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Scenes From a Kid's Life - Group 6: Piranha, Pirouette, Party

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Ordinary events in the life of an unordinary child who discovers the universe in the usual way, by growing up in it.

Scenes from a Kid's Life

Group 6: Piranha, Pirouette, Party



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to edit or not to edit... pt 1

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The whole... to edit or not to edit... idea. It's a funny one and as I'm a wee bit precious about my 'babies' I've sort of steered clear to now. Being somewhat of the freeform let it flow school as opposed to the sit and proof and edit and proof and edit school it's sort of interesting to try the different approach.

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Dialogue convention

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The last writing class I had was back in the 80's and then I read an article by Piers Anthony, I think. It was his position that the he said, she said convention was too cumbersome and suggested only doing enough of that to identify who is saying what. He suggested that we double space lines where we switch from one character to another.

Carlotti's Way - Engineblock

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Carlotti's Way
Engineblock
by Edeyn Hannah Blackeney
Copyright 15 December 2007

I was awake. I knew I was awake, because the pain told me so. It is said that you don't feel pain in your sleep. So, if I was feeling this, I must have been awake. I don't think I wanted to be awake.

I opened my eyes. Nothing changed, so I held a hand in front of my face. Well, I tried to hold a hand in front of my face. My knuckles encountered something rather solid, and I still couldn't see what was going on. I closed my eyes again. If there's no real difference between closed and open, may as well keep 'em closed and keep stuff from getting in them, right?



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The Red Coat

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This is a story for all of us who know that Santa is real...
 
The Red Coat
By Susan Brown
Angel


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Mom back in the hospital

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They sent her over from the rest home with a temp they couldn't get down but the doctors at the hospital don't seem too worried and Mom is in good spirits and actually a little less confused than she's been being. I've got a cold so I don't dare get too close and I'm running a temp myself, a mild one. They're giving her antibiotics and intravenous liquids and will keep her for at least a couple of days. I'll go over in the morning to check on her but I think she's going to be fine and back in the convalescent hospital soon.

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I need some help

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I am enjoying working on my Alicia story but I have ran into a problem outside of my preview of experience big time.
You see, I plan on this pretty soon after a few chapters to turn into a courtroom drama as i hope those reading can tell from the police interrogations.

My problem is this, I have no experiences in this area and not even enough to fake it.

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Changed by Aliens

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Changed by Aliens

by Gwen Brown



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Home Alone. Something weird is happening!

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Strange things are happening. It's not Halloween. There isn't a full moon. Nasty beasties, as far as I know are not roaming 'out there'.

But I'm puzzled and perplexed. Something is not right with the world. Things may not be as they seem.

Why?

Well, Home Alone Book 2 ~ Moving on ~ Chapter 7 has had no less than 941 hits, but and this is the strange bit, Chapter 8 has had 1001 hits!

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A wonderful story. Healing a princess.

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I must admitt that I hesitated to read Healing a Princess because it is not TG. However, if I had not read it then I would have missed out on one of the best stories I have seen in a while.

Sure, there are some other stories that I follow, installment by installment like a panting fan.

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The mother of all bad boy to good girl stories

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Bahuchara Mata is a Hindu goddess. She was a daughter of a charan. She and her sister were on journey with a caravan when a marauder named Bapiya attacked their caravan. It was common practice in charan men and women if overpowered by their enemies, not to surrender but to kill themselves. Being a reason for the shading the blood of charan was considered heinous sin. When Bapiya attacked caravan, Bahuchara and her sisters announced tragu and cut their breasts. Legends tells that Bapiya was cursed and became impotent. The curse was lifted only when he worshiped Bahuchara Mata by dressing and acting like woman. Wikipedia

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Humorous fact about "The Wedding March"

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While I am a confirmed "head banger rock fan", I also enjoy many other kinds of music, except old Country, trancer, and electronic trash.

I was recently exposed to a live performance of Bach and found it really interesting. I have loved Handel's Messiah for years.

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Ending Stories

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Lately I've been kinda wondering what makes a story feel like it's come to a satisfying end. There's a couple of stories I've written now that I had thought of as complete, but some people seemed to see as the first chapter in a series. Anyone have any thoughts on what it is about the end of a story that makes it feel like it's actually ended?

The Christmas Message (revised)

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Kathy and I received a letter in the mail form her friend, about the loss of her son in the middle-east.
It had this poem with it.
I felt it needed to be shared....

The Christmas Message

Written by a U.S. Marine stationed on Okinawa, Japan



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Healing a Princess...10 (River Bend West)

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     The crewmember on the port side was twisting his pole and holding it almost straight up and down. Rikki and another crew member, got down on their knees and hauled the body up onto the deck. They rolled it over to find a woman’s dead eyes staring up at them in horror. A stab wound was just above her heart.

“She’s dead.”

Healing a Princess

Chapter 10 - (River Bend West)

by Anistasia Allread

Warning: This is a Non-TG story



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Another Star Wars Scenario

Another Star Wars Scenario

by shalimar

Please don’t throw too many rotten tomatoes at me for this one.

Finally, Luke Skywaker was captured and brought to the Emperor in loose chains.



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Accidental Resonances

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Has anyone had an element of their fiction make an unexpected connection with real events?

In 'Midnight Angels' Jess paints a white rose on the tail of her aeroplane... officially it would have been red but she is from Yorkshire and a red rose would never do. When it's copied to the other aircraft it makes the squadron very easy to recognise and earns them a nickname.

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Gay or Woman

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I used to hate men with a lethal and dangerous venom. Worse, yet, I was one and thus hated my self in with a homicidal anger. I never wanted to be friends with one, though there were several who were friendly with me in the work place. I did not make a good friend to men. In spite of all that, if anyone, men mostly, asked me for help, I seldom turned anyone down.

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Heavy Traffic

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Lots of visitors lately, so that's why the front page sometimes changes to a simpler layout; it's a way of getting a little more speed for those on dial-up when the site is busy. Interestingly, it's not so much that more people are visiting lately as, although that's up, too, but the larger part of the traffic increase is due to more people looking at more pages each visit.

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Dolly Daddy - Chapter 1

A brilliant inventor suffers a an unusual accident and needs to get to the local store to acquire a part needed for his invention before he can return back to normal. His young daughter innocently offers to help. Deciding to accept her help starts off a chain of events leading to the incredible adventure of the dolly daddy!

Dolly Daddy - Chapter 1
Copyright 2007 by Heather Rose Brown
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Hmm...

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Hmm... its been a few months and I haven't written a lick of poetry...
It must be due to the fact that I haven't really had anything major go on in my life...
I feel those creative juices flowing however and I'm getting that itch to write something... Bah... I'll get around to it eventually... maybe try my hand at something bigger than poetry *wink*
Hope I put out something soon!
~Dannielle

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Acceptance

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Hello everyone! This is my first Blog ever. I'm a 30 MTF TS. Today I came out to my mom... *happy sob* S-she said "I known for years, and I love and accept you!" *cries some more* We talked and cried for almost a hour!*sniffle, happy sob* I really love her sooo much!!

Huggs,
Laura

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Shoes - in German!

I'm so excited! Saphira kindly offered to translate my story, Shoes, to German! It's now posted on the German TG fiction website, Tor der Trá¤ume, which translates to something like Gate of the Dreams. The translated story can be found there under the name Schuhe, as well as below.

Schuhe
Copyright 2007 by Heather Rose Brown
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Utterly overwhelmed

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That's what I am by the warm welcome and response to my first posts. I've a few friends who've been supportive (and probably exasperated by my insecurities) but it's so nice to be sure that 'views' isn't translating into 'read the first lines, no sex, moved on'. :)

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Small Changes

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A man accused of a crime is on the run. His world is now reduced to that of derelict, facing starvation and cold. A chance of fate ends with him finding a can of Hugglebugs containing experimental nanites that had been destined for destruction. In his hands he could be holding salvation or a nightmare. Dare he use it, unknowing of its contents?

Small Changes
A Hugglebugs story
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Prudence Walker


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Dig-Dugged?

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I think we just went through a massive storm of people accessing the site, for about half an hour we had huge numbers of visitors. Perhaps it was a misbehaving crawler or something the site went down twice in half an hour. If it was a crawler, whoever owns it must have fixed the problem. Hope, hope. :)

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The Continued Existance of Characters and Their Worlds

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As with everybody, a story teller has many paths he can travel. However, sometime you reach a fork in those paths where each seems as bright or dim as all the others. How can a choice be made about which to next travel?

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Hello

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Well here I am barely an hour after finding this site and sure that I'll commit some dreadful faux pas (if I haven't already).

'Scordatura' was written a few months ago and was the second story I ever completed - though I think there's enough there to expand it... though it's mostly about violins with a few frocks thrown in. It's been posted elsewhere before now, and fairly well received.

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Gaby Book 5 Chapter *13* Tenshi No Koromo

    
Gaby Book 5 - Bits
Chapter *13* Tenshi No Koromo
by Maddy Bell


Maddy Bell is selling her works in book form at Maddy Bell's Book Shop and has Gaby Character Dolls for sale. Please Visit!


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Exhausted

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I'm spending most of each day at the hospital or running around doing errands. Not a lot of juice left for doing stuff.

While on the way to the hospital today, I got rear-ended at a stop sign. Second time in a month.

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Altered Fates Hawaii Five 0- A Woman’s Work is with a Gun

Altered Fates Hawaii Five O - A Woman’s Work is with a Gun

By Danielle J

 
Based on a teleplay by Glen Olson and Rod Baker

 
This story is dedicated to the late Leonard Freeman, creator of one of my favorite television shows, Hawaii Five 0.
 
Author’s note- I’ve been toying with the idea of doing an AF Hawaii Five episode 0 for years. One season seven episode, A Woman’s Work is with a Gun, was best suited for making a few TG modifications to. The trouble was, I hadn’t seen the episode in years. That’s till I recently got a copy of it.



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Jump Rope

Sometimes, acceptance can be found in the most unexpected places. The last place I ever would have thought to find it was on the school playground. Instead of being terrorized by bullies, for a moment, I experienced joy. The drabble below is a glimpse at that moment.

Jump Rope
Copyright 2007 by Heather Rose Brown
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I must offer an apology...

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I know what you're all like when you get your noses into a story you like and how you can get snotty (with good reasons too) when they end up sitting unfinished.

I have such a story that has one poor lad (or is that lass) sitting on a ship in the middle (metaphorically speaking) of the Atlantic.

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Healing a Princess...9 (Sick)

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     ““You don’t wanna hear me ramble, you must have things to do.”
     “Actually, Monyka, I am through with things to do until we reach River Bend West.” He looked down at her taking in her strength and her beauty. “Right now, I would like nothing more than to hear about your childhood. Please continue…

Healing a Princess

Chapter 9 - (Sick)

by Anistasia Allread

Warning: This is a Non-TG story



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No bitching for me.

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There are several stories that I have been following for quite a while; probably the same ones that the rest of you follow. There are a couple that I just can not sit still for.

I was about to write a note to one of the Authors, pointedly encouraging them to get to work. Then I began to remember how many stories I have hanging in the freezer.......

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The Doctor, II

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The Doctor, II

 
By Melissa Tawn
 
Identical twins raised apart, both of whom turn out to be transsexual -- what can this mean?



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A Walk In The Mist - Chapter 01

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“I have been waiting for you” She answered cryptically “and I would like to listen to you play some music. Would you please?” She said with a smile. What is she, some kind of stalker? But then how would she know I would pass by this field or even stop because I saw the fire?


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Chapter One



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Madam Martinique's Finishing School - Part 4

In this chapter, Billie is faced with some hard choices. Will he continue wearing his sister's dress and put up with people assuming he's a girl? Will he wear some of the boy clothes he's gotten from the commissary? Is there a third option?
 
Madam Martinique's

Finishing School

Part Four

Copyright 2007 by Heather Rose Brown

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