Jasmine monica's blog

I cant figure out how to organize my stories better

Submitted by on

Blog About: 

Author: 

I am trying to create title pages for my various stories
I have created a title page for the revision to the Prophet

https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/book-page/81980/prophet-revision

Click Like or Love to appropriately show your appreciation for this post:

I have an issue with my story that im not sure how to solve

Submitted by on

Blog About: 

Author: 

I wanted to tell two paralell stories and I tried that in the first version and it ended up to become a mess that many readers told me that it confused them.
So im considering tell them in two separate separate tales with two different titles of a dark edwyn and a good edwyn thats allied with the light

Click Like or Love to appropriately show your appreciation for this post:

I am asking for some advice and help for the conclusion of my tale the prophet

Submitted by on

Blog About: 

Author: 

For those few of you who read this tale, I hope some of you can offer advice
If you have kept up with it you can tell its reaching the conclusion. The forces are set up, the edwyn in the first time had gone totally cruel and a despot almost like Saron the dark lord lol. Hes even giving the other kings a crown that forces them to obey his will

and the edwyn in the other time sees the danger and has been alerted to the other edwyn wants to murder the goddess and they have to stop him

So its alll set up for a final battle for the universe and save the goddess

Click Like or Love to appropriately show your appreciation for this post:

The Prophet

Submitted by on

Author: 

Can someone tell me if it's a good story
I'd like a good in depth review of what is good. What isn't and how to make it better

Click Like or Love to appropriately show your appreciation for this post:
Subscribe to RSS - Jasmine monica's blog