish"

Whatever talents I have, they don't extend to the visual arts. But I do sometimes like to have something to work from, to help visualization. An artist named Jirla Vinse Jonatan Väätäinen (http://www.jirkavinse.com/) has done a series of images of Disney characters as real people. Relevant to the story:

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The Huntress Chronicles Heavy Editing

For those that like my story or care. I heavily edited the first 3 episodes of The Huntress Chronicles. I needed to put them more in line with my vision. I did not like the way I told them and needed to fix a few things. I hope that doesn't put you off, I know going back and reading isn't fun but honestly you don't have to. I did change some things but they aren't huge enough to warrant a reread.

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Reversal Rings

        Reversal Rings 3 -- Lost and Found
        by Morpheus, as are the following two

Steve, depressed and overweight, living in the doldrums of an inescapeable life, finds the ring that was previously dropped by the 6yo girl who found himself in 14yo Jamie's body. Putting it on, he finds himself in Ross's girlfriend, Shiela.

This is quite a positive development for Steve. Shiela, once she tries calling home and hears her own voice, decides that she never really was Shiela but instead was always the overweight slob Steve. So she decides to get on with his life.

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Just posted up a new chapter of Warriors Way....post comments!

Just posted ...Warriors way chapter 8...bad Penny part 1

Post comments on the story and guest appearances that will lead to other stories soon!?

have fun reading people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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New Year, new problems.

Hello out there,

I hope everyone's doing well.

I've been a bit more depressed lately than usual so I've been throwing most of my spare time into a mobile game. I generally only do that when it's really bad like don't want to participate in the real world bad.

Last year I was able to harness the depression and focus it all into writing and I'm having a hard time doing it again.

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Looking for a story

Looking for a story about a young man who pretends to be a mail order bride heading out West. Its set in the late 1800s and potentially involves three medallion of Zulo. Also potentially an Anon Allsop story but I cannot for the life of me find it...
Thanks for the help!

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Story Updated

Some of you will notice that an update has appeared to my latest short story, "Meetings in Moxgo".

This is because the original contained a number of minor errors which, although they did not detract from the tale, were a cause for annoyance. Thus, I have changed a few minor matters which required changes and tweeked a few others.

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Gilraen and the Prophecy

FREE

I Came
Book 1 of Gilraen and the Prophecy
is FREE for you to download from Kindle.
Sunday, January 12
Monday January 13

https://www.amazon.com/Gilraen-Prophecy-Came-Jaralii-Chronic...

Why waste the weekend, when you can enjoy this 5-star rated epic fantasy romance gamelit?

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Cheerleader 10: Sophomore Winter

Sophomore Winter, the Tenth book in the Lee Corcoran series, follows Lee Corcoran, who has completed his freshman year in college at the University of Michigan. His life does not follow the typical male athlete path.

While the book is written to allow a reader to enjoy it without all of the history, if you want to understand all the characters and dynamics in their lives, reading the previous nine books is the only way. Long-term threads and relationships tie the books together. These books primarily follow Lee and his best friend Darby, a girl.

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Mindful2

Mindful2, The Follow-up to Mindful is finally on Amazon Books, Kindle. Search for 'Mindful2 by Beverly Taff'.

This is the complete novel including the final chapter.

I'm thinking of a possible follow on titled 'Mindful3' because I did leave a narrow opening to expand the story but I'm still deciding in what context and theme the story can go forward.

Beverly.

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Search mechanism

Big Closet Search button

Whenever I am searching for a story and try the the search button I get the message ERROR 502 Bad Connection. Can anybody explain how I search for a story because there does not seem to be a search button where I can type in the title and get the story up.

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Audio Books, be warned

Received an email from a company who supposedly promotes books for authors and publishing companies who don't have the means or manpower to do it themselves. There are Book Fairs in Germany and India among many others where the larger publishing companies, and the book store chains bid on the book, bid on owing the writer's rights to all his her stories, legal right to distribution in a certain area, a nation, or world wide. The choices are endless and of course so are the prices the bidders offer for each selection.

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The Fall of Kruhl - Family Ties

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The Fall of Kruhl

By Daniel A. Wolfe



After awakening in the hospital Amy’s past comes back to haunt her when she receives an unexpected visitor.


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Leaving Uranus

I’ve been posting once a week for the last seven months or so, and soon I’ll post the last chapter to my Uranus story. Then I’m going to take a week off. You’d be surprised, but the Uranus story has taken a lot out of me.

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Another Microsoft Lie.

I have this file called "ideas" and I free write there to see if anything comes of the present idea. So, today I was working there and then I realized that what I was writing was far too BDSMish. and explicit. So, I took a nap and when I got up, I still felt that way, so I deleted that part of it, about 4 pages of smut. HMPH !

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resting

Okay so I've had a shitty month. First I had a friend die, then five family members in a fire right on the heels of that, and last week I found out about another death in the family. Combine all those emotional blows with the busy holidays, catching a cold, not being on my meds, me working hard to make sure everyone else was having a happy holiday while my own sucked, and people coming out of the woodwork and going out of their way to make me feel like shit... well the inevitable happened.

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What do to with a short story trilogy

When I completed writing “The Best Damn Thing” I thought I would just set it aside but only a day later I had the start of a continuation of the storyline through the eyes of another character.
And then today, I wanted to go further with a third version.

So the three are:
The Best Damn thing. —Michaela Leigh
Sweet But Psycho —Anthony Cox
Good For Me. —Randy Cox

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At it again; looking for a story perhaps a decade old

It is eating away at me, ugh I hate when this happens

I am looking for a story, I cannot recall the demographics (title, date and or author)

A guy is abused by his sister & mother, but only by the mother because the sister is manipulating her into 'punishing' him for abusing 'her'.... which is complete bs, with feminization (not surprising right?)

What few details I do remember and some may be a bit 'mature'.

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His Inconstant Desire - New Chapter Posted

Connie's humiliation continues as she is dressed in feminine finery by her step-mother and sister.

But what are her father's plans for his new daughter?

And what of Connie's friends back at school, have they heard what really happened?

The story is beginning to wrap on layers of complexity, much like the three petticoats they put Connie in. :)

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A SUPERLATIVE fanfic Superman Story! (non tg)

This is an incredibly well written story from a very talented author on another site. I do not claim any ownership or credit for it other than having been led to it by another writer.

I am in the midst of re-reading this story and I am astounded by how well written it is and I hope these words will lead some of you to go to it, read it and then comment to the author.

IMHO it is more than good enough to be a movie script and should be the next superhero movie. The title is 'Veritas" and the author is "ShayneT"

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