Transformations

Tight Knit - Volume 1: Part 10

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In the conclusion to Volume 1
Jesse comes to terms
with her destiny, but
will it help at all
in her current situation?

Tight Knit

Volume 1

Part 10

By Taylor Ryan
Copyright© 2018 Taylor Ryan
All Rights Reserved.


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Trust Machines: OTP

Ben and Amanda cosplay as their favorite superheroes for Halloween, and run into some old friends at a Halloween block party. But since the appearance of the Venn machines, Halloween cosplay has taken on a new dimension.



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Doctor Who? 3 - There's a Cat In My TARDIS!

Doctor Who? - There’s a Cat In My TARDIS!

~~by Bobbie Cabot~~

The Doctor has disappeared, but he left his newest apprentice in 21st century Earth to help the humans while he was away – this was Dr. Quinn Valentine.

But she’s having some problems with her TARDIS…



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Doctor Who? 1

Doctor Who?

~~by Bobbie Cabot~~

If you knew about the Doctor and you saw a 60s blue British police call box, you'd probably come to the conclusion that the time-travelling Doctor is around somewhere, trying to save the world from the Daleks again, or maybe from the Cybermen, the Sycorax or the Judoon.

But this time, this isn’t the Doctor. Not exactly…



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Charlie 2 - Charlie's Other Angels

Charlie’s Other Angels

~~by Bobbie Cabot~~

Jill, formerly Charlie, has been a beat cop for over a year. By now, she's had more or less adjusted to being changed into a sexy policewoman by that magical mixed tape. But then, during an almost disastrous stakeout, she finds out that what happened to her happened to a lot of other people, too.



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Charlie 1 - Charlie's Angel

Charlie’s Angel

~~by Bobbie Cabot~~

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Charlie was an idealistic LA policeman fresh from the police academy, out to reform his corrupt precinct. So the corrupt cops in the precinct decide to get rid of him, but in a unique, untraceable way - via a demonic curse. But they didn't count on his guardian angel and a magical mix tape...



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch08

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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Svala

Lief is a Viking, but he's not like other Vikings. He's small for his age and will never be a good fighter. One day while fishing, he finds a gold ring inside a salmon and the Goddess Freyja creates a new destiny for Lief. A new destiny that will change his life forever.



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch07

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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Hell's Belle

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Hell’s Belle

Author's note: This was gonna be my submission for the Halloween mix tape, but it didnt work there, so I am letting it go free as a solo.

The last “normal” day of my life started out like most of them had since I flunked out of college a year ago - looking for another meaningless dead-end job.

Not that it seemed to matter if I found one, my record so far at one place was just over a month.

But my morning’s search online was interrupted by an explosion in my kitchen.



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch06

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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The Collector Chapter 4

The Collector
by
Michele Nylons

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Chapter Four – Initiation

Charlotte 'graduates' and is initiated as an Acolyte. She is presented to the Circle where she becomes immediately popular. Please heed the rating and cautions.



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The Collector Chapter 3

The Collector
by
Michele Nylons

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Chapter Three – Shopgirl

Mary lives alone barely making a substance as a shopgirl. A mysterious lady offers her a second job working nights. Charlotte Beason is introduced to life at Chelmsford and begins her studies which are not what she expected.



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The Collector Chapter 2

The Collector
by
Michele Nylons

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Chapter Two – Welcome to Chelmsford Hall

Mary leaves home after her mother's lover's unwanted advances turns violent. The man who collected Charlotte from under the railway overpass delivers her to Chelmsford Hall and her future life. Note: this story is non linear but you're smart enough to figure that out.



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The Collector Chapter 1

The Collector
by
Michele Nylons

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Chapter One – Catamites and Rent Boys

The story of two young women in 1950s England and their journeys from destitution to redemption through committing themselves to a life of service to 'the Circle'. Charlotte, a young trans woman, is rescued from the streets; Mary, a young CIS woman, becomes her mentor at Chelmsford Hall where Charlotte's indoctrination begins.



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Pool Party 2

Derek was the next guy to arrive. Unlike Jeff, he was a sexist douche. He hung out with other popular guys, but all the girls hated him. They intended to change that. He knocked on the door extremely loudly. When he opened the door he saw some hot girl he didn’t recognize

“Who the hell are you, bitch?”

“I’m Jessica, i’m new to the group. Who are you?”

“I’m Derek. Nice tits by the way.” Jessica ignored him.

“Lets go to the back, that’s where the pool.”

When they got to the pool, he saw that he was the only guy.



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch05

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch04

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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Pool Party 1

Jeff was a nerd. He was very unpopular. Because of this, he was very surprised when he was invited to Emma, the most popular girl’s pool party. He didn’t even consider for a moment that something as up.

The day of, he was very excited. So excited that he forgot to bring his bathing suit. When he got there he realized. He knocked on the door and Emma let him in.

“Hi Jeff!”

“Hi Emma…” said Jeff. He was nervous. Emma was extremely hot and all the popular girls would be here. “I don’t want to be rude, but why did you invite me? It just seems odd to me.”



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Smart hose

Smart hose

My mom says its a good idea sometimes to write down stuff, even if nobody else sees it. She says its a great way to get your thoughts organized, and boy do I need to do that, so here it goes.

My life just got turned upside down, and I'm still processing.

But I should begin at the beginning, as my English teacher says.

My name is James Micheal, I'm twelve, and I live in Sherwood Park, a small town just outside of Edmonton, Alberta, Canada.



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Complete the Look Part 6

They arrived at the restaurant. It was a little Italian place. They both ordered a pasta dish. They talked for a while, and as they talked they found that they had more and more in common. They had the same favorite movie, comedian, and more. Suddenly Adam said something odd.

“It’s like you never existed until the day I met you!”



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Complete the Look Part 5

Erica wasn’t sure what to say. “Should I say yes? I kind of like him,” she thought. She kept thinking. At this point Adam turned away in shame.

“You don’t feel the same way, do you?” he said.

“No, I do,” she said, making her decision.

“You’re just saying that because you feel bad. There’s no way you can tell me otherwise.”

“Well maybe I can show you.” She walked up to him and kissed him on the lips. They began making out. The feeling of a strong man’s embrace on her petite body was incredible. A minute or two later, they stopped.



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Bat Mitzvah

“I can’t believe it’s coming so soon!” said Jeff’s mom.

“Yeah, the service is tomorrow,” said Jeff.

“Do you think you’re ready for your bat mitzvah?”

“It’s a bar mitzvah, Mom. How do you always get it wrong.”

“I don’t know. Let me think of a way to get it right.”

“Just practice! Seriously how are you this bad!’



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Mouikkai Musume, Chapter 08: The Burden Of His Suspicions

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Pillow Talk 6

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Pillow Talk

By
Michele Nylons

Chapter Six – Pine Barrens

Michelle is kidnapped by two Mafia thugs who take her to the deserted Pine Barrens in order to illicit from her everything she knows about where Frankie keeps his cash and how much he has on hand. When they have everything they need Michelle is of no further use to them so she bargains with the only thing she has left to offer.



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch03

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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Complete the Look Part 3

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The next morning, Erica woke up with uncertainty on her mind. She was excited to wear her new clothes, but at the same time had become uncomfortable wearing girls clothing. She decided to wear the clothing closest to her boys clothes. She changed into a new bra and pair of panties, both of which were turquoise. She a pair of skinny jeans, which her ass looked really nice in. She then found a white shirt with the Led Zeppelin logo on it and put it on. Looking in the closet mirror, she found that she could see her bra through the shirt.



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Pillow Talk 5

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Pillow Talk

By
Michele Nylons

Chapter Five – Braciole

Michelle learns that Frankie has been cheating on her with CIS woman Rita Cordova, her nemesis in the Bordello. Frankie has a unique way of bringing his two favorite women together so they can make up. A wiretap sends Michelle on a dangerous errand for the FBI.



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Complete the Look Part 2

“WHAT THE HELL,” said Erica. “That wasn’t me speaking.”

“It was, Erica. I gave you a little bit of a psychological nudge when I transformed you so you wouldn’t constantly resist being a girl. If you really hate it, I’ll change you back, but first, go relax in your room, I have something to do, and then we’re going to the mall.”

“Okay. That also explains why I respond to Erica without protest.”



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Complete the Look Part 1

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One day in the summer, Eric woke up to find that he had no clothing. He hated staying in his pajamas, and he really didn’t want to wear dirty clothing. He remembered that his sister was the only other person home and decided to ask her what to do if she was up. He walked into the kitchen to find she was making an omelette.

“Good morning Alyssa,” he said. “How’d you sleep?”

“Pretty good,” said Alyssa. “What about you?”

“Also pretty good. I do have a problem now that I’m up though.”



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch02

Author's note: Things gets more weird. It's going to take a few more chapters before the big reveal.

~o~O~o~

After a short bike ride I arrived at an empty lot in between two houses. The GPS said that this is the right spot mentioned in the letter. I entered the empty lot overgrown with weeds and got to the exact indicated spot. There were no barriers or fences here. There was nothing much to protect anyway.



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Pillow Talk 1

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Pillow Talk

By
Michele Nylons

Chapter One – Half n’ Half

A corrupt NYPD Vice Squad detective in the mid 1970's is caught red handed and offered an ultimatum by his Precinct Captain; join the NYPD's war on prostitution by going undercover as a transvestite prostitute or face charges of corruption with no support from the NYPD. Whilst undercover Mitchell Clooney is approached by a high ranking Mafia Family member which draws the attention of the FBI. Mitch is 'made an offer he can't refuse'.



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Cursing Curse

Evan cursed a lot. A lot as to the point in scared his friends. His mom was fed up.

One day, when Evan came home from school, his mom decided to put his plan into action.

“Hi Evan! How was your day?” she said.

“Fucking boring, bitch,” he replied angrily. His mom was fed up.

“That’s not very ladylike,” she said.

“Yeah, I’m a fucking guy, of course it’s damn not.”

“Not for long,” his mom muttered. “It’s hot outside, have a drink.”



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The Nigerian Scam - Ch01

In the near future, Andy is looking for a way to earn some money. He decides to go along with what appears to be a Nigerian scam. Things don't go as planned of course.



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The Ark

Jackson was in a mission to save mankind, but a series of incidents made him question his place. The more he questioned, the more he felt something was wrong. Wrong with him, his mission, and even the space ship he was on. The problem was that CLAIRE, the artificial intelligence system could also see something was wrong and was determined to fix things.



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DSLs

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“Hey James, would you ever suck dick?” asked Aaron.

“No fucking way,” said James.

“What if you were a girl?”

“Maybe, I don’t know,” said James hesitantly.

“Let’s find out,” said Aaron. Suddenly James’ body started to change. His waist got slim, his face changed to be more feminine and his lip became plump, and his chest and ass ballooned out. Her hair grew long, and his clothing disappeared. “Alright Jenny, do you want to suck my dick?” asked Aaron, pulling his cock out.



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Thoughts of Thots

Nate was eating dinner with his sister, and began complaining about the girls in his school. “They’re all thots,” he said. “They all post like borderline nudes on their instagrams and vscos.”
“Why are you making such a broad generalization?” asked his sister Jessica. “It’s honestly very rude.” They argued for a while before Jessica said something that completely put Nate off guard. “Why are you so obsessed?” she asked.

“I don’t know, it just pisses me off I guess.”

“OMG, are you jealous of them?! Do you want to be a slutty girl?”



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The Grand Masquerade: part 4

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The mysterious figure from the previous chapter is revealed.



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A Slow Change Part 2

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The following Saturday, Andrew had the house to himself, as both his parents were away at a conference for a week and his sister was staying at a friend’s house. He was just finishing lunch, and after cleaning up, he began to head back to his room to get back to work. As he walked down the hallway, he noticed that his sister’s door was open. As he passed, he saw something in the corner of his eye that grabbed his attention: her closet was open, revealing a lot of her clothing. Suddenly, that strange urge began to grow again, and Andrew walked into Emma’s room.



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A Slow Change Part 1

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It was late, and Andrew wanted to go to sleep, but he needed to get ready in the bathroom. Unfortunately, his sister was busy taking a shower. This was a regular occurrence late at night, and it was extremely annoying. He got impatient, so he knocked on the door and said, “Emma, can you please get out? I’d really like to get to bed.”



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Coyote Chapter 12 Epiloge

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A Whateley Tale

Written by Nuuan



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Ukua'yata Tribe

Hello this is a story that popped in my head and I hope it got out. It is basically a premise for a story that could lead to others or inspire someone to create something with such a theme of a hidden race inside of the population. Hope you enjoy, hugs, Sara.



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The Many Faces Go To War 10

“The Many Faces Go To War: Chapter 10”
By = Fayanora

Chapter Ten: What A Pain

Notes: Sorry for the late update. Lots of things have been colluding against me. Summer heat, dangerous smoke in the air from the forest fires, pitiful amount of inspiration for this story, and the fact I've been working on some original fiction I hope to get published someday. But here we are!



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The Many Faces Go To War 9

“The Many Faces Go To War: Chapter 9”
By = Fayanora

Chapter Nine: Unofficial Self-Defense Club

Notes: Whoops! Forgot to post this last time! So you'll be getting two in a row!

Started putting dates on these chapters where possible, it helps me keep track of where I am in the story. (Something I figured out when writing my original fiction.) Dates are provided by HP Lexicon's Order of the Phoenix calendar.



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Sacculina 1

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Yeah! Yeah! I know I haven't finished 'Heir to a Title' but I'll get around to it when time allows and the muse returns.

I saw this scientific article about a parasite called Sacculina that alters several aspects of the infected host's behaviour and anatomy. In the case of this particular parasite it castrates male crabs and makes them behave and look like females. This causes the male crab to carry and hatch the parasite's offspring just as a female crab carries it's own young.
'Ho hum," I concluded, food for thought.

This story should run to about 2 or 3 chapters (I hope)



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Coyote Chapter 11

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A Whateley Tale

Written by Nuuan



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Tanks For The Mammaries

Originally Posted to BC 2004-11-08

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Tanks for the Mammaries!
By Wholeman



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Atalanta's Story Continued: Reaching Home Chapter 23

I had hoped to post this chapter yesterday but my hip was hurting but the copy, paste, and adding lines between paragraphs takes concentration that when my hip hurts I don't have. These kidnappers have begun to realize in this chapter that they have a buzz saw on their hands. Thanks goes again to Ashleigh for her editing skills which helps me look better and hopefully a more enjoyable read.



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Atalanta's Story Continued: Reaching Home Chapter 22

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Guys this is a short chapter but it seemed like a good place to stop. I have the same flutter of nerves that I had with the very 1st chapter I posted way back when maybe because it has been almost a year. That and I have a brain injury that makes sequencing difficult means that I don't really understand parent child tree relationship works. So I'm liable to get it out of order and have to get Erin to help me. After I get a semblance of a schedule going then I can sort of mimic what I need to do.

I want to thank Ashleigh for pushing through her illness to finish editing what I've written and I also want to thank all of you that wrote and asked about Atalanta and apologize for the sometimes slow replies. I do hope you all enjoy the chapter, story, and the rest of her (mis) adventures as it unfolds. This will be the last book in the Whateley world and I now know the direction I want for her.

But now to this chapter not a lot action wise happens, information is gathered, characters are staged for action that happens in subsequent characters. If the good Lord is willing and the creeks don't rise I'll have another chapter posted no later than Wednesday and another next weekend. The previous chapter has the trio arriving in town with Manny and Atalanta dining with a former contact in General and Mrs Nelson where the girls are kidnapped from the parking lot.



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