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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms: Chapter 6: The Prince of confusion

Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

After a hard battle to reach Carthage Natasa and company finally arrive, Natasa still knows nothing of prince Athanas or his plans. The questions are, now here what can they expect to happen? who is princess Apollonia, did she send men to attack and if so why?



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first person, more than one point of view In first person

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I am working on an idea for a new story I intend on posting here, but, yeah theres a but, I think this would really work good in first person POV. But there are several characters that I would like to go into to that are quite important for the flow of the story.
So I am thinking of entering the main characters POV and then changing POV to another to show the scene from another

Is that Possible, WOuld that be too jaring? Has that ever been done before for a published noval

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question about editors

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It has been brought to my attention that my grammar and word usage needs to be improved among other things. Im really glad people are here to tell me these things. Like I know full well I am a very inexperienced writer. These storys you see here from me are the first I ever really had the guts to write out and post. You should see the utter crap I wrote before, It would probably be utterly incomprehensible. They were stories with huge long paragraphs, like one, they were full of run on sentences. But well thats how we learn to write, by sucking the first few times lol.

Feminizer Disease Takes My Body Over - Chapter 8

"Needless to say, all the talk was about me and how I was adjusting. They were really interested in how I got such a shapely figure so quickly and was able to walk in those very high heels. I spoke about my wife helping me and the doctor's help. I mentioned my wife and our shopping trips to Victoria's Secret. The girls were spell bound to hear what I bought in VS. They all wanted to go shopping with me, even go to Victoria's Secret."

Feminizer Disease Takes My Body Over
Chapter 8

By Terry Hansay



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Katie Who Used To Be Ben

I thought you might find this interesting and encouraging. It was posted on AOL and I put the essential link below.

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The Case of the Poisoned Lord

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The Case of the Poisoned Lord

As Chronicled By
John Watson, M.D
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"I Hope You Don't Mind Me Saying This..."

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"I hope you don't mind me saying this," said June, the vivacious, large-bosomed, tattooed, gum-chewing, 30-year-old bartender, looking me over again, "but I think you might actually look," pause for emphasis and hand gesture, "better like this."

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Transcendent - 2: ~A Dark History~

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Jaiden learns about the origin of the Transcendent while Rachel makes plans of her own.



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TG Tropes

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In everything there are certain stereotypes that get played upon constantly whether people intend to or not. Everybody knows that not everyone fits them, but when we think of whatever subject they apply to, they immediately spring to mind. 'Baseball players do steroids,' 'the good guy always wins,' these are just a couple of the more common stereotypes and tropes that people can easily identify from popular culture.

Here's my question: what do you consider to be the stereotypes of TG fiction? There's a ton of them, so they should be easy to list. Bonus points for catchy names for them.

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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms: Chapter 5: The Princess and the Wolf.

Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

With the success of the escape plan Natasa finds herself at a rebel base camp. However, Natasa isn't safe just yet, the princess of Ur still has to make it across the border to the safety of Akkadia. Can Natasa and the maids get there safely and what will happen once they are there?



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Snippet

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I've posted a snippet of my latest project, Forged In Fire, at my TGLibrary site. This is a military sci fi story very heavily influenced by the works of David Weber, so if you like that kind of thing please give it a peek. Be aware that this genre includes violence, explosions and even harsh language!

Oh, and this is a totally raw draft, so please, there is no need to point out the typos. I will get to the proofing in time, but right now I'm primarily interested in overall impressions. On my site you can also find some background material about the story setting.

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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 646.

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Wiltshire
Dickybow

(aka Bike)
Part 646
by Angharad
       
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Subject Line of Comments and Revealing the Story Content

Subject Line of Comments and Revealing the Story Content.

Sometimes the subject line of a comment can give away an important element of the story.

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The Princess and the Plague : 24

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The Princess and the Plague
Part 24
By Anistasia Allread
Edited by Karen J.

Mr. Martin pulled into Tricia's driveway. Erika shifted the flowers once again from one hand to the other. Mentally she skimmed over what was written and sealed in the envelope addressed to her friend. Along with that letter was a card that she had filled out with an apology to Tricia's parents.
     
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Crystal Friend — Chapter 2

Crystal Friend

Chapter 2

By Mildred Ki'Lya

Edited by Sephrena Lynn Miller

 

“You have nothing at all to fear from me, please! I never kill. And, I do not need much blood.” Blushing a deep rose red, she continued lowering her eyes, “It’s not the blood itself I need - it’s a gift of life, the blood is just the medium. That is different from how you are thinking of what the word ‘vampire’ is.”

Ashley was dumbfounded by what Meryl had told her.



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A Different Convalescence

A Different Convalescence
by Janet Harris
 

I clearly remember the first time I woke up as a woman.
"Angela, Angela," the voice was close to my face.
"That must be my name," I thought.



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The Genie of the Lamp

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The Genie of the Lamp
by Janet Harris
 
I know it sounds very corny, but when I saw the tarnished old Arabic oil-lamp in an antique shop,
I just had to buy it



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Transcendent - 1: ~Beginnings~

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Jaiden, a hard worker and an astute student, was being prepared for a life he didn't want. Everyone around him seemed to have plans for his life. But Jaiden wanted something more. He had a deep dark secret. He was not who everyone thought he was.



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Update: Helping T folk

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Well, giggle, I had gotten confused and was not on the panel but in the audience. I did get to make my points in the question and answer period. There was a Drug Company rep there and I am sure that I pissed him off. Had I known before hand, I'd have misbehaved much more.

I did not allow them to take pictures of me because I have been told to behave at my mosque and not speak of it. So, I went there in a knee length skirt, leggings and a loose top sans headcovering so I would not embarass them. I felt half naked. I do not like leading a double life.

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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms: Chapter 4: Truth and responsibility

Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

With the escape plan underway will Natasa and her maids be able to escape the palace, if so what awaits them outside the palace walls? Are the people of Ur really in need of help. Knowing the truth is all well and good but will Natasa be willing to take responsibility?



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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 645.

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Warburg’s
Dinosaur

(aka Bike)
Part 645
by Angharad
       
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Football Girl ~ Chapter 11

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I started undressing; after taking off my top, I felt a strong urge to scratch my chest, but couldn’t get at my nipples because of the strapping.

Football Girl

By Susan Brown



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Transexuality: getting to the cause.

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I think all T folk want to know the big WHY of it all. To test my own understanding of what I just read, it seems that in T folk, we experience certain smells the way that women do. I hope I live long enough to see this so firmly resolved that even the religious perverts who have greviously injured so many of us will finally be SHUT UP !

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Gwendolyn

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Gabycon 2009 - a personal perspective.

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I collected Brian on the way through, and stopped to eat my sandwiches at his house, then we went to play with the traffic. I'd left home at just before ten, and was at Brian's just before one pm. I'd only got lost once as well, which is good for me - I was to make up for it later.

The M42 seemed not too bad, Friday traffic is always heavy on the motorways, and we got held up a few times. Then the M1 near Nottingham was stop go, mainly stop. However, we chatted as we waited for the bottleneck to clear itself. This was almost habit forming, because it happened several times.

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Future of storytelling?

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I've been following the amateur video series, Aurora Trek since it first began in 2006. I wondered if the creator would ever have the time to finish such an ambitious project, what looks to be about a forty minute sci-fi animation. I was relieved to see part three of four came out a couple of days ago, and it looks as though the finish will be something special.

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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms: Chapter 3: A troubled mind

Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

Trapped on an alien world in an alien body Natasa has to decide to take a chance to escape before the false king can get his claws into her. The questions are: is this what dolls feel like while little girls dress them up and can heals and pretty dresses really help in an escape?



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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 644

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World
Doubting

(aka Bike)
Part 644
by Angharad
       
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The Girl in Me -4-

The Girl in Me
CHAPTERS 10-12
 
by Erin Amelia Fletcher
 
Please keep in mind most names, and some specific details, have been altered, to limit the amount of Strife within those associated within whom may come in contact with this.

This is the parody story to my poem I am a Girl, please enjoy...



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Warsop-11

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Warsop-11
A Gaby Fan-Fiction
by Stanman

 

 
Synopsis:With the Bond's moved to Germany, just what do the gang get up to back in Warsop? This story gives a shot at answering that very question.
     


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Scrabble

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"And you're certain it was him?"

"Yes, ma'am. There's no doubt left to be had with all the evidence."

Scrabble
by Edeyn Hannah Blackeney
A story of Murder & Mystery, Noir & Narrative



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Something Feels Strange - 18

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Something Feels Strange…

Something Feels Strange


Yes... I like Tom. He is a good guy and comfortable to be around. Throughout the conversation Laurie has to send me silent signals to remind me to not slip back into boy mode while we talk. I find myself slipping back towards guy mode as we relax around each other. I think Tom likes talking to a girl who acts more like a guy–he is obviously not trying to impress me, just normal guy to guy talk.  It feels good.


Chapter 18: Shopping With The Girls




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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms: Chapter 2: Answers that give more questions

Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

A boy thrust into distant world and transformed into a girl has enough to worry about without having to deal with unwanted male attention. Can Natasa find the answers to whats happening to her and avoid being made a woman against her will by a power hungry false king.



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The Girl in Me -3-

The Girl in Me
CHAPTERS 7-9
 
by Erin Amelia Fletcher
 
Please keep in mind most names, and some specific details, have been altered, to limit the amount of Strife within those associated within whom may come in contact with this.

This is the parody story to my poem I am a Girl, please enjoy...



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Easy As Falling Off A Bike pt 643

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Woden’s
Dangly bits

(aka Bike)
Part 643
by Angharad
       
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What Mother Didn't Know - Chapter 17

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Will I still be able to live here?

What Mother Didn't Know
Chapter Seventeen
The two days before the return to court go by pleasantly

By Barbara Lynn Terry

 



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The Pebble

The Pebble
by Janet Harris



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The Pretenders

The Pretenders
By Ricky
There's a magic in the summer woods, a peace and tranquility that soothes the soul and calms the mind. When mother and daughter meet father and son, romance - and just a little bit of sweet revenge - ensue.



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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

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Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms: Chapter 1: The World turned Upside Down

Legend of the Ancient Kingdoms

Throughout time legends and myths have been passed from generation to generation, many of those legends and myths are untrue but occasionally some are based on the truth, Sometimes the legend or myth is completely real but made to look like it’s made up to hide the fact that it is the truth.



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Harry Potter and the Deceptions of life - Chapter 4: Settling In

Life should begin to settle down for Seph, but how will she feel once the initial rush has slowed and she has time to think?



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