The Sirens Chapter 16 Ending

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Several Weeks Later:

Angel stood looking at the gravestone of her birth mother with D.A. and Angie by her side. She had on a green dress that matched her eyes and white tights. Her shoes matched the color of her dress and she had her hair styled and pulled back into a ponytail. Her fingernails had been painted a light green color and had tiny butterflies painted on them. Angel still wore the Angel necklace that Rachel had put on her the day they had found her.

D.A.’s law firm had tracked down where her mother was buried at and D.A. and Angie had paid for a headstone for her grave.

“Momma, daddy has been brought to justice for what he did to me and you. I hope you don’t mind that I have a new family now. Both my new mothers are kind and loving. They both love me for me and are helping me to become a young lady you will be proud of.” Tears stream down
Angel’s face as she stands there talking to her mother.

Angie and D.A. rest their hands-on Angel’s shoulder.

“Mrs. Stevens, we promise to make you proud of your daughter and protect her so she never has to go through what she has gone through ever again.” Angie places some flowers in a vase on the grave.

D.A. kneels to look at the headstone. She runs her fingers over the inscription she had inscribed on it.

“The Mother of an Angel, now has become an Angel herself to watch over the one she gave life too.”

“I promise to look after your Angel and raise her to be a young lady you will be proud of.” D.A. stands up after placing flowers in another vase on the other side of the headstone.

“Let’s go home, Angel.”

D.A. and Angie both hold Angel’s hand as they walk back to their car to make the long drive back home.

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Closure

It is good to see that Angel gets to close out a chapter of her life with the knowledge that her father can no longer hurt her, as well as getting closure for the death of her mother and to knowing she will not be forgotten. Her new chapter begins with two mom's and many aunts that will protect her.

I have enjoyed this story and I hope it will continue.

Jeri Elaine

Homonyms, synonyms, heterographs, contractions, slang, colloquialisms, clichés, spoonerisms, and plain old misspellings are the bane of writers, but the art and magic of the story is in the telling not in the spelling.

A very nice, short ending to

A very nice, short ending to a wonderful, though at times very sad story. The sad parts were when Angel was being beaten or harmed by his "sperm donor".
I do hope we might be favored with a follow up story one day about Angel, D.A. and Angie plus all the Sirens MC, after Angel has grown into a late teen or early 20s young woman.
That would be fun.

A more mature Angel

I think that is something I can planned out. Which path will Angel take or will she find her own path in life. Will she become a lawyer like D.A., Will she join the military or will she work at the Motorcycle shop like her other mother Angie does? Maybe she'll follow the same path as one of the other members of the MC's? Let's see where the dice rolls and what path she'll go down.

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If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.”
― Toni Morrison

Not fair!

D. Eden's picture

You really made me cry!

Great story.

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D. Eden

Dum Vivimus, Vivamus

The ending brought me to tears

I had started reading the newer story with Angel grown up. Then I noticed that I should read this story first. I'm so glad that I did. Now I can go Back to reading the next story with a far better understanding of the back story behind it.

Another

Wonderful story!! and Thanks... It's good to have skillful writers like you to help ease the torments of life.. again ..TKS!
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alissa

Nothing further about Angel's

Nothing further about Angel's mother's background, or why the physiological similarities?


I'll get a life when it's proven and substantiated to be better than what I'm currently experiencing.

If Big Tony finds out

Samantha Heart's picture

Tucker told Angles father where to find her insted of bringing him to Big Tony.... Big Tony will strip him of his colors & black ball him from every MC club out there as disloyal & a trader. Thank God D.A. had her gun & justice was served COLD!!! I hope Angle got the bike her dad stole from her (the money he stole from her)

Love Samantha Renée Heart.

Good story

Alice-s's picture

Glad the sleeve bucket died. Too quick and easy form my liking, but at least Angel gets closure

second story

lisa charlene's picture

what is the name for the second The Sirens story?

Angel/The Sirens second story

The Life Of An Angel

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If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.”
― Toni Morrison