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“Give her room!” one of the coaches yell out.
“She’s not moving.” Mutters one girl, Ellie, I think is her name.
“Try not to move her!”, That might have been Dianna.
“Oh S**t!”, that’s me…I'm trying to hide the air horn.
The Squad
by
Leila
Admin Note: Originally published on BigCloset TopShelf on Sunday, 12/28/2016 - 08:14:21 PM.(-0400), The Squad was pulled out of the closet, and re-presented for our newer readers to enjoy. ~Sephrena
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Be Careful
Well, I read this through in the past few nights. Let the reader beware, this is not a happy story. It is not all resolved in the end. It's not all better at the end of Chapter 17. In fact, the whole list of consequences and fallout is left in shambles. It's raw, gritty, and real to life. This shows the chain of events set off by one thing, and the far reaching effects of that decision.
My heart broke for different reasons each chapter. Don't read this expecting to be happy. You will be crying.
With that said, it's well written, and the plot follows what would occur in this chain of events. It's perhaps a bit cynical, but it is good anodyne to all the sugar in the rest of the stories.
I'm keeping it in my personal library, and that's the highest praise I can offer.