Angel returns and finds himself caught in several webs of intrigue. New characters get introduced, old ones return and the face of the adversary begins to emerge.
Part 2 of 5. Fifth installment of the Angel series. Lafey Family appears courtesy of Lavyril Exquisite Productions and were fabulous, just fabulous!
Hide In Plain Sand - Part 2 is hosted by the generous and cosmopolitan Jenny!, the artist formerly known as Jenny.
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Classic Ty!
Well it was classic TY, and nicely done, I must say that. The basement under the house stuff was pretty gruesome but I thought just enough to let the reader appreciate how sick the puppy/ies are. I won't ever be able to read Milne again without feeling a bit nauseous or laughing, not sure which yet. Rorschach Milne indeed! LOL! No Dolly costumes for this girl! Arrrr matie!
I can't wait to hear what happens once Elise finds out Angel is in town. He must know that Gwennie can't keep a secret from his big sister?
Gwennie
Gwen Lavyril
Gwen Lavyril
Hide in Plain Sand
So far, its a great story. When I started reading Part 2 I was confused. I couldn't figure out the tie between Part 1 and Part 2. It seemed like there were two totally different stories. I was wondering if we had a error in two parts of two different stories being tied together. It wasn't until the mention of Mitzi in part two that I was sure the two would tie together eventually. Part 1 was great, but Part 2 was super. I am looking forward to the rest of the parts. You spin good stories in the tradition of some the great story teller. Keep'em coming. Thanks!
Bobbie