For those few of you who read this tale, I hope some of you can offer advice
If you have kept up with it you can tell its reaching the conclusion. The forces are set up, the edwyn in the first time had gone totally cruel and a despot almost like Saron the dark lord lol. Hes even giving the other kings a crown that forces them to obey his will

and the edwyn in the other time sees the danger and has been alerted to the other edwyn wants to murder the goddess and they have to stop him

So its alll set up for a final battle for the universe and save the goddess

I plan on having the timelines merge in to one and the two versions of Edwyn to sacrifice themselves by merging. The dark Edwyn realizes what hes doing and sort of agrees to sacrifice himself for the universe and for the sake of the goddess. They link hands and cast a spell to merge and merge into the timeline making only one or perhaps one kills the other, I am not actually sure but they merge into one time and one edwyn

and then it starts with him as a child loving his sister

but how can I have that happen and not sound forced or cliche