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Looking for reviews and help with TG sci-fi story on another site

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I've been working slowly on a story over at Fiction Branches on Sapphire's Place. I had the basic idea for this sci-fi story universe some time ago, and I decided I could shoehorn it into the "You Are What You Wish" storyline, and then take steps to minimize the magic wishing stone's impact on my chosen storyline.

Rules Are Rules: 23. Jinxed!

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"What's the problem?" she repeated, almost in a shriek. "I'll tell you what's the problem! What if you fell and split your silly head open?"

"But I didn't," I protested weakly.

 

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Charlotte's Tale part 7.

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“I don’t know. I don’t know.” I screamed, and fell to the floor sobbing. “I’m not a real girl, I don’t know……..I don’t know.” I wanted to die, there and then. I felt so miserable, so awful. The confidence I had been building up after years of living miserably had been shattered. Shattered by the one person I thought I could always trust.



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NTTS?

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Ok, let's have a little 'Non-Contest' Contest.... How many different names can you all come up with using the abreviation for the National Tractor Trailer School, or NTTS as it's commonly called?

I'll be going there starting tomorrow. Yup, I'm going to be going to school to become a 'mother trucker'.... LOL

Much love.
Toni

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How Novel Is It?

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What with everything in my life right now, there's no way I could take time to administer voting on the novel contest in a timely manner, therefore I'm extending the deadline to 11:59 p.m. PST, January 6, 2008 in the hope that things will be calmer and more predictable for me by then. Remember, I'm doing this for my convenience, not yours. :)

Healing a Princess...14 (Road to Crossroads)

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Tonya swung her leg over Komyn’s neck and slid out of the saddle, trusting Rikki to catch her.
Rikki’s hands wrapped around her waist as she slid towards him Her skirts brushed against his knees while her bodice inadvertently brushed against his chest. Her arms slid around his neck for support as the scent of her hair filled his nostrils with vanilla and a hint of cinnamon. Instead of easing her to the ground, he turned with her in his arms and deposited her on the top step of the carriage.
“Thank you, Captain” Tonya smiled.

Healing a Princess

Chapter 14 - (Road to Crossroads)

by Anistasia Allread



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The Nostalgia Train

The Nostalgia Train

by Maggie O Malley and shalimar

After we tried some of the normal rides in the amusement park Eric and I saw a ride called the Nostalgia Train and were curious what it was all about so we went to the information booth connected to it and found out.



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One of the big issues of traveling is that sometimes my only access to BigCloset is via a PDA mobile phone. When I'm in 3G area, the mainpage isn't too bad to download, but when in GPRS it does seem to take its time, especially with all the graphics and formatting.

One thing that some sites do is implement a mobile version which formats better for these devices.

Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~4

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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~ 4

By Susan Brown

In which I find out what is expected of me ~ meet Nancy ~ get useful with a needle ~ find myself in peril

   
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Exodus International

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When I first began to discover myself, I had some dealings with Exodus International and they just made me feel like killing myself. Is anyone aware of any statistics regarding them. Do they drive the suicide rate up? It would seem so.

Thanks

Gwen Brown

Please message me directly, I need this information as quickly as you can send it.

Rules Are Rules: 22. Good Comic Material

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Dad shook his head. "Your Mr. Bryant told me that in case we were in witness protection, our cover had been blown. I told him we aren't, but of course he doesn't know what to believe. How in the world do you get into these messes?"

"I don't know," I protested. "I don't do anything!"

 

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Oops!

Oops!

By Allison M

I peeked round the curtain and watched mum's car pull out of the driveway, I'd managed to convince her that I would be perfectly alright at home for an hour or so; she was only running a few errands after all. And besides, I was 14 now and 'all grown up.'



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A quick message

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Part three of my story Hell yeah it hurts has been sent to Holly Logan for editing.I'm still experimenting trying to post my story here but I'm just not able to copy and paste outside of my documents or office 2007.It's frustrating that I can email it to anyone with office 2007 but I can't post it.Hopefully soon I'll get it figured out and thanks for all the support and to anyone who has dared to

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Elizabethan Language Fun !

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Hello Ladies:

After a conversation with my estranged son, I have walked around for two days with tears in my eyes and finally I decided that I had to do something to pull myself out of the pity party.

Well, I have discovered Elizabethan Language. It is so waaaay cool.

So, if any of you wish to address me in Elizabethan English, I would be terribly pleased !

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SecondShelf Test Site

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Bob Arnold has prepared a test site for making sure that BC will run without problems on a new server with updated infrastructure software (LAMP). Please, take a look, read a few stories there and help us test it. You can't create new accounts there and only editors can post new material because new posts at SecondShelf will all go away when we re-install it later in the week. If you find problems, come back here to TopShelf and PM me or Bob. :)

Modern Dwarf?

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Edeyn A dwarf. I'm talking a bona fide, Tolkien dwarf, just walked out of my office. Short, had the build, a full beard, the scottish accent... but she was wearing pink hotpants, stilletto heel boots, and a tube top... That was surreal.

I think I totally need to compile a collection of, Tales From the Tax Office, at the end of April. Even if there's no TG content, it could be a durn good read...

Edeyn Hannah Blackeney
Wasn't it Jim Henson who said, "Without faith, I am nothing," after all? No, wait, that was God... Sorry, common mistake to make...
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My Mother Has Died

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My mother passed away yesterday evening in the hospice. My father, my wife, and I were in attendance at the time. Her last couple of days were so hard, that it's truly a relief to see her at peace at last. Now, the focus turns to my father. We need to keep him busy, and engaged, and dealing with the outside world.

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My Transgender Childhood Comix #2

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This is the second entry in what I hope to be a continuing series of single-panel cartoons.

My Transgender Childhood #2
Copyright 2008 by Heather Rose Brown
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Ma'at - Chapter 06: Hypatia

Ma‘at

Chapter 6: Hypatia
By Itinerant

Synopsis: Sometimes there's no way to win, but you must fight to preserve what you can ...



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Rules Are Rules: 21. Laying Down The Law

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"You certainly owe me and your mother an apology," he said. "If you wanted to do this, you should have called and told us before you did it."

"Would you have said yes?" I asked.

"No," he replied. "I wouldn't."
 

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At Last

At Last

A new life brings new opportunities for a divorcé, even three floors up in an IKEA ghetto.



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Short Chapters: 9. The Situation Is Contained

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"It was pale yellow," she recalled. "I could sort of see it through the dress."

"Uh, it wasn't a bra," I replied. "It was a bathing suit."

"Oh," she laughed. "A bathing suit?"

I sighed. How much was I going to have to admit to?
 

Short Chapters by Kaleigh Way


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Rules Are Rules: 20. Guess Who's Coming To Dinner?

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"Anyway," Ms. Tandy continued, "Why are you trying to keep a low profile? You're not on witness protection, are you?"

A student walking by overheard that remark, and his eyebrows shot up.

Rules Are Rules: A Marcie Donner Story, by Kaleigh Way


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Professor Prick 3 - Nikki to the Rescue

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While she was doing my face, Margo was working on my hair; with some curling tongs she put a slight curl on my fringe at the front and bottom of my hair. Lesley finished off my eyes with black mascara before outling my lips with a deep purple lip liner and then filling in the remainder of my lips with a pale lilac lipstick. Finished with my face both girls let me have a look at their creation. Looking back in the mirror was a very attractive seventeen year old–in fact I even fancied myself!

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By Karin Roberts



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She is still alive!!!!

Sigh. Yes I am still alive and kicking for any and all who really gives a rats arse or have even heard of me which I don't think either of the above is likely. I am the proprietess of Beverly's Balcony, which has been around for a number of years in all it's disfunctioning and picturesque glory. I have even been registered user and silent participant of other sites including this excellent one.

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All It Would Take -04- -05- -06- -07-

All It Would Take

Fan Fiction Sequel of the 1986 movie Willy Milly

4 - Can't I Be Both?

By Sasha Zarya Nexus



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Rules Are Rules: 19. Remedial Girly Stuff

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It was a nice evening, and Jerry walked me home. He put his arm around my shoulders and steered me so I could dig into the bag. There was a little coral-colored teddy bear, a brand new Barbie, and a small baby doll.

"Ah," Jerry said, as I showed him my presents, "It's remedial, you know? She's trying to get you caught up on the girly stuff you missed."

Rules Are Rules: A Marcie Donner Story, by Kaleigh Way


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Temporary Hiatus UPDATE Again !!!!

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Ok I did something really dense and wound up injuring myself. I should only be a week to maybe 2 before I am back in the sadddle again. So again there will be a delay between postings. Sorry 'bout that.

Hugs for everyone
Jayme Ann

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The Yellow Rose of the Andes

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The Yellow Rose of the Andes

 
By Melissa Tawn
 
I only regret that I have but one gender identity to give for my country.



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So much for a productive break

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Blwyddyn Newydd Hapus

In my last blog post I was looking forward to a long productive holiday back at home in Wales, with everything I planned to write laid out ahead of me... oh dear.

I've spent the time reading... my childhood favourite Enid Blyton largely, just the school stories though, which has given me an idea for a short homage.

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Do you need your work proofed?

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I have decided to try to be of some help here at BC, so I am going to offer to proof writer's stories for them. I just want to say up front that I am NOT an English teacher, but most people tell me that I write like a professional (Doncha just love to be flattered?), so I would love to help out.

Gwen Brown

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Short Chapters: 8. Diana Turns The Page

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"Look, Diana," I said, "I'm sorry I had to tell you no. I wanted to go with you, and I thought that I could." She started to say something, but I put up my hand. "Wait. The thing is, Miranda is smart. She's fun to be with, and she's the same size as me —"

"Come on, Chapters!" she scolded, "Nobody gives a bleep about your bleeping height!" (Yes, she really did say "bleep" and "bleeping"!)
 

Short Chapters by Kaleigh Way


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Professor Prick

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At that time my name was Craig Adams; I was born in 1971 in a small town just under 10 miles from Glasgow. In my years at Primary school I was very much a loner and I struggled to make friends. Around the time I was due to start secondary school my mother discovered that my dad was having an affair with a woman at his work. They split up and divorced soon afterwards. With all this change going on I decided to implement changes to my own life.

I resolved to become more outgoing and get some friends into my life.

Professor Prick

By Karin Roberts



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Professor Prick 2 - Decision Time and the First Outing

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You see, Craigy, that’s what mates do, help each other out, now are you in or out?”

“Look this would only need to be a couple of times?” I asked.

“Sure.”

“Okay I’ll do it”

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By Karin Roberts



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Rules Are Rules: 18. Big Brother Is Watching

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"Miss Donner?" he asked, "Is your life usually so... exciting?"

"No," I said. "Just since I came here."

"Hmm," he said. "If things keep up at this rate, I won't need to watch television any more."

Rules Are Rules: A Marcie Donner Story, by Kaleigh Way


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Some dark poetry

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Please let me assure you that I am not suicidal. This is something I wrote when I was absolutely dismayed about the revelation that I was transgendered. I think many of you will identify with the feelings.

Once you think your goals are meet
Evil men entangle your feet
You are then beset by strife
They make a shambles of your life

You become that which you feared

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Professor Prick 1 - The Beginning

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“Sorry,” I said resuming my examination of her tongue and chest. Keen to move my examination on my hand drifted to her lower regions, and began to slip up her thigh towards the promised land. Just as thing’s were getting really interesting the peace was shattered.

It was Gordy: “Right, lads, put down who you’re doing and gather round. Lesley’s got a plan to fix Professor Prick for good.”

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By Karin Roberts



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Rules Are Rules: 17. Throw The Doll From The Train

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"Good Lord!" my aunt exclaimed as she looked at my arms and listened to my story. "How many days is it? Not even four days as a girl, and your life is an adventure!"

Rules Are Rules: A Marcie Donner Story, by Kaleigh Way


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Healing a Princess...13 (Calandra)

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“Ambassador, could you show us some of the scientific wonders while we are down there?” Tonya asked.
“I’ll show you what I can, Princess……. Some of our newer inventions, however, are still secret.”
“What are the ladies wearing now?” Marie asked.
“Pretty much whatever they please.”

Healing a Princess

Chapter 13 - (Calandra)

by Anistasia Allread



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Nancy Patterson’s Criss-crossed Christmas Pageant

Nancy Patterson’s Criss-crossed Christmas Pageant
By Jennifer Brock

Nancy Patterson’s Christmas Pageant would be talked about for years, but not the way she’d been dreaming it would. (No offense is intended toward those who are active in their respective congregations.)



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Young Love, Chapter 3

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"My name is --- ah, my name is ---," Lizzie Jane stopped for a moment, seemed to go into deep thought and then exclaimed, "I don't know! I don't know who I am!"

"We are not far from the truck stop. Maybe some food will help. Remember, I will be buying. Oh, by the way, when was the last time you ate?" asked Joe.

"I don't know that, either," said Lizzie Jane. "I know it has not been recently.".
 

Young Love
A Lizzie Jane Adventure
Chapter 3
 
By Billie Sue Pilgrim



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It's Next Year

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Suddenly it is. Just one of those odd things to do with time zones and global positioning. I'm always a bit ambivalent about New Years. It's supposed to be a beginning, new horizons and all. With maybe a pinch of sorrow to farewell the old one and its happenings.

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Rules Are Rules: 16. An F in Home Ec.

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"Nina," I asked, "Do you think anybody knows this is just a doll?"

"Nope!" she replied brightly. "It looks too real."

"But it doesn't move," I said.

"So?"

Rules Are Rules: A Marcie Donner Story, by Kaleigh Way


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How do I post a story from office 2007 to Big closet

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I decided to try my hand at writing a story and I have the first three chapters ready to go.My computer skills are as follows I possess the ability to go online and write a story barely on office 2007 so detailed instructions would be greatly appreciated.Thanks Amy M

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