As I have been requested, I have revamped Kelly's Journey, But I am retitling it so that each chapters title reflects the story within.
That includes a Title Page.
I must warn the readers that there are several scenes where you will need a napkin to dry your eyes. For me, this story has been a journey of self discovery, because in many ways, I am Kelly.
This story has been expanded from its original posting. I decided to expand it when several authors said that I was getting better, and I wanted to show that they are correct. I do feel that I am improving, but i needed others to confirm it so that I would not get a swelled head about it. There's nothing worse to me than somebody who believes they are perfect.
I have been rewriting Kelly's Journey as readers asked, but I have a bit of a problem. :-) I am finding that my muse is having me to go back and add even more to what I thought was a completed chapter.
I fully intend upon posting the story, but should I change the Title since it is a saga, or keep the Title? I could call it the Kelly Chronicles too.
I have a few chapters of two stories: Kelly's Journey that I've rewritten and King Of The Rim. Both are posted here at Big Closet/Top Shelf.
Kelly was written for the contest. I've rewritten Kelly's Journey because readers want to know more about Kelly and her Family and friends. And I did King Of The Rim because I saw that it lacked depth.
Melissa [Prairie Girl passed away earlier this year from the bitter fact that her body finally broke down. Her best friend Melanie Dixon was kind enough to post her epilogue.
A few readers have asked for more on "Kelly's Journey," and to tell the truth, even though it was complete, I wanted to go back and add in the parts that had been left out.
Well, I have been working upon the revised version and I must admit that it is a challenge. I am adding in where Kelly and his Daddy are bonding and then how his death hurt Kelly.
When I penned my story Kelly's Journey, I thought that it was complete as is, but from comments made, I feel that there is more to tell about her journey.
So I have a question, I completed the story for the contest and I wonder if I should expand upon the story. I can see where i can expand it and add to the story.
Currently, I am recovering and getting stronger. A nurse comes by once a day to check out the leg. She unwraps the cast ans cleans the leg and then rewraps it. I am currently taking several meds to help with the healing and am going to see a fw other docs about the leg. I am feeling better and I hope to be able to start writing again soon.
I want to apologize for not being here for a few days, but I have been in the hospital because of my leg. My lower left leg got infected and I had to go and have it seen about. Only now can I get onlne for a while before I have to deal with my legg.
I have tried to access the Gaby Zone this week only to get an error message. I hope that it's back up tomorrow because Maddy Bell should be back from her vacation by then.
Edited By Nora Adrienne with Special Thanks To Terry Naut and to Heather Rose Brown for the Illustration!
Has a young boy, Kelly found love and acceptance from his Father who loved him dearly and saw that Kelly was very special. But his Father was taken away all too soon, leaving a distraught Kelly with out a Father. But he soon found solace in family friends and found dressing in tops and shorts like his friend Julie to be a comfort to him.
Then dressing as a girl on Halloween one year, Kelly found the girl within him. Growing up with his best friends, Julie and Johnny had been his best friends, and remained such as Kelly begins upon a road of discovery and revelation.
Then because of a school physician's accident, Kelly is given medicine that causes him to develop and mature like his Mother. His family and friends help him to cope with the changes in his body as he grows more feminine.
His Mother, always working has left her son in the care of her best friends, the Woods.
After a football game she finally sees her son as a girl and discovers that Kelly is was in love with his best friend.
From a night of passion he starts on his journey into completion, that sees them both over coming their fears. After a night of passion that leads to heartbreak, Kelly's journey leads him into to discovering things about herself, finally ending in a love that Kelly had never dreamed possible.
There are several editors that have helped me with my story about Kelly. They've all been very patient with me and when they saw the size of the story, I guess that I amazed them because I'd never attempted anything so long.
Here I am back home where my Mom is taking care of me ever since I got sick from going to see my beloved husband Mark. He is currently serving a tour in the HOSPITAL WITHOUT WALLS in Africa.
What ever happened to Princess Showy? She has a wonderful story posted here, *The Guardian Princess]but she seems to have abandoned it. Does anybody know what happened to her?
I have been editing my story King Of The Rim And have the first two chapters ready. I would like to do a Title Page that has the revamped chapters . Can any body help?
Tonight on Spike, during T.N.A. Impact [wrestling] they showed where a wrestler was on three blind dates. Unfortunately, they decided to insult the T.G. community with the first date. Why must they portray the T.G. in an insulting way? It will be shown again on Saturday late night.
I have read Janet Stickney stories and from reading them, I have a few story ideas where a young man transitions into a woman. I need help to make sure that I am not plagarising her works. That is not my intent. No, having read her stories, I have wanted to write stories in a similar vein. Is there anybody that is willing to help?
I posted two stories here in honor of Melissa Prairie Girl. They are TransBike Ontario and TransBike Three Wishes Just Deserts. I now wish to dedicate both to her memory.
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