My Super Secret Life…Potentials-3.
My great thanks to Thera who came up with the greater part of this really interesting character.
………………………………................. *Karma….
My name’s Quinn, Quinn Jackson…yeah that guy…poor me right. I know, I know.
I guess this is how things got started and that was as far back as junior high. I was famous. Q-J…the all star basketball star and even then…It thought I was perfect…I thought I was king of my world. Big and strong…I was even good looking and I’ll admit…I knew I was all those things.
I know, nothing new golden boy falls from grace. It’s far from being a new story. I’m sure those of you remember that I was in a car accident that’s left me paralyzed. That the doctors say I should be able to because of the implants they put in but nothing works, I can’t move.
It’s karma.
See my dad was that dad where I was the apple of his eye, the chip off the old block and had been all of my life. I’m not saying it’s his fault but what happen to a kids mind when nothing’s his fault, and he’s been praised all of his life.
Or sees his dad treat his mother like a slave…and she took it…like a good wife, meek and obedient just like dad said how girls ought to be, how the good book and god says they should be.
And I was a chip off the old block.
Girls wanted me, I was popular, good at sports but great at basketball. I treated the girls that I was with like that. It was rape…really it was with me pushing them down to blow me…or taking them.
“What…they’re going to believe you? Not fucking lightly…you were all over me, you wanted to get all over the money.”
I must have said that to dozens of girls. I must have done that to dozens of girls. There was nothing wrong with that…I mean it was just like dad said. “They’re all whores, all of the Quinn. They spread their legs when they want something.”
So…when I raped Julie…I don’t know her last name…I never gave a fuck when I fucked her and told her the same thing I told all of them.
And she cried, she bawled like every other little whore had. I had just zipped up and left and got in the car with the guys. Greg Patton passed me a beer and I guzzled the first one down then the second only slowing at my third and by then I looked up when I heard Scott. “Who the fuck is that?”
I looked…Julie was there…still barely dressed standing in the snow.
In that way that you remember stuff so clearly when it’s too late. I could see the tears running down her face.
“It’s the whore I was just with, just drive around the bitch.”
Scott went to do that not even slowing down and as we passed Julie he eyes flared blue white and an avalanche of snow exploded like from her hand and I seen it…seen her skin shift to icy pale…it made the blood on her legs stand out even more, her hair to bleached bone white…..the anger, the pain, the hate there.
That avalanche it our car and sent us a full twenty feet off the interdistrict overpass before we crashed down fifty feet below.
I was the only one that lived.
It was karma.
………………………………........I remember it was so black…and there were things that were going bump in the night out there…things crying out as lost as I was, as scared as I was and there were growls, screams, demented laughs and giggling even.
Something would touch me or bump me like a shark…
There are no words to really describe the sheer soul deep terror.
~Good…it is good that ye know this.~
~Who…what…?~
~Both…~
There was light and there was this woman in these hooded robes, like the ones you’d see in bible women but she was glowing golden and had these shimmering blue eyes.
~Who are you?~
~I am your judge Quinn, and you have a stain on your soul……you will not pass.~
She started to dim out…
~No!…No!~
I could feel them coming for me…
~No!…please!…anything!~
She stopped and stared at me, then she looked up like she was praying…she got brighter…Nodded.
“Yes…so mote it be.”
I sort of woke when the medical team yelled “Clear!”
But then it went dark again, but like regular sleep darkness.
I’ll skip over the hospital stuff mostly. I’m paralyzed from the neck down, they have said that I should be recovering but don’t get why. My father freaked out, my mother prayed and was a sobbing wreck for weeks.
Then they stopped coming.
It was slow at first and then just one day they just never showed up anymore. And that really tore me apart and I got really depressed…wanting to die almost depressed…I’m too scared of that though…those things out there waiting.
Depression and paralysis led to sleeping all the time…and sleeping led to nightmares…bad nightmares about things that made no sense.
Then one hit me hard one night with this guy…a drugged up gang type that looked high as a kite and he had the doors barricaded in a room in what looked like a room in the emergency department. There was a nurse trapped in there and he’d already hit her, tore her top and she was so scared…
Then I was there? And he was there and trying to hurt her, to catch her and I tried to stop him but he passed right through me….
I tried to scream at him getting between them to maybe scare him. Like he was scaring her…I could feel how scared out of her mind she was…
Then she stepped into me…
I was like sucked into her and suddenly I could move, I could feel, breathe right…He lunged and I moved…okay basketball, he’s trying to get me…I dodge right, the left then right again and he goes right like I telegraphed what I was doing and he goes for it and I let myself fall…drop to my knees instead and his grab misses me and I haul off and punch him in the balls as hard as I can…I’ve boxed, and wrestled and stuff when I was in school so…the hardest shot I can give him is an uppercut smashing his balls. He makes a sick sound and I punch him out and break his nose and send him flying back.
I stare at my…or rather her little hand for a minute. I’m, she’s five two…maybe ninety pounds and it felt like me when I hit him.
I’m a bit wobbly getting up to my feet band the rest of the staff get into there and I’m staring at myself in the glass of the door.
My eyes…her eyes are glowing a soft golden color like that woman in the robes.
I feel dizzy and stagger but I stagger out of her and I’m there again like a ghost again.
I’m not sure why or how but I staggered through tings and people until I got to my room…I was still there but gently glowing in that same kind of light…It goes away when I fall exhausted into myself.
That first time I thought it was a dream.
The second time…it was a black kid…in trouble with the cops and he had a gun…He was so scared…I stepped into him again almost by accident. Made him drop the gun before they shot and killed him.
The third time was the one that really made me sure of all of this, the thirteen year old kid with the carpet knife scared to death about being pregnant…about her dad…doing it.
I got into her…set down the knife…and had to sit…cry…cry because I felt her…not the girl I was possessing but her little baby…her daughter…life inside of us….things rushed together and a nurse and a cop sat with me…and I could touch her mind…her thoughts and feelings and…and even though I was pushed into remembering that bastard molesting me…I did what she couldn’t…
I talked…
I cried for three days once I was down in my body again. They drugged me, tried to make it better but nothing they did helped….I was crying because I really felt what she was too scared to get out herself.
It really showed me more than anything what I had become…who Quinn had been…who I had been.
I wandered around a ghost in the hospital for about a month helping here and there as I could. Mostly, mostly my powers worked with those overcome by fear…but those really out of it like a drugged up guy raging on PCP…I’ve stepped into them and calmed them or stopped them until the restraints were put on fast.
And once I stepped into a car accident victim in shock and kept him breathing…that was hard so I had to think about breathing, make him do it. Lend him my strength…That’s the thing when I take over, my strength gets added to whatever they have.
…………………………..It was late, dark and I was wandering the halls. If there’s real ghosts here I haven’t seen any here. But tonight I see Daystar…yeah the Ark Angel. Christian Stevens and he’s there in the flesh and huge…seven feet tall three hundred pounds of sculpted muscle…and super model looks mixed in…he’d make greek gods feel inadequate. He’s on my floor dropping off a bunch of boxes of goodies at the nurses station and he takes a drink of a take out coffee cup and he look directly at me.
“Hello Quinn.”
Oh…oh shit, WTF he can see me.
I take off and run.
He doesn’t chase or follow me and after awhile I can smell coffee. I’ve never smelled anything before.
………………..shit he’s in my room.
There’s a blur as I snap back into my body.
I open my eyes and he’s there with that Paki…uhm the Indian Mage lady from Paradise City. I ask scared. “What’s going on?”
He’s in a chair and leans forward. “I came to see the golden angel of St. Mercy Hospital.”
“Huh?”
“They’ve seen you when you’re inside these people…there’s a light.”
“Do they know it’s me?”
“Yes, your body shimmers while you’re gone.”
“But they…they’ve never said anything…never turned me in as a freak…”
“They’re hospital staff…and everything you’ve done and helped with here Quinn…they don’t look gift horses in the mouth here.”
“Oh…”
“I want to offer you a new chance.”
“New chance?”
“You’ve heard of Sanctuary? Of Halo?”
“Yes?”
“We want you to come with us there.”
“Me…why…”
“You still deserve to have a life.”
“But…”
“No…you do…we can help.”
“How? I can’t exactly go anywhere.”
“You can project, use this form.”
“But normal people can’t see me.”
“Parvati?”
The hindu lady comes over with a ring. “This is the ring of Seamus Sole, he was a thief that stole things by astral projection.”
“How?”
“It let’s your spirit form gather ectoplasm to take a form…it’s not really solid, it’s not really strong but it’ll let you be there physically in a way. Will you try it?”
“Uhm…okay.”
She slips it on my finger and I can’t feel it. “Try to push yourself out through the ring and the stone.”
It takes me several tries before I’m outside myself again…I’m this thin featureless grey sexless thing but I have arms, legs, fingers and toes…and I can move them…. “Whoa…and I can…I can use this?” My voice sounds strange soft, and androgynous and slightly muffled like through a mask.
“Yes…and go to classes, be around people that will see you.”
“But why?”
Daystar looks at me and stands and takes my new hand. God that alone after all this time feels so good.
“Because you can help people Quinn, because you’re all alone and that’s just wrong. Because you’re sixteen Quinn, you’re sixteen and you deserve to have another chance, you deserve to have someone to give a shit and not walk away…”
He gives me this look that only a dad can have and that honestly I barely ever seen on my own dad’s face.
I’m crying…I can see my body crying and this form’s shaking… “Please…Please…I’m so tired…I’m too scared….Can I?”
He smiles. “Yes…C’mon lets get started and then we can get you home.”
“Home…”
“Yeah, at my place if you want.”
I look at him again and as much as I can feel fear he gives off truth…caring…no bullshit.
“I’d like that.”
Comments
Bailey...
You took a crude idea and made something of it. You took trash and returned a gem. Thank you for the credit but Karma is all your creation formed from the barest hint. Bless you lass...
Nope, you helped too and credit is given when it's due:)
It went a bit long for a character introduction though but I think it was needed for Karma:)
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Very interesting new character
I don't know ho>much input Thera had, but what a cool concept. Almost like DC's character Deadman. From a guy with a great body, but no real soul, to a guy with an inactive body but a soul with the will to help others. Very creative!
Wren
There was some great input as I'd have never even thought
of the concept. But as it got more flushed out *Karma* became more and more developed as a character. There's a bit of Deadman in this I think but a lot of differences too. Thanks Wren:)
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
The Past can-
hang around our necks like a stone. For Quinn that is so true. The very fact he was able to admit he was in the wrong and not blame others for his problem proves he wasn't all bad. He was redeemable. Very nice!
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Grover
Quinn feels that weight Grover a lot...
with what happened when he died but more seeing how he lived and treated people he still grieves over how awful a human being he was. that's something he'll struggle with a lot and it's a good balance/Crux for his powers.
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Julie
I foresee some hard apologizing when they meet again, if she did not let it take her to the dark side and stay there.
great chapter, thanks
Julie will be popping up again in the series.
And I'm not sure just how Quinn will take it. He was a total shit to her but she killed all of his friends in the car and left him like this.
*Hugs and Howls*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Julie?
"I had just zipped up and left and got in the car with the guys." ... "I was the only one that lived."
So he was definitely in the wrong, and as a serial rapist honestly deserved worse than what he got, but Julie killed at least two others. It must be hard on her - being a rape victim, trying to use powers to get back at the one who did it, and killing others. :-(
Story shows definite promise, I'm hanging out for more here! :-)
If you read DC comics
sort of picture a 14 year old Killer Frost that had a hard life before she was date-raped. I'm thinking of maybe some baddie vignettes what do you think?
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
So we feel sorry for the murderess? Not exactly. These are ....
...complex characters and situations here.
Would love to see more.
I *believe* -- as guy I admit it is not easy to fully understand a woman's POV -- I have an inkling of the pain., outrage, impotence a rape victim feels.
That she was only moments before assaulted and he said his line about "who will believe you" to her she lashed out with her new power. She was in shock so a *temporary insanity plea* is justifiable.
She did not know what she could do and killed because of it.
She was not, and I hope will not become a killer. But she did kill.
Just as he was a rapist yet was not. Yes he did it, many times and he now admits what a shit he was, but not as a classic sexual predator or a control/power thing but because he knew no better, at least from what I as a reader have to go on. His dad in many ways is the real criminal with how he treats his wife, how he treats women in general and what he has long told his son.
But I have problems with "he deserved far worse" and other comments about criminals.
Yes eye for an eye is simple and maybe satisfying in the short run but this woman will have to live with killing innocents -- I assume they were just guy pals and not co-misogynist rapists -- and crippling someone for life.
She may be emotionally crippled but physically she is whole and with help can have a life and maybe even love and family.
He is a head on a pillow, likely to die after decades of nothingness but possibly with phantom pain . He is lucky he can interact via his spirit with the world and make amends but it is a poor substitute for life. In many ways it is a better life than the one he was heading towards but did he deserve a life sentence for being an asshole?
This deserves further development. He seems to be learning, becoming a decent person from this though you could argue he has no choice.
BIG Q is what will she do? Will she go on, recover, use her powers for good? Even make amends for her moment of weakness where she killed or will she go down the path of darkness and despair? Will she laugh at him now he is weak and seemingly powerless. Will she be ashamed and stay away from him? Or will she feel remorse and become his friend, make amends as he I hope will do the same for her?
People are complex. Tarring them with abroad brush is easy but wrong. I amit I do it sometimes, thoug in fun or obnly against a fiction person .... I hope and pray!
These characters are a window into that world. What is the nature of crime, of mistakes, of becoming a better person, of forgiveness?
Hope to see more.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
A lot of great points John.
Quinn's situation is both complicated and unique. The event in death, his powers, how he's going to live his life is all going to slowly come out as the story progresses. As for Julie we'll be seeing more of her and maybe even more.
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Quinn
Was given the chance to redeem himself, and has made a very good start on that here. Nice story.
Maggie
It was a very interesting write.
Quinn's very different and I had to think a lot of things through. He's been making a good start and now might just have another shot at living? Quinn's got great internal stuff to write for so I'm looking forward to it.
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Bailey.
Bailey Summers
Very interesting new character
I don't know ho>much input Thera had, but what a cool concept. Almost like DC's character Deadman. From a guy with a great body, but no real soul, to a guy with an inactive body but a soul with the will to help others. Very creative!
Wren
now that's an interesting character.
I love it. Wow.
Yeah there's a nice bit of difference here from others.
I'm going to really enjoy aspects of Quinn.
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Bailey...A Proud Big Brother.
Bailey Summers
A very interesting addition
A very interesting addition to the school with an interesting motivation to be a hero and help people. The pieces of a super team are beginning to assemble.
"Life moves pretty fast. If you don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it."
Karma's a very interesting character and
there might be a team or even teams. Victory see's Halo as not just a superhero training ground but a solution center and school too. There's so much that can be done with the powers they've all bee given. If the rest of the world can get to see that then so much the better.
*Great Big Hugs*
Bailey.
Bailey Summers