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No Son of Mine
Former boy, now transformed, walks to where her father still lives.
Rings the bell, fights the urge to run away.
Old man answers, still rigid and unbending despite the years.
He looks at who it is, his face a stone mask.
“I told you when you left, you are no son of mine.”
Her heart breaks.
His expression softens.
“But, if you can forgive an old fool, I would be honored if you let me call you my daughter.”
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WOW
If only life would follow fiction I loved it KUDOS RICHIE
Very interesting. Not what
Very interesting. Not what I was expecting.
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May the Stars Light Your Path
Maid Joy
http://i-know-i-know-but.net/
Strangely...
It was exactly what I thought it would be, based on the title. :)
Good one!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Faraway
Big Closet Top Shelf
Where you can fool around like you want to and most you get is some bemused good ribbing!
Children Know Was Good, But This Is GREAT!!!
[email protected] I've got so many 'Daddy Issues' of my own Dorothy. We've talked some; You have a clue what I'm talking about. I've been working on something for my Dad for a while now. It's been very slow going. You've said, in so few words, what I've been struggling with for years.
Thank You!!!
Hugest HUGS,
Much Love,
Always Your Friend,
Jonelle-Elise
P.S. Could You steal a box of Kleenex From Drea's concession-stand?
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No Son of Mine (A Drabble)
Short, sweet, just right.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
Lucky, lucky girl
To finally achieve reconciliation must be a wonderful feat.
Lucky, lucky girl!
Sadly some of us never, never got that chance.
Fortunately we made and found firmer, better friends but it took years to do it.
It's all behind me now and that's were it shall stay!
Nice drabble.
Love and hugs.
Beverly.
Growing old disgracefully.
Love the twist :)
Tee hee hee!
As the right side of the brain controls the left side of the body, then only left-handers are in their right mind!
This was very nice.
you did really good by touching so many people with this.
*Applauds*
Bailey Summers
Awwww. That's beautiful.
Awwww. That's beautiful.
If Only
this could be in real life. Wait! There are transfolk out there that have love, support, and maybe some understanding from their loved ones. The Times They Are A Changing. I'm really one for happy endings, and this did make me cry a little. You wrote this well, thank you for sharing.
"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."
Love & hugs,
Barbara
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
"With confidence and forbearance, we will have the strength to move forward."
Love & hugs,
Barbara
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
It would have been nice...
...but this still is so very possible for many, if hearts are willing to change. Beautiful, sis! Thanks.
Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
put this one on fictionmania
and got a nasty review. Ah, well.
"Let me succeed. If I cannot succeed let me be brave in the attempt." Pledge of the Special Olympics.
dorothycolleen
I was expecting...
... a Bru story, whose title began with this title. Well, it was in spirit, and the twist was as good. Definitely heartwarming. :-) Nice one!
-- Daphne Xu (a page of contents)
That last line ...
... just ... really hit me hard. I can't tell you how much I've wished my dad would be okay with calling me his daughter. Still, he has gotten to the point where he's okay calling me his child, and I know he loves me, so I still consider myself pretty lucky.
I'm very lucky too
my mom accepts me as her daughter