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A child is full of hope for each day. They look forward to the next day with hope and eagerness. To watch the child grow, and learn is a gift. A child is truly the light of the world. It is true tragedy when that light of a child’s soul is crushed and it becomes fear and dread. The child’s hope is lost. He no longer looks toward each day with wonder, she dreads the next day. The child’s life it turned to despair and pain. this is a lost soul and a true tragedy
Some scary people had moved into town lately and at the moment, Alicia Peterson didn’t know how she was going to survive. She was trapped in a dead end and 4 scary looking men with tattooed arms was going toward her. Her trembling body backed farther into the wall behind her hoping somehow, impossibly it would open up and let her in.
But the cold brick wouldn’t move and she couldn’t scale up it, they approached her with lustful faces. “Come on girllie, we just want some fun and you look like you want a good time. “
She looked at the gang, 4 rather strong looking gang members with their upper bodies totally covered in tattoos. The leader, or what looked like the leader reached out for the scared girl. “That uniform you are wearing looks very cute on you but I think we want it off for our fun”
All four of the men reached for her and she couldn’t fight them all or keep their hands off her as they pulled on her clothes and soon got them off. She struggled to keep her panties on but it was no use and she knew they wouldn’t be happy.
“Oh my god Shiro, shes a fag. “That was the last thing she heard before blacking out from the leaders large fist.
The first thing Alicia noticed when she regained consciousness was that her entire body ached terribly. The second thing she noticed was a tube stuck in her throat helping her breath but it was trying to breath for her. That was a problem .
After a few intense moments of nurses pulling the breathing tube out , they left her alone.
She heard a soothing voice, “you are lucky little one that a officer stopped them from beating you. There aren’t too many that survive a Yakuza gang beating these days. Since the yakuza set up shop here, we been having more and more people come in. most in body bags.
Alicia looked at the older man in a white lab coat. She assumed he was her doctor. He looked down at Alicia with that look of great concern.
“And who are you,” Alicia enquired toward the man.
“I am doctor Donner. There will be officers here in a few minutes to ask you a few questions. “
She looked frightened, “Police, why did you call them?”
She shrank back at the look on his face, as if she asked the stupidest question in the world. “
“Lets think about that for a second, why would I call the police, Oh that’s that right, you were nearly beaten to death. “
“But you said they know it was yakuza, and a officer, you said stopped it so why ask me questions?”
He sighed, he had a lot of patience with children. “Yes but they want more details from you. But….there is another matter we are greatly concerned about. “ He looked at her hard, “And I think that you know what that is and we want know “
She had a creeping suspicion,” I am afraid I don’t know what you are talking about doctor. Tell me?”
“Ok fine Peterson. Perhaps you can tell me why you were taking highly illegal medication, powerful, doses of estrogen that aren’t on the market yet and were banned by the FDA, Why you haven’t been supervised by a doctor while on this dangerous drug, and you can tell me why until now we are learning about this. “
He saw her wheels turning in her head. “I am waiting. We know you are a transsexual but this isnt the way to do it, Alicia” he saw her wince at that name.
“ And my sexual identity is none of the business of yours, or the states. You can kindly butt out of mine, and my families private affairs thank you very much.”
He suddenly was out of patience, “That is our concern. Those drugs you were taking were banned, by a federal agency so that’s a crime, administering them to a minor is a crime unless you got them yourself. Then you may go to prison. Who ever is in charge of you will have a lot of questions to answer. And since you aren’t under a doctors supervision as a transsexual and being a minor, this reeks of neglect, or blatant abuse. If you are a transsexual, there are ways to go by that but this is the wrong way.”
Alicia suddenly was out of patience too and shouted, “I had no choice. And I was never told what I was taking. I was beaten if I tried to refuse and the Governess made damn sure that I swallowed it. I didn’t want to be a damn girl my brother hired the sadistic bitch. “
She didn’t want to go to prison.
Now, he was really concerned. He had here, a abused child. Such abuse that he never came across such a case. He felt sad for Alicia and it showed all over him. “I am so sorry Alicia. “
“That is okay, can you tell me what I was taking?”
He answered, “It is a totally new and experimental drug called estrogfem, super powerful dose of a new estrogen that was supposed to fill the bloodstream, and it was also supposed to suppress testosterone production, for ever. That means, the feminizing effects are irreversible. There is zero chance of ever being masculine again. That is why the fda banned it. quite frankly, I’m surprised you survived the treatment, the drug is of such power, it has caused liver failure and other fatal effects. It is too powerful.
The door opened and Alicia saw a officer walk though wearing the blue police outfit. She noticed that the officer was a woman. Suddenly, her entire body started trembling uncontrollably. She screeched, “Get away from me you bitch! I’m not answering any of your questions.”
Alicia bolted up from her bed, painfully and started moving toward the bathroom.
The officer shouted, “I am a detective from the special victims unit, I am here to help you.”
Alicia didn’t believe a word of it. Women don’t help. All Alicia knew was that the soul of a female is one of darkness, they desire to inflict pain. A woman’s soul is filled with cruelty. She had to get away. Fast.
The pain in her body caused her to black out.
Comments
This is great.
Wow. I say again, WOW. This story has huge potental. Great job. Keep it up.
Intriguing,
very intriguing, more please,
Love and cuddles,
Janice Elizabeth
Alicia's New Life
Is a great beginning to a new story. What happened before this chapter is truly horrifying to contemplate. It is a shame that she fears women, it can cause problems later. It will be interesting to see where you take this new story.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
great start
OH WOW!!!!!!!
this is an excellent start i dont usually like the dark stuff but you are starting the story out well. the reaction of an abused child to a figure that represents the primary abuser is a very strong thing. This story has a huge pottential to travel both streams and it really is a huge wow!!!
to hug is to be and to be is to be hugged
view the world through the eyes of a child and relearn the wonder and love
Allie elle loved and cared for and resident of the kids camp full time
to hug is to be and to be is to be hugged
view the world through the eyes of a child and relearn the wonder and love
Allie elle loved and cared for and resident of the kids camp full time
Is this the same Alicia from previous stories?
This seems like it is off to a great start.
Gwendolyn
Pregnant, I should say.
Christine:
This story is indeed pregnant with potential. Abuse of a minor is a delecate thing
to handel in a story, but so far you've struck the right balance with me. The plot
line and the setup both make me want to see what happens next. I always like the
way you write, but this story really caputures the interest. If I had to suggest one
thing to make it better, it would only be that I wish you had developed it more, and
given us more at one time. This would have been both for my own selfish enjoyment, and
because the story idea is so good, it could easily have carried a lot more detail.
Thank you, Christine. Good job, and good start.
Sarah Lynn
This sound like the
This sound like the prequal(sp) to a short tale where the resulting girl doesn't care if part of her brain is burned out. As long as it releases her for the despair and memory of what was done to her. Very disturbing.