Can someone tell me if it's a good story
I'd like a good in depth review of what is good. What isn't and how to make it better
The Prophet
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The Prophet
I liked it. Interesting story. One thing I would like to see is him not being so abrupt and direct with the mother. Maybe he could have made more subtle moves. Thwarting their plans while playing the long game. Still, I liked it and I am looking forward to more.
Jessica Marie