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Synopsis:
Imagine reading Part One again, only from the other side of the mirror.....
Jenna and Jessica, kissin' cousins, get entangled in the webs of the adversary, who not only shows some teeth, but a well turned leg and fabulous shoes!
Some new characters, some old, along with the usual mix of comic mayhem and random explosions.
Story:
Fifth story in the Angel saga, part 3 of 5.
Lafey family appears courtesy of Lavyril Exquisite Productions and yes, they get to keep their wardrobe.
Many thanks to Aardvark, curmudgeon extraordinaire and general sophisitcate about town, and NiGHTs, wherever you are, I hope you found happiness.
Notes:
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Comments
not finished
ok, where's the rest of this?
quidquid sum ego, et omnia mea semper; Ego me.
alecia Snowfall
Great Story, but.....
first two parts were great but the link for Part III is missing again
can't find attachment link
It says to click on the attachment link below; however, I cant seem to find it.
Just finished part 3
I see that it was posted quite some time ago and wonder if the rest is somewhere else. I've enjoyed the story and sure hope you have continued it.
Huggles,
Winnie
Huggles,
Winnie
Link to file is back
Sorry about that, I turned off a feature I didn't know anyone was using. :)
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Link
This is the link: https://bigclosetr.us/topshelf/system/files/HIPS3.rtf
Hugs,
Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Much better. Thank you
Much better. Thank you
Having trouble finding link
I have been reading stories here for a while. Usually don't log in, but today when I went to read this part - Great story by the way. - my system could not find the .rtf file. After I decided to log in to ask about it, I tried to read the story that way. Now I can't even find the link. I like this story, but I am sad that I can't read the story. I like coming to the site as a means to relax. Is anyone else having this trouble or is it just me? Thank you
The link
You have to download the story to your computer and the link is the part that says HIPS3.rtf.
- Erin
= Give everyone the benefit of the doubt because certainty is a fragile thing that can be shattered by one overlooked fact.
Awesome!
Ty,
Great story telling! I don't know how you are keeping track of all of the threads but it's fitting together wonderfully and I can see all the connections forming from other works, very cool. I do like your use of the Lafey's,too. I had some doubts about the weak Lefay women going to the Strauss and vice versa and am a little confused about Julias and his wife who I take to be a Lefay female but hardly weak, seems Julias is her feminized puppet and should really be a Lefay boy? :) Oh, the file worked fine and it was clean and openable on the fly in Word so it can be read without downloading too. Thanks for the kick!
Gwennie
Gwen Lavyril
Gwen Lavyril
Ah, those Lafeys....
thanks Gwen, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Well, Julias comes from the same genetic stock as the 'Lafey' boys, but while he may be influenced by his wife, he is not quite a puppet. Sometimes the best strategy is to allow the other to assume they are in control.....and thus you can make their actions predicatable, and hence, controllable.
Oh really?
Oh Ty,
Now we have "genetic stock" for the Lefay? I leave you alone for a few months and this is all you can come up with? Maybe that is not so bad actually, hmm...testicular feminization? I like it! Well, it does beat hemophilia?
Gwennie
Gwen Lavyril
Gwen Lavyril
Convoluted...but,damn good
Hide In Plain Sand
Ty, you are KILLING me with these cliff hangers! I've looked EAGERLY for the final release of this tale since you first started talking about it in the chats and I haven't been disappointed.
Ty's talent lies in taking a different look at some things we see every day and in her ability to blend humor, adventure, excitement and love in every chapter of her tales. They'll make you laugh out loud one minute and make you cry your eyes out in the next paragraph. They'll make you think, and that's something that EVERY writer strives to do. Ty accomplishes all that and more with a seemingly negligent ease.
So here I will sit. Waiting VERY impatiently for the next chapter in a story that will surely find it's way to the top of the heap in TG fiction. And I can always say that I was there at the beginning and even helped, just a little bit, in getting it into print. I'm damned proud of that.
Love and huggles from Cathy_t_
As a T-woman, I do have a Y chromosome... it's just in cursive, pink script.