Raven was bent over the front of a car she was working on when she is slapped on the ass. She stands up and turns around to see who just slapped her on her ass. She was getting tired of being treated like she was a piece of meat to be used.
She comes face to face with her boss. He was treating her as his own personal sex slave.
“Come with me, Raven.” Dave was feeling horny and wanted to fuck Raven.
“But I have to finish this car.” Raven didn’t want to go with Dave.
“If you want to keep your job and your freedom, you’ll come with me.” Dave grabs Raven by the hand and leads Raven towards his office.
Raven drops the wrench she had in her hand and goes with Dave to his office. She watches as he shuts the door behind him and locks it.
“Strip and assume the position.” Dave turns around to look at Raven.
Raven does as he says. The last time she fought him on this matter. He beat her with a thick leather belt and put her in a cage out in the yard all night long. It had rained all night long, soaking her to her bones. She was lucky, she didn’t get pneumonia.
Once she was undress, she bends over his desk with her legs spread wide. There were various tattoos on her body that she had been given when she was in jail. She feels Dave step up behind her and spit on her anal opening.
For the next hour, Dave has his way with her. It hurts her to walk as she left Dave’s office and goes back over to work on the car, she had been working on. Her ass, neck, and throat were hurting her. Her panties and jeans were soaked from fluids leaking out of her ass.
Tears were sliding down her cheeks as she worked on the car. She wishes that she had never gone to jail. That is where everything started.
She finishes the repairs on the car and drives the car around to the front of the building to be picked up.
Since she was done with work. She clocks out for the day. She looks at the hours she had and knows Dave is going to shortchange her again on pay.
Raven grabs her bicycle and peddles home. Dave was in business with her parole officer. So, if she didn’t do what he said. She would end up going back to jail.
She pedals to the apartment building her parole officer had set her up at. The place should be condemned for all the repairs it needed. She carries her bicycle up to her apartment on the third floor. It was a small studio apartment. There wasn’t much in the apartment, except for a mattress, a two-burner hot plate used dormitory refrigerator and what clothes she owned.
She locks the apartment door behind her as she sets her bicycle against the wall. She takes her shoes off, pants, panties, shirt, and bra off as she starts a shower. Once the water was like she liked it. She sits down on the floor of the shower and cry.
She never wanted to be a girl. She didn’t like what Dave was doing to her and there wasn’t anything she could do. If she runs off, her parole officer would come after her and throw her back into jail. Which was the last place she wanted to go?
She just sits there in the shower, until the water turns cold. She gets up and dries off. She slips on a nightshirt and lay down on the mattress.
The mattress was second hand. Someone had thrown it out. It needed a nice cleaning, so she used the steam cleaner at work to clean the mattress.
She starts crying again and slowly cry herself to sleep. Raven wakes up several times during the night from nightmares. She shivers and turns the lamp on near her mattress. While she was in prison, her cellmate raped her several times, when she fell asleep. She tried to stay awake or sleep lightly but doing it all the times took a toll on her.
She gets up and walks around her apartment trying to calm down. She was raped multiple times while she was in jail. She had been sent to jail because the car she had been paid to transport had been stolen and had been loaded with drugs. She didn’t know that the car had been stolen from a collector. She also didn’t know that the person who hired her to drive it, had loaded it with drugs.
Raven had gotten ten years for the crime, but only severed five, because of good behavior. Her girlish looks and build had made her a target by most of the men in the prison. The guards that were supposed to guard the prisoners had been on the take and ignored what would happen to her.
She would be taken to areas of the prison where the cameras didn’t work and be gang raped sometimes. She did fight back several times but would always be beaten down and sent to the prison infirmary.
The doctor at the prison had been on the take as well. He received payments from several men that claimed her as their bitch, to inject estrogen and such into her. The dosages were so high, that she started to lose what muscle mass she had, and she started filling out more in her hips and ass. She also felt extremely tired and bitchy at times. Sometimes, she would start crying for no reason. Her breast started growing rather rapidly and big. She had a hard time hiding them while she was in prison. The men that raped her, loved torturing them. They were very creative in what they did to her breasts.
Her penis was already small, but the drugs made it even smaller. Her testicles were extremely small and didn’t even respond anymore. She couldn’t even get an erection.
One of the men she was forced to sleep with, said he would be happy to cut it off for her. She could tell he meant it. He had been sent to jail for skinning a guy.
She stops and looks at herself in the cheap full-length mirror in her apartment. She didn’t even recognize herself anymore. Her hips were nice and wide. It gave her body a nice hour class figure. Her waist was small, but her breasts were big. Her eyes were bloodshot from crying all the time. She looked more female then when she went into prison.
Raven glances towards her alarm clock and notices it was four in the morning. She didn’t have to be at work, until seven. She gets dressed in a pair of jeans and a plain dark blue t-shirt. The t-shirt hugs her chest, showing off her breast and nipples. She takes the shirt off and put on a bra. She wishes she could get away without having to wear one. She slips the shirt back on and tucks it in. She grabs her wallet and heads towards the Denny’s up to the street from her.
Raven locks her bicycle up and heads inside to grab some breakfast. She is shown a booth and sits down to look through the menu.
“Are you ready to order, ma’am?”
Raven looks up when the waitress came over. She didn’t recognize the young woman and figures she must be new.
“Yes, ma’am. I’m ready to order. I would like a number four and I would like my eggs hard. I also would like to add a glass of orange juice and a cup of coffee.” Raven closes the menu and hands it back.
Amy accepts the menu and head to place the woman’s order. She just started a few days ago and the manager had her on the late shift. So, far she hasn’t had any complaints or problems.
Raven looks around the restaurant and noticed there were a few people having breakfast. The parking lot only had like five to ten cars. She did recognize any of the customers in the store. When she went to the grocery store, she sometimes would run into a customer whose car she worked on.
As she sits and waits for her order to come. She wants what Dave was doing to her to end. Also, she wishes there was a way she could get away from her parole officer as well. She knew Dave had some sort arrangement with him for every convict he had working for him. Half of Dave’s workers were ex-cons that were on parole.
The way Dave and her parole officer reminded her of the truck stop owner from Maximum Overdrive movie. Where he was only paying the convicts on his payroll for eight hours and making them work nine hours.
In her case, Dave was paying her $6.50 an hour, instead of $12.00 an hour like he told her parole officer. Her rent on her apartment ate up most of her check. What was left over, barely gave her enough money to buy groceries and personal hygiene items she needed. She bought her clothes at the local thrift store.
Her breakfast arrives, and she eats it while reading the newspaper. She didn’t own a cell phone. Hell, she didn’t even own a television. When she is done eating and having a second cup of coffee. She leaves the waitress a decent tip and heads back to her apartment.
Raven had a few hours to kill before she had to be at work. So, she sits and reads a book for a while. Her alarm clock buzzes, letting her know she needs to head to work. She puts her book away and carry her bicycle downstairs and pedal to work.
She could tell it was going to be a hot day. It was good she froze some water last night, so she’ll have cold water to drink. She clocks in and looks at the repair orders they had left over from yesterday. They were waiting on parts on two of them and the third one needed an engine
rebuild. They still hadn’t gotten permission to do the work.
Raven grabs a clipboard and head into the back to do inventory. Normally, Mary handled the inventory, but she hadn’t arrived yet. She walks into the storage room and start with the air filters and work her way down to the mops and bathroom tissue.
Just as she was about to leave the storage room, she hears Dave and her parole officer arguing about money. She listens carefully as her parole officer wants more money from the convicts he sends to Dave and from the ones that are already working for him.
Raven squeezes her hand in anger as she starts getting pissed off. They were purposely stealing money from her and others. She was also pissed off because Dave was using her for his own pleasure. She never wanted to be a dam girl in the first place.
Just as she was about to leave the storage room, she hears gunfire and felt as several bullets hit her in the back. She falls forward to the floor
as the bullets flew overhead of her. After a few minutes, the gunfire stops.
The last thing she hears before she passes out is “let’s get out of here.”
Raven falls into unconsciousness.
EMT Ralph Graves is called to the storage room. When he walks in there, he sees a short black hair girl with four bullets in her back. She had on a pair of dark blue work pants and a dark blue t-shirt. He kneels by her side and checked for a pulse.
“She’s alive, but just barely. We need to get her to the emergency room as quickly as possible.” Ralph looks towards the police officer that found her.
Ralph and his partner rush the young lady to the hospital. She is taken to the emergency room and her shirt and bra are cut off her. They rush to keep her from dying.
One of the bullets had nicked an artery and she was losing blood. Doctor King managed to stop the bleeding and removed the bullets that had embedded themselves in her body. He also finds out that she was really him, but her penis was so small that Doctor King figures it doesn’t work right anymore.
Raven wakes up three days later. As the fogginess clears from her mind and eyesight. She notices she was in a hospital room with an Iv hooked to her right hand. She had an oxygen hose connected to her as well. She blinks her eyes a few times to get them to focus right.
Her mouth was dry. Raven feels the remote to summon the nurse. She presses the button.
Union Mission, Nurses Station:
Shana Crooker was on duty when the buzzer sounded at her station. The occupant in room 404 has been unconscious for the past few days.
There was a police officer stationed outside her door.
She grabs her PAD and heads over towards the room. She smiles when she gets closer to the police officer on duty.
“It seems our victim is awake.” As she opens the door and walks into the room.
Raven heard the door open and watched as an older woman with short dark brown hair wearing hospital scrubs come walking in. The woman looked old enough to be around her mother’s age. She had to be either in her late thirties or early forties.
“How are we feeling today?” As Crooker checks Raven over.
“Thirsty.” Raven manages to get the word out before nurse Crooker stuck a thermometer in her mouth.
“I’ll get you some water after I finish checking your vitals.” Nurse Crooker gets all Raven vitals.
She noticed that everything was within the normal range. She noticed that Raven was running a slight fever. She watches as Raven tries to move some and winces in pain.
“Try not to move too much. We had to operate to repair an artery in your body. One of the bullets that hit you nicked the artery.” Nurse Crooker heard how Doctor King had to remove four slugs from this young lady.
Nurse Crooker pours her some water in a cup.
“Here you go.” As she hands Raven the water.
“Thank you.” Raven takes a sip from the cup carefully.
She takes small sips like she was taught in the prison infirmary. She manages to drink all the water in the cup.
“How long have I been unconscious?” Raven wanted to know how long she’s been unconscious.
“Three days. It’s Friday, June 22 and you’re at Union Mission Hospital.” Nurse Crooker wonders what type of work she did.
Raven sighs “is anyone investigating who killed Dave and my parole officer?” Raven wonders if her nurse knew anything.
“That, you’ll have to ask Detective Blackburn and his partner. They are handling the case.” Nurse Crooker knew she would have to call them to let them know that Raven was awake.
“Well, I have other patients to look after. If you need anything, just press the button.” As nurse Crooker gets ready to leave.
“Thank you.” Raven watches as Nurse Crooker leaves.
Raven wonders what is going to happen to her now. Did the people who came in and shot the place up kill Dave and her parole officer? She turns the television on and flips through the channels looking for something to watch. She stops to watch a car show.
Her lunch arrives, and it is kind of bland to her taste buds. She was so hungry, that she didn’t care. She finishes everything they have to eat.
She was slowly falling asleep because of the pain medicine she had been given when she received two visitors. The first one was Detective Blackburn and his partner Detective Lynch. They wanted her account of what happened, so Raven tells them everything she heard. She also informs them about what Dave and her parole officer had been doing to all the ex-convicts that worked at the garage.
She informs them about what Dave would do to her as well. Detective Lynch was disgusted by what she told them. Raven could see it in her facial expression.
The second person to visit her was her new parole officer. He was an older gentleman, in his late forties. He wasn’t overweight, but rather fit. Raven figures he was either ex-military or a retired cop. His name was Antwan Conner.
He wanted to know what happened as well. So, she retells the events of how she got shot. She also tells him how her old parole officer was in league with her boss and was cheating the ex-convicts out of their pay.
He informs her that the building she was living in, was supposed to be demolished. He gives her a business card that has the address of a new place he arranged for her. He gives her an envelope that had money in it. It was all the money she had been paying her former parole officer for rent.
He said when she is feeling better, to let him know. He knew a few shops that could use a good mechanic and didn’t hold their police record against them. He leaves afterward.
Four Days Later:
Raven is discharged from the hospital and takes a cab back to the garage to retrieve her bicycle. It was still locked up where she stored it. The garage itself was closed and there was police tape across the door.
She heads back to her apartment and noticed the electricity had been turned off.
“Great, first day home and power is turned off.” Raven goes about packing everything up.
Raven calls a cab from the payphone across the street. She uses some of the money that had been returned to her to pay for the fare. The cab driver drops her off at a two-story house. The place looked old and had a nice manicured lawn.
Raven walks up the steps of the huge porch and presses the doorbell. She likes how the place looked. It had a warm welcoming feel to it. She turns around when she hears the front door open.
Barbara Mercer had been in the kitchen, fixing herself some tea, when she hears the doorbell ring. She walks towards the front door to see who it was. Before she opens the door, she looks through the peephole. She spots a black hair, Hispanic girl wearing a baby blue t-shirt, and blue jeans.
She opens the door “can I help you?”
“Yes, I was told that you have a room for rent by Antwan Conner.” The woman she was looking at, a woman that was old enough to be her grandmother.
She had curly black and white hair, her face was wrinkled and she was wearing black pants, a peach color sweater and a white blouse under the sweater. She was wearing a pair of gold rim glasses. The woman stood a few inches taller than Raven did.
“I do, but it already rented out to a Raven Mondragon.” Barbara looks at Raven.
“I’m Raven Mondragon, ma’am. Mr. Conner said he arranged for me to stay here.” Raven hopes she didn’t miss understand.
Barbara looks at Raven “you don’t look like a boy to me.”
“I know. I’ve gone through some changes.” Raven didn’t know any other way to explain it. She was forced to become like she was.
“Well, come on in and let me show you the room.” Barbara steps aside and opens the screen door.
“Thank you.” Raven steps into the house. She notices that they were in a hallway.
Barbara leads Raven up a set of stairs to a nice furnished room. The room had windows that went along one wall and to another wall. She walks over and moves the curtain aside and looked out into a nice backyard.
Barbara watches as the young woman walks into the bedroom and look outside. She could tell that she could use some training. She may look like a girl, but her body language was slightly off.
Raven turns around and looks towards Barbara “it’s a nice room. Is it alright if I bring my stuff up?”
“Yes, did Mr. Conner tell you how much the rent was?” Barbara didn’t know if Antwan told this young lady all the details.
“No ma’am, he didn’t. I can pay for several months in advance until I find a new job.” Raven reaches into her back pocket and pulls out the envelope that Antwan gave her.
“Mr. Conner should have told you. The rent is five hundred a month. You can use the kitchen, but I expect everything put back in its place and kept clean. All the rooms are equipped with cable and we have wifi access you can use.” Barbara knew most young people liked to spend time on the internet.
“Here’s fifteen hundred, ma’am. That should cover me for three months.” Raven hands the money over to Barbara.
Barbara accepts the money “I’ll write you a receipt later. Here’s the key to the house. If you need a private line, let me know and I’ll arrange it for you.”
“Thank you, ma’am.” Raven watches as Barbara leave her room.
Raven goes downstairs and starts bringing what meager belongs she owns up to her new bedroom. She puts everything away and, in its place, by the time seven o’clock rolls around. She had a list of places that were hiring.
The next few weeks, she goes out every morning and applies to every job she finds a posting for. When she isn’t out applying for jobs, she uses the resources at the public library to look for jobs. She does use some of the money left over to buy a pay as you go cell phone.
One day, while coming back from a job interview. The tires on her bicycle were getting low on air. She stops at an old gas station, that had been turned into a private garage to use their air pump.
“Hello, I was wondering if I can use your air pump.” Raven walks in and looks around.
There were several cars that had their hoods up and looked like someone was doing a tune-up on them. She walks over and peeks at the
engine compartment of one car. Replacing some of the wires and spark plugs look like they would be a pain to do.
“Can I help you?” Jordan had seen a young black hair girl bent over and looking at the engine of one of his customers.
Raven stands and turns around to look at who just spoke to her. She notices that the person was in his mid to late forties and had a heavy 5 o’clock shadow. He looked like he has been a mechanic for a long time.
“I was wondering if I could use your air pump. My bicycle tires are low on air. Is that a 2.8-liter engine in that car?” Raven knew her engines.
“Yea, the client wants it tuned up.” Jordan looks at the young girl.
“It’s a nice car and whoever is working on it, could get the job done in thirty minutes.” Raven figures she could get it done in that time frame.
“You think you can do it?” Jordan wanted to see if this girl could.
“I know I can.” Raven was willing to put her money where her mouth was.
“Alright, let’s see you do it.” Jordan wanted to see this young girl do it.
“Alright.” Raven grabs some tools and gets to work. She finds the firing order and double checks everything as she changes the wires and
plugs.
Jordan stands nearby and watches the young girl and he had to admit, she knew her stuff. He glances at his watch and notices the thirty minutes were almost up.
“There, done.” Raven walks around and starts the car up.
The car starts fine and runs beautifully. Jordan was impressed with her.
“How would you like a job?” Jordan could use a good mechanic.
Raven was stun that this man was willing to offer her a job. She thinks about his offer.
“How much do you pay your mechanics?” Raven didn’t want to get cheated like before.
“$12.50 an hour.” Jordan started all his mechanics off at the same rate.
“I don’t have a tool chest of my own.” The tools Raven used at her last job, belonged to the shop.
“I have a spare tool chest you can use. If you decide you want to buy it. I can deduct a little bit every other week for the purchase.” Jordan had a few tool chests he bought at auctions.
Raven stands there and thinks about the offer. She was looking for work and if he was telling the truth, she could build her own tool chest.
“Okay, I accept.” Raven was glad she found a job.
“Good, you start tomorrow. Come on in and we’ll get your paperwork done.” Jordan leads Raven into the office to get her paperwork done.
The next couple of weeks, Raven works hard to prove she was a good mechanic. She was always early and brought coffee for Jordan since he was the owner and the first one at the shop. The rest of the guys were nice to her and treated her with respect. When she needed help with something, they were willing to give her a hand.
One afternoon, a customer started to give her a hard time about a problem she fixed, and she knew she did the job right. He kept saying she didn’t do the job right and went to put their hands on her when she was walking back to the garage.
“Please remove your hand from my arm.” Raven looked at the guy with an angry look on her face.
“I don’t take orders from a bitch. Now, you are going to fix my car for free.” He squeezes Raven’s arm.
Jordan saw Raven being harassed by one of his customers. He that the person had his hand on Raven’s arm. He walks over towards them.
“What are you doing to my employee, Walter?” Jordan notices he had a grip of Raven’s arm.
“She’s going to fix my car. She messed up on the repair last time and she’s going to fix it, this time.” Walter wasn’t letting go of Raven.
“Walter, if you don’t let her go. You’ll end up going to jail. Let me look at your car and I’ll see what the problem is.” Jordan waits till Walter let’s go of Raven.
Walter looks at Jordan and then at Raven. He could tell she was angry at him. He shoves her toward Jordan.
“Go back to the garage, bitch.”
Raven was about to turn around and slap him when she notices Jordan shaking his head. She spotted that he had his cell phone out and was recording the situation discreetly. She rubs her arm where he grabbed her.
“Go inside, Raven. I’ll handle this.” As he gives Raven a fatherly look.
“Yes, sir.” Raven heads back into the garage and goes back to work.
A few minutes later, Jordan comes walking over to her. He stops and looks at her work.
“I fixed what was wrong with Walter’s car. I also told him it wasn’t anything you did. It was another problem altogether. I also told him, that next time he touches you or any of my mechanics again, he will be going to jail.” Jordan didn’t like his employees being harass or physically harmed either.
“Thanks, Jordan.” Raven was grateful.
“You’re welcome, Raven.” Jordan smiles at her and heads back inside the office to complete some paperwork.
Comments
Luckily ...
...Raven ends this chapter in a slightly better situation than she began it. Still, i feel Raven's story is far from told. Looking forward to a continuation !
Good first chapter!
Raven seems to have found a protector as well as an honest boss, and a possible motherly mentor in womanhood in his/her landlady. He/she needs a girlfriend. (With his prison/parolee experience I think a boyfriend would be out of the question.) In the beginning femininity will be a necessity to get along; hopefully, with a circle of caring and supportive friends she will come to enjoy being a girl.
BE a lady!
I LIKED THIS STORY!
Though I hope Raven gets justice, especially for the doctor, While she can't see it now She will find there are perk to being female.
Hard way to get a new start
Four bullets in the back is a hard way to finally get a new start, after what Dave and her old parole officer were doing to her and the others. Guess those two didn't figure on someone not liking them or what they did since both are now just memories.
Being treated right by decent people will go a long ways in helping Raven regain some faith in her fellow humans, after being treated like garbage for so long.
And because of how she was treated might someone look into her case and see why she ended up in prison and maybe gets things reversed?
Others have feelings too.
From horrible to good: the
From horrible to good: the individuals Raven encountered went from from criminal to exemplary. We have some view of the horrors of prison life. At least Raven wasn't as dehumanized as many would be, or turned from victim to criminal -- something that often happens. (Flogging victim to flogger, disciplined to discipliner -- the victim learns that this is the way things are done.)
-- Daphne Xu