Susan Brown

verbal diarrhoea

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Once again, I have been thinking.

This is a dangerous thing for me and was sparked by a comment made on the latest instalment of Olivia Twist.

Now I have gotten my shameless plug out of my system, one of the commenters (is that the right term?)
Annette said and I quote:

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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~6

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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~ 6

By Susan Brown
In which I am more aware of my surroundings ~ learn about being a young lady ~ meet a strange girl ~ am given a wonderful present

Angel


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Orphan ~ 4

‘You know the rules, no ball games inside. It’s a nice day out there so go in the garden and woe betide anyone who breaks a window now go, not you Tracy, I want a word.’

Orphan
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Susan Brown



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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~5

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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~ 5

By Susan Brown
In which I wake up in a strange place ~ meet an old lady and another ~ realise that my secret is revealed ~ find myself involved in a puzzling development

Angel


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'I' itis, I'm getting better, I think

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I have a confession. it's hard to stand up and admit it, but here goes (gulp)

I have 'I'itis. For those who are not aware of this condition, it occurs where you use I too often and inappropriately in stories.

It started when I was knee high to a little grasshopper. I was doing a fan-fiction based on Jack and Jill, it went something like:

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Orphan ~ 3

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I stood there looking around me. In the distance I could here the shouting of children, girls I presumed as this was a girl’s home after all.

Suddenly, a tennis ball flew through the air and hit me on the side of the head.

‘Ow!’ I said.

Orphan
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Susan Brown



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Orphan ~ 2

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‘Look, Mark, don’t stop thinking about your mum and dad, they are right there in your head all the time. You need to have time to get over them not being with you anymore, but don’t ever forget the nice times. The pain will go, honey, I promise.’

Orphan
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Susan Brown



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By Susan Brown

In which I find out what is expected of me ~ meet Nancy ~ get useful with a needle ~ find myself in peril

   
Angel


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A Festive Revelry

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Will your Christmas be this good?

 
A Festive Revelry
By Susan Brown
Angel


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The Red Coat

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This is a story for all of us who know that Santa is real...
 
The Red Coat
By Susan Brown
Angel


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Home Alone. Something weird is happening!

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Strange things are happening. It's not Halloween. There isn't a full moon. Nasty beasties, as far as I know are not roaming 'out there'.

But I'm puzzled and perplexed. Something is not right with the world. Things may not be as they seem.

Why?

Well, Home Alone Book 2 ~ Moving on ~ Chapter 7 has had no less than 941 hits, but and this is the strange bit, Chapter 8 has had 1001 hits!

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Angel
    
Olivia Twist
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The True Story

By Susan Brown

Chapter 3

In which I see the sights of London ~ Meet Mr Fagin ~ Have a shock ~ Encounter a rather unpleasant man and his dog.


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Oliver Twist ~ The True Story

Oliver Twist
The True Story



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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story ~2

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Angel

Once again my thanks go to Kristina LS for knocking this into shape



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Working Girl OK, OK, You win!

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Due to popular demand (well my cat liked the story) I have decided that in the new year I will continue with Working Girl.

I thought of an outstanding title for it:

Working Girl 2

Pithy and straight to the point eh?

If any of you creative types out there can think of a better title, please let me know.

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Working Girl Final Chapter

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Working Girl Final Chapter

By Susan Brown

Angel

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Now is the time to say goodbye
Now is the time to yield a sigh
Now is the time to wend away-eee
Until we meet again
Some sunny day.........

Goodbye! Goodbye!

We wish you all 'Goodnight'

Goodbye... Fa ta ta ta.. Goodbye!

Peter Cook and Dudley Moore



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Olivia Twist ~ The True Story

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Once again my thanks go to Kristina LS for knocking this into shape



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Working Girl 21

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Working Girl 21

By Susan Brown

Angel

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I was in a taxi on my way to my dinner date with Roger and I was, to say the least, a little nervous. No, let’s not lie about this, I was shit scared.



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All Hallows Eve ~ Final Chapter

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All Hallows Eve ~ Final Chapter

By Susan Brown

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>Part 3



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All Hallows Eve ~ 2

By Susan Brown

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>Part 2



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All Hallows Eve

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All Hallows Eve

By Susan Brown

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>Part 1

The gun was still smoking slightly and was warm to the touch.



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Working Girl 20

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Working Girl 20

By Susan Brown

Angel

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I was accosted by Ronald and Derek the instant I walked through the doors.

‘There you are, what kept you, we were all of a tizzy thinking you were bottling it.’

I looked at Derek and saw the relief on his face as he said that.

‘Don’t worry Derek, I am not bottling it. How do I look?’



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Working Girl 19

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Working Girl 19

By Susan Brown

Angel

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‘Ooh Derek, don’t keep us in suspenders, what shall we do to him?’



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Home Alone Book 2 ~ Moving On

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Home Alone Book 2 ~ Moving On

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Angel

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Working Girl 18

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Working Girl 18

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Angel

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‘Don’t cry, Toni. You mustn’t be upset. We are going to have a great time, as long as you do as you are told. I’m into bondage and I can’t wait to tie you up. Leather and PVC is so nice, don’t you think?’



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Working Girl 17

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Working Girl 17

By Susan Brown

Angel

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As I walked out of the building I felt happier than I had done for a long time. I was finally making decisions on my life and not being pushed from pillar to post by events outside my control.
I walked the few blocks to the office building where I hoped I would be working for quite some time. I took a deep breath and walked through the doors.



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Working Girl 16

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Working Girl 16

By Susan Brown

Angel

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‘What’s up?’

‘Oh God, oh God, oh God!’

‘O hell, don’t go all religious on me. Tell me what’s wrong?’



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Working Girl 15

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Working Girl 15

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Susan Brown

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Angel



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The Stock Take

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The Stock Take

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Susan Brown

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I was a good salesman; well I think so, anyway. I had won the monthly best salesman award on no less than ten occasions in the last five years, so at least a few others must think so too.



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The Dick

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My thanks go to Kristina L S for proofing and suggested changes.

The Dick
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Susan Brown

Angel



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The Diary

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The Diary

By Susan Brown

WARNING

This story includes extreme violence. If you have any problems with this, I suggest that you do not read it.

I would like to thank Kristina L S for proof reading and editing for me.



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Proof reader?

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Hi all,

I was wondering if there was anyone out there who would be willing to proof read my stories.

I have been looking through my previous scribblings and have noted that I am not as good as would like to be, gramatically wise.

I am dyslexic and that doesn't help much as it sometimes makes me blind to my faults and errors.

So if there is anyone who has the time, please let me know.

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Susan

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Working Girl 14

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Working Girl 14

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Susan Brown

1.



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Working Girl 13

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Working Girl 13

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I woke up gradually, coming out of a fog of discordant dreams. Dreams that I was a boy masquerading as a girl just so that I could get a job! It was obviously a dream because reality wasn’t that stupid.

I could hear voices in the distance.



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Helen

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I suppose it started when I was about eight years old.

I put some shorts in the wash basket and noticed something silky nestled at the bottom.



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Working Girl 12

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It's time for the dreaded interview!



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Working Girl 11

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I looked on in horror as Davis got nearer and nearer.



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Working Girl 10

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All new!!!

Working Girl 10

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Susan Brown

Toni is back and still in the dreaded salon! Can she cope?



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The Deep Dark Secret

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The Deep and Dark Secret.

By Susan Brown

It was on Paddington Station in the heart of London that their eyes met across the crowded platform.

Susan’s heart missed a beat when she saw him glance at his watch and then look up at her. He smiled handsomely; his gleaming white teeth brightened her day and most of the platform.

She went wobbly at the knees. He was at least 6-foot tall, wide shouldered, about 29 years old, blond hair with liquid blue eyes. Testosterone appeared to be oozing from his body as he walked over to her and said, ‘Where have you been all my life.’



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Working Girl -9-

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Next morning, I woke up not knowing quite where I was.

I had a hangover. My head felt as if it had been stuck it in a vice and someone was turning the screw. I could hear a hammering noise right next to my head.



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A Christmas Carol

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An alternative to Charles Dickens A Christmas Carol.

I would like to thank Charles Dickens for all the help and assistance in writing this piece.



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Working Girl -8-

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He looked angry, very angry. His little piggy eyes were puffed out. His face was
redder than beetroot. The veins on his bulbous nose seemed to stand out more than
usual and his hands were clenching and unclenching like he wanted to do serious
damage to someone's neck, presumably mine.



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The Change

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I knew it was going to be my lucky night.

I saw her through the smoke, flashing strobe lights and heaving bodies on
the Disco floor. She was sitting alone; just like a cherry waiting to be
picked.



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Working Girl -7-

Working Girl 7

By

Susan Brown

Kindly Edited By Angel O'Hare


As I went through the swing doors of the restaurant into the cold night air, it hit me. I was homeless again and I didn’t have a clue as to what I could do about it.



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Working Girl -6-

Working Girl 6

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Susan Brown

Kindly edited by Angel O'Hare



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Working Girl -5-

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 All new!!!

 

Working Girl 5

By

Susan Brown.



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Working Girl 4

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Susan Brown



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