Kirk let a little issue of being mistaken for a girl go a bit too far. Sure, he looked like his sister. A lot! And he could make money as a girl model. Bunches! But there were other problems.... Boys!
The Model Sister
by Melanie Brown
Sisters Book 2
Now on Kindle
This edition of The Model Sister is an edited and expanded version of The Model by Melanie Brown that appeared on BCTS.
Read about another pair of beautiful sisters in Melanie Brown's The Sister Act!
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Reviewed this on Amazon
I left a very positive review for Model Sister on Amazon which should be released in a few days. It was also a blanket endorsement of your other Kindle titles which I hope will spur readers to sample more of your work. I was serious about how your books would make great movies. If only we lived in a society that was more accepting of the amazing diversity of the human experience. Greedily, I also implored you to write sequels to a number of your titles. I'm bad. That I know.
Sammy
Thank You
Read it today. Left a five-star review only because I couldn't leave six stars.
Congratulations.
Jill
Angela Rasch (Jill M I)
Seriously Bad Parenting!
Some really crappy mom poor Kirk has! To put the kid through all the crap he goes through without his consent, and not listening to anything he says. And mom leering at the young hunks. Disgusting. Kirk is going to be in therapy for years. His sister is a bit of a beast as well.
Wait! Just read some more. This is horrific. Too much too fast. This kid is going to be either in therapy or suicidal. Dad needs to step up here. Mom is a lousy person and lousy parent, and should be relieved of custody.
Comedy?
For one, it seems you mixed up Sister Act with Brian/Brianna and Model Sister with Kirk/Court.
Yes. The situations are way out there. It's an exaggeration. Nobody would do this in Real Life. Just take a silly idea and run away with it and see what happens. I do try to make the story believable within the context of its universe. But honestly, if I made everyone act exactly as they would in real life, the story would be about a page and a half. If that. Comedy is hard. You either laugh or you don't. Most of my writing attempts humor although my stories go from completely ridiculous like The Adventures of Captain T - Episode 25,490 to a tissue fest like Angel. Just remember, it's fiction.
Melanie