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I often see comments about stories written on this site that are little more than a put down in some cases.
The vast majority of the Stories on BC are works of fiction and I often wonder if the person who makes some of these comments knows what the "FICTION" means.
The dictionary definition is;

fic ·tion”‚ [fik-shuhn]
—noun
1. the class of literature comprising works of imaginative narration, especially in prose form.
2. works of this class, as novels or short stories: detective fiction.

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Queen of the May Pt 2

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Queen of the May Pt Two

By Jacquimac
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Synopsis:After suffering from an accident, a young man learns that he has been voted to be the Queen of the May by his fellow students.

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Of course, we had to go to go for a walk round village. Well, in my case, I was being carried as my legs were getting tired, after which we returned home. Ms Platt would let the headmaster know how everything went and she would see us tomorrow.


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Queen of the May Pt 1

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Queen of the May Pt One

By Jacquimac
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Synopsis:After suffering from an accident, a young man learns that he has been voted to be the Queen of the May by his fellow students.

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It never seems to rain, but it pours, or so the old saying goes. At least I can go home today after 2 weeks stuck in hospital again. Don`t get me wrong, the doctors and nurse are OK, it`s just that they talk a lot of gobbledygook when you ask them whats wrong. And on top that it`s so booooring.


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What my grandmother told me

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Just before my grandmother died she told me I would always be alone in life because I was different.She was a very wise woman and worked as mental nurse and worked until she 75.
She also told me that the family wouldn`t never accept me.
She never spoke truer words

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The Last Word

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The Last word.

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I never asked for this life but I had to live it, ever since I told everyone that I was trangendered you failed to even try to understand. I could never please you whatever I did, I never harmed or caused anyone to be harmed but you had to ensure that harm came my way. I never asked much only that you could accept me the person I was on the inside. You caused me to be humiliated by everyone I knew so much I had to leave.


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A Loving Family Pt16

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A Loving Family

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Pt Sixteen

A Loving Family


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A Loving Family Pt15

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Pt Fifteen

A Fresh Start for All


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A Loving Family Pt14

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A Loving Family

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Pt Fourteen

After the Ball was over


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Why BigCloset

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Why Big Closet

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Let me start by telling you about myself.

I was born in a small town not far from Glasgow in 1953, my parents were from large families of different religions.


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A Loving Family Pt13

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A Loving Family

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Pt Thirteen

A New Start in life


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A Loving Family Pt12

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Pt Twelve

A New Start in life


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The Last Letter

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The Last Letter

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To whoever finds this letter,

By the time you find this I will be dead and believe it or not I am actually welcoming death as a friend, my only friend.
You most probably are thinking I`m mentally unbalanced but,believe me when I tell you I am writing this after my eyes have been truly opened by so called humanity and their damned religions.


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A Loving Family Pt11

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Pt Eleven

A New Start in life


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A Loving Family Pt10

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Pt Ten

A new Beginning


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A Loving Family Pt9

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Pt Nine
A new Beginning


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A Loving Family Pt8

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Pt Eight

A new Beginning


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A Loving Family Pt7

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Pt Seven

A new Beginning


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A Loving Family

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We`ve a good life together Richard and me, our four children are grown and themselves are now grandparents.

Today is Richards 75th Birthday and the whole family will be arriving in the next hour for the Usual celebrations.


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A Loving Family Pt6

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Pt Six

A new Beginning


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A Loving Family Pt5

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Pt Five

Freedom


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A Loving Family Pt4

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Pt Four
Childhood and Schooldays Continued

When the laughter and jeering died down, the class teacher told me take my seat,when I went to my usual desk the teacher asked were I was going, when I told him to my desk,he sneered and told me to sit on the other side of the class with rest of girls.


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A Loving Family Pt3

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Childhood and Schooldays Continued

School was getting worse everyday,I singled out by the teachers as a troublemaker,I was forced to play netball dressed like a girl in vest and knickers and now I had to wear a dress in dance class, this carried on all through Primary and junior school.


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A Loving Family Pt2

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Pt Two

Childhood and Schooldays


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A Loving Family

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Pt One
The beginning.

We`ve a good life together Richard and me, our four children are grown and themselves are now grandparents.
Today is Richards 75th Birthday and the whole family will be arriving in the next hour for the Usual celebrations.


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Forever Alone

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Forever Alone

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They say lifes road is a long one with many turns and twists.
What they don`t say is that there is a pain and hardship along the way.
Yes theres a lot of things they don`t say.


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