In Search Of... Christmas Story Help?!

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So, I'm doing something that I've never done before. I'm putting out an S.O.S. You see, once, long ago, back when I haunted all of the Harvest Moon Roleplay Forums that seemed to everywhere, and the many slice of life Roleplay Forums that were always popular, I was known for my moving, emotionally backed Christmas stories. And when I started writing on D.A (Devient Art) I would go all for my yearly Christmas story, I would commission an artist for the cover-art and pull out of the stops. They were normally some of my highest hit stories, My Halloween stories were also popular but not as popular as Christmas stories.

Then my grandmother died and Christmas lost most of its cheer and luster. But I still kept up the tradition of writing Christmas Stories. Anyway for the last four no five or has been six years? Hard to tell, anyway I want to write a Christmas Story for Emily this year. So, I'm asking all the wonderful, talented writers here, would any of you lovely ladies be willing to give each chapter a once over and feed back? I want to see if I can still pack a lot of Christmas cheer into a story.

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