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I looked at him and my legs turned to jelly. I wanted to sit down but I just stood there, staring at those hard eyes and then at the gun that was pointing with alarming stillness at my belly-button...

Changes

Chapter 62

By Susan Brown

Copyright © 2009 Susan Brown

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Football Girl ~ Chapter 28

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‘Well, Melanie, it was quite a shock to see the headline this morning…’

It seemed a bit bizarre that I was sitting on the famous Good Morning settee, just ninety minutes after sitting in my nightie reading the trash The Globe had printed about me...

 
 

Football Girl
Chapter 28

By Susan Brown

Copyright © 2009 Susan Brown

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Still feeling rather bloated after my á¼ber pasty at the pub and slightly tingly after a goodbye kiss from Abby which would have put us in prison in several countries and been applauded in a few others, I made my way to the police station–a.k.a. Trevor’s house...

Changes

Chapter 61

By Susan Brown

Copyright © 2009 Susan Brown

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Changes~60

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‘Mmm, that was nice, Abby.’

I was worn out, out of breath, but very satisfied.

‘Who would have thought that you could get so much pleasure out of chocolate sauce?’

Changes

Chapter 60

By Susan Brown

Copyright © 2009 Susan Brown

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Football Girl ~ Chapter 27

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‘Susan! How goes it, girl?’

‘Fine thanks. Look, I want to thank you for your support at the TV station.’

‘That’s all right, honey. You have to know what is going on in these situations. Mike is a slime ball and he needed taking down a peg or two. You did me a favour, actually.’

 
 

Football Girl
Chapter 27

By Susan Brown

Copyright © 2009 Susan Brown

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As Dolly chugged up the hill to the hospital, I wondered once again why Candice called me to help her Brian. I wasn’t an expert, I just wanted to be a girl–end of expertise...

Changes

Chapter 59

By Susan Brown

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I stared at the bonnet of my beautiful, shiny car and could not believe what I saw. I had thought my troubles were over and the tricks played by Nigel were a thing of the past. But no, it seemed I still had problems.
...

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Chapter 58

By Susan Brown


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 26

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Chapter 26

By Susan Brown

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The next few days passed in a whirl. I was in and out of my gallery all the time, helping–or hindering–Arthur...

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Chapter 57

By Susan Brown


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After leaving the printers, I went to see Katie. She was with a victim–I mean client–so I sat in the waiting room and read a copy of Cosmopolitan; it was only six years old.
...

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Chapter 56

By Susan Brown


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The Little Match Girl

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The Little Match Girl

by Susan Brown

Loosely based on the tale The Little Match Girl By Hans Christian Anderson (1846)


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 25

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As we approached the shopping centre, I noticed that it was rather busy. We had two cars, one with Daddy, Claire and I in and the other, a 4X4 Range Rover, with blacked out windows with the two security people, Danni and Charlotte in. The Range Rover was in front...
 
 
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Abby’s finger stopped tracing circles around my nipple and I rather wished that I had kept my big mouth shut until a bit later perhaps...

Changes

Chapter 55

By Susan Brown


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Do sequels work?

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A number of readers are saying that I should start finishing off Changes as it appears to be coming to a natural end, as certain threads are closing or have closed. Others have said that I should go into book 2 or some sort of sequel as there are a lot of things unfinished.

I tried the book 2 methods for Working Girl and Home Alone and while they were appreciated, I always felt that the edge had been knocked off the readers appetite.

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Changes~54

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The funeral was a quiet affair, with only my friends in attendance–that is apart from the police inspector who, with apparently little respect for the dead or my feelings, collared me straight after the interment...

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Chapter 54

By Susan Brown


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As I stared at Olivia’s face –at peace at last–I wondered if she had gone to heaven…

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Chapter 53

By Susan Brown


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 24

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Two weeks later, I awoke in the morning and before I even opened my eyes, I was smiling. You see, today was the day that I was to go back and start training with the club and it was the day of my birthday, I was now officially sixteen...
 
 
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Chapter 24

By Susan Brown

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Changes~52

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I looked at David, not believing what I was hearing.

‘What?’

‘It’s true. The police very much want to speak to Olivia...

Changes

Chapter 52

By Susan Brown


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Changes - Warning and explanation

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Please note that the latest Changes episode contains a plot that may upset some people and I quite understand if you do not wish to read the chapter.

Unfortunately, sometimes things don't always run smoothly and although the story is in the main happy and sweet in nature, like real life, something happens that pushes our comfort zone.

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I was unable do anything–she was too heavy for me to lift her. She didn’t seem to be aware of my presence. In desperation I searched about me but the lane was empty...

Changes

Chapter 51

By Susan Brown


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I stayed with Dotty in the big old house for another two days...

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Chapter 50

By Susan Brown


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 23

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With my family and friends, I was ushered through a plain door and into some sort of lounge. It was, I suppose the equivalent of the BBC’s green room used for hospitality, where people could relax prior to broadcasts...
 
 
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Chapter 23

By Susan Brown

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Changes~49

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I looked at her and was baffled. “Sorry, I don’t understand?”

“I mustn’t say nufink, she said I mustn’t.”

Changes

Chapter 49

By Susan Brown


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Changes Double Chapter

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Just to let you know that I have just sent the latest chapter of Changes to Gabi to have a look at and dissect.

It is a double chapter - that is why it's a wee bit late - and concerns itself with Sarah's story.

I hope that you will like it.

Hugs
Sue

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Changes~48

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Later that afternoon, I was feeling much better, so I got up out of that wonderful bed and steadied myself against the bed post...

Changes

Chapter 48

By Susan Brown


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Changes~47

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I wakened to silence. It was quiet, darkish, and I was in bed. As soon as I cracked one eye open I became aware of something strange...

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Chapter 47

By Susan Brown


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I have no control...

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A I sit here in the garret of my castle high up in the mountains of Transyvania, I ran my tongue over my sharpened teeth and await for the night when I can go out and have a bite to eat.....

There I go again letting my characters take over. I start off with a good story idea and know roughly where I'm going with it and then my character, like a vampire in the night comes and takes a chunk out of my well laid plotand does their own thing and to hell with well laid plans.

How often do I do this and why do I let my characters get away with it?

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Football Girl ~ Chapter 22

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As I went for my morning run down by the river, I thought a bit about what had been going on in my hectic life lately...
 
 
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Chapter 22

By Susan Brown

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Changes~46

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Believe me or believe me not, things were a bit quiet for the next few days. Abby wouldn’t let me do much and I spent a lot of time contemplating my navel...

Changes

Chapter 46

By Susan Brown


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Changes~45

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‘I’m Abby, don’t you recognise me?’

I looked at her pretty face and her gorgeous eyes and kissable lips…

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Chapter 45

By Susan Brown


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Changes~44

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Candice looked at the sheet of paper and turned a sort of puce colour. While she was looking, I wondered if justifiable homicide would be the correct plea if I sloshed her around the head with my handbag and broke it...

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Chapter 44

By Susan Brown


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 21

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The following weeks were interesting to say the least. Now that I had made the decision to try and stay as a pro player with Melchester, I felt much better.
 
 
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Chapter 21

By Susan Brown

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Changes~43

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I had hopes of things being fairly quiet over the next week. I really needed to recharge my batteries after everything that had gone on over the previous ones!

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Chapter 43

By Susan Brown


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After congratulating each other on receiving the news that Dawn and her family would be coming to live at the Cove, we grabbed the protesting children from the beach and went to took them to see the cottage where they were soon going to be living. Protests died on their lips as they were as curious as anyone regarding their new home...

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Chapter 42

By Susan Brown


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It was lovely to be able to forget my problems for a while and dive head first into trying to help others. After a brief stop for drinks, we were off to try to find the ideal home for Dawn and Adrian, not forgetting the headache inducing children...

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Chapter 41

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That image of Olivia standing on her own remained in my mind’s eye for ages after we drove away...
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Chapter 40

By Susan Brown


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 20

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The next morning I awoke feeling a bit stiff and sore...
 
 
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My friends kept in the background, respecting my privacy and yet remaining close enough to come if and when needed.

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Chapter 39

By Susan Brown


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You are not going there by yourself,’ exclaimed Abby.

I looked at her and smiled.

‘She won’t eat me; it will be unpleasant, but I have to face her.’


Changes
Chapter 38
By Susan Brown


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I was oblivious to passers by. It was as if I was in a world of my own. I was sure I looked a wreck and certainly felt like one.


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Chapter 37

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Football Girl ~ Chapter 19

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It seemed like forever that I was lying there. The pain I was feeling was more excruciating than any I had ever felt before. My knees were up into my stomach–in a foetal position, I suppose. I could hear people talking but I couldn’t take in what was being said...
 
 
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Chapter 19

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‘Come on, children,’ I said taking my eyes away from Adrian’s rather strange look, ‘let’s go in.’

I followed Dawn who had gone charging ahead with children who had run in after her. I could hear Adrian behind me. I didn’t want to look at him. I was confused and did not know how to take the look that he had given me.


Changes
Chapter 36
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Saturday morning arrived and I awoke to the sound of screeching seagulls and a lovely warm body up close and personal behind me. The fact that neither my partner nor I were wearing anything meant that I could feel her lovely, warm, soft and pert breasts, pressed against my naked back...



Changes
Chapter 35
By Susan Brown


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Football Girl ~ Chapter 18

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The next few days were quiet–well fairly quiet. ..
 
 
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Chapter 18

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I wakened on Friday morning to something wet, rasping along my petite nose...


Changes
Chapter 34
By Susan Brown

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