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This story is available on amazon here The New E.D. Treatment
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Author's note: If ever there was an epic fail.
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Hi Abi and Katie,
Just a minor continuity problem. Jack(ie) seemed to have removed er underwear (briefs/panties) twice.
>> Jack said as he slipped into the gown. Knowing that the area in question might need to be examined, Jack removed his underwear, and the last of his dignity was shed, folded and placed on the chair with the rest of his clothing. <<
>> Nelson nodded. “Everything,” he said pointedly but made sure not to be too harsh.
Jack grabbed the elastic band of his underwear and with a quick tug he pulled them down and stepped out of them. <<
Hugs and Bright Blessings,
Renee
jack is weird
He's kind of weird, he wears two pairs of underwear. LOL. Oops.
Katie Leone (Katie-Leone.com)
Writing is what you do when you put pen to paper, being an author is what you do when you bring words to life
Enjoyed It
Would love to see where you'd take this. Just a couple more chapters. See PM.
Portia
Light hearted fun porn thats good for your soul
Katie/Abigale This was great on KindleUnlimited. Hope you don't get in trouble posting it here.
The new Abigail stories are a good break from the darker stories that seem to expose your soul and haunt you. Perhaps they are a good way to lighten up a little and smell the roses outside of your self imposed isolation.
Hugs and keep Abigail going forward.
Charlie O