The Huntress Chronicles Heavy Editing

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For those that like my story or care. I heavily edited the first 3 episodes of The Huntress Chronicles. I needed to put them more in line with my vision. I did not like the way I told them and needed to fix a few things. I hope that doesn't put you off, I know going back and reading isn't fun but honestly you don't have to. I did change some things but they aren't huge enough to warrant a reread.

Basically I changed it so it's obvious Monique is talking to us as if we are there physically, aka telling a story. And I made Jeremy obviously a 4channer, not an otaku or anything else. I always intended him to be a 4channer.

I fixed it so Owen is listed as an otaku but thought to be a weaboo which is the one that has the more mean people. Otaku in my experience have always been kind, accepting, and loving.

I changed some dialogue between Monique and the Flesh Aberrant, and some other small things like having another interaction with Principal Davis in episode 3, also adding another Tail to Kiyuri so she is now a two tailed fox girl.

I'm almost finished with a special I made to explain Rose's birthday December 25th if you remember. Then I'll HOPEFULLY have episode 4 ready by february. Sorry it's taking so long, I really wasn't happy with the past three episodes and wanted to make my vision more clear.

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A Re-Viewing

Honestly, I took a look at the first chapter when it was posted and decided it wasn't for me. Couldn't tell you why, my brain is foggy from the doctor changing around my anti-depression meds.

But I'm hopefully stabilized for now, (at least my anger flashes have faded), and with this mention of your rewriting perhaps I'll have another go at it.


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It's okay

No pressure darlin, you do what's right for you. I know no one likes my story and I'm okay with that. My friends do and that's what matters to me. It's a very weird, mysterious horror story and lots of people might not like that. I always give proper content warnings though, even if no one reads it,t for the few who do, I want to give them a horror story, but not traumatize them

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