I just read chapters 1 to 33 in one sitting. There is a lot of action, but the flow between scenes is natural. The character development is progressive. A little too much sex for my liking, but not done inappropriately. The sex scenes fit in the story. Sci-Fi is dependent upon setting up a new universe, technology, and species. You have done a very good job with that, with a small remote farmer boy discovering the universe she lives in, as we do. This makes it a slow gradual discovery, instead of an info dump. Good Job.
A nobody climbing the ranks based on skills and achievement. I like that. A humble young lady, discovering her body, and new position in the universe.

Keep Writing, Keep Smiling,
Teek