Jasmine Monica

I have an issue with my story that im not sure how to solve

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I wanted to tell two paralell stories and I tried that in the first version and it ended up to become a mess that many readers told me that it confused them.
So im considering tell them in two separate separate tales with two different titles of a dark edwyn and a good edwyn thats allied with the light

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I am asking for some advice and help for the conclusion of my tale the prophet

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For those few of you who read this tale, I hope some of you can offer advice
If you have kept up with it you can tell its reaching the conclusion. The forces are set up, the edwyn in the first time had gone totally cruel and a despot almost like Saron the dark lord lol. Hes even giving the other kings a crown that forces them to obey his will

and the edwyn in the other time sees the danger and has been alerted to the other edwyn wants to murder the goddess and they have to stop him

So its alll set up for a final battle for the universe and save the goddess

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He shouldn't have teased his sister chapter 2

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He shouldn't have teased his sister

by Jasmine Monica

Richard a considers his live and how he will life from that point. And he resolves himself to solving what happened, and proving himself innocent

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He shouldn't have teased his sister chapter 1

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He shouldnt have teased his sister
by Jasmine monica
A precocious boy annoys his sister and her reaction is completely too far on her innocent brother

chapter 1

Richard was startled by his sister Rose storming into the house in rage. She stamped up the steps and flew into er bedroom. He stood outside snickering at he heard his sister scream in rage. A few things were threw into the wall. She sounded seriously pissed about something.

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