Making a Scene
A Short Story
By Maryanne Peters
He saw her the moment that he entered the restaurant. The table for two was not hidden away, but in the middle surrounded by others. He was going to stride over immediately, but he went to the bar and made a show of looking at the menu.
She looked beautiful. Her hair was up, and she looked as if her makeup had been done at the cosmetics counter. She was wearing what he supposed was a cocktail dress. It had a neckline that showed off her perfect breasts, and a hemline that showed off her more-than-perfect legs, in black hose.
The man sitting with her looked very interested.
He refused the offer of a drink. He walked over.
“Hello, Giselle,” he said with a sneer.
“Oh,” she said. “Hi Mac.” She paused and looked at the man across from her. She said: “Mac, this is Ollie. Ollie, meet Mac. Mac is an old friend of mine”
“Yes, I am, Ollie,” said Mac, shaking the other man’s hand firmly and vigorously. “Yes I am. A very old friend.”
“Did you want to talk to me privately,” asked Giselle through gritted perfect white teeth.
“No, no” Mac said. “No need for privacy. Here you are in public.”
“This is who I am Mac,” she said. “I am complete now – for more than a year. The past is over. Gerry is gone. You need to get over it.”
“Hey, Buddy.” Ollie felt that it was time to say something. His date was looking distressed. They had met online. He had only met her an hour before, but he could not believe his good fortune. She was definitely the best-looking woman he had ever been out with. In their hour together he had discovered that she was intelligent and funny, and interested in many things that he was. She was a little larger than other women he had been out with, but she had a great body. If he played his cards right, he might just see that body in all its glory, later on tonight. It was time for him to be the knight to the rescue.
“Why don’t you leave the lady alone,” he said.
“Lady?” said Mac, looking around the restaurant. “I don’t see a lady. Unless you are referring to this person sitting with you. Well, this person is no lady. This person used to be my best friend and old football buddy, Gerry. That is who you are, isn’t it?”
Mac stared down at Giselle. He was willing her to stand and confront him.
“Don’t Mac, please,” she said. “Please, not here.”
She stood up. Ollie’s mouth was open in disbelief. She looked at him with the saddest look he had ever seen.
“Would you wait for me, Ollie,” she said. “Please. I will explain everything. Please wait for me.”
She grabbed Mac’s arm. In her heels she was taller than Mac, but not Ollie. She seemed to be able to manoeuvre him easily to the front door and outside.
Ollie looked around. In that moment everybody was looking at him. Everybody had heard. Everybody had seen. And now suddenly they were averting their eyes to take a drink or push some food around on their plates. Initially in silence.
When voices started again, they were hushed. They were talking about him, or rather the woman who had been sitting with him. The big beautiful woman who had seemed to be all of his fantasies come true. Now the truth was real. Everybody knew it including him. What did that make him?
Should he leave? She said wait, but what happens if she does come back? Stand up, leave something on the table for the drinks. Leave. He did not know anyone there. It will be forgotten. Will it?
It occurred to him that this was a defining moment. What kind of a person was he? Maybe he should have followed her? He was bigger than this guy Mac. He could have rescued her. He could have ended the date after that, if he wanted. Maybe he could have shaken her hand, or even kissed her cheek? He could have said something like: “You are very beautiful, but I am not into transwomen”. But maybe he was?
He leaned back in his chair and took another drink from his glass. He looked at her glass with the lipstick on it.
What the hell? There he was. The embarrassment was over. Leaving was not going to change anything. He could wait a bit.
He saw a couple on a table nearby suspend their conversation about what had just happened to look at him. He raised his glass to them and smiled. Ollie felt strong and secure in the fact that he was a heterosexual man attracted to women. How was he to know. The profile said she was female.
“Complete now”. That was what she said. Maybe that meant … fixed up, down there?
Outside Mac’s van was parked near the front door of the restaurant.
“Do you think he will follow you, Giselle?” he said.
“He likes me Mac,” she said.
He opened the door to the van and she got in. There were some storage trunks inside and some padded fabric to cushion goods was spread cross them. A comfortable spot for her to sit.
But she did not even have time to do that. Her head was in his grip – her face cupped in his hands, his tongue in his mouth. She tried to push him away.
“Mac, stop it!” She could barely get the words out with his mouth over hers, but Mac heard the words. It did not stop him. He pulled up her dress and reached into her crotch, tearing at the pantyhose. He could feel the warmth of her vagina through her panties, as if it were the real thing. Would he need lubrication?
“Mac, no. I said no!” With his free hand he rummaged in the box shelf on the inside wall. He knew the shape of the bottle – linseed oil for the custom furniture he made. He freed his stiffening cock and slapped a little on it.
“All right, all right,” she said. “Take it easy. You’ll ruin my hair. You have already fucked up my lipstick. Just be a little … oh. Oh. Oh. Oh, sweet Jesus.”.
He was inside her. The sweet smell of linseed oil and the sweat of a man become woman filled the air in the van as his filled her sweet perfectly crafted vagina.
“Are you happy now?” she said.
“Yes,” said Mac. “Do you really want to go back inside?”
“You know I want somebody who wants me as a woman,” she said. “You have always known me. You know me as a friend. And you take the extra benefits whether I like them or not. But I always worry that you can never see me as a real woman.”
“You’re crazy,” said Mac, smiling at her. “You are not Gerry. I don’t know you – or I am only just beginning to know you.”
“I am going inside,” she said. “If he is still there, I will go home with him and we will see where that goes. Maybe he will be a guy who can accept me for who I am.”
“And if he’s not there?”
“Well, I’ll go online tomorrow, and we will do it again same as tonight. Ok?”
The End
© Maryanne Peters 2020
Comments
Staged?
Pity the poor stooge who is still sitting inside the restaurant.
Stories Ending with a Question?
But she went back, Joanne.
He might have still been there.
If he was, she had found a man who would accept her for what she was.
If not, then she had a friend who would help her with the same dramatic reveal of her past.
But the real question is: Does Mac want it to end? Does he want to see her with anybody else?
Maryanne
Edgy!
So as I read I thought "this is an attempted rape; hope the guy inside comes to save her. But he didn't, and she said "All right, all right," when it was obvious this was going to happen. Still qualifies as rape-y in my book - but I'm not criticizing the writing here, as this is something probably most girls (even cis ones) have had to endure at some point in their lives. It's just a fact of reality, albeit a sad one. Also, the evidence that Giselle began to get turned on ("oh, sweet Jesus") doesn't mean it wasn't assault (plenty of evidence that during a rape, a girl can experience arousal, even if it is totally unwanted).
It takes a lot of skill and chutzpah to carry off this complex situation without appearing porn-y or ham-handed; yet, as almost always is with you, here it is done successfully. I know you rarely do follow-ups, but it might be interesting to see what happens back in the restaurant when Giselle returns! And know that I still appreciate you and cherish your talent and product!
Hugz! - **Sigh**
Sighs are the natural language of the heart.
-Thomas Shadwell
I see...
I see, the title has a double meaning: Making a scene and manufacturing a scene. There's a lot of complexity here in just over 1000 words. Mac and Giselle's friendship seems complicated, ambivalent, and emotionally messy, like characters from some quirky indie film or several couples I've met real life (I seem to be a magnet for people like this). People's motivations aren't always as straightforward and easy to read as they are in most fiction and sometimes they don't even know what they want; and I like the way Maryanne's stories capture this even if it sometimes isn't pretty. If Ollie chooses to stick around I hope he likes drama, dysfunction and weird triangles, because my impression is that Mac will always stay in the picture in some way...
~hugs, Veronica
What borders on stupidity?
Canada and Mexico.
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Emotional Mess
I think there is anger in Mac, but that does not make what he did rape.
Why is he angry? You decide. It is that she stole a close from him? Or is he perplexed or frustrated by his desires?
"Mac and Giselle's friendship seems complicated, ambivalent, and emotionally messy" is exactly right.
Why the fabricated play in front of her date? Is it really to help her to find a man? Or is a game that neither of them want to admit to?
And yes, if her date says he wants to continue to see her, what about Mac? What will he do? What will she do?
As is said in my blog on the subject of the short story, questions arising are an important part of the genre ... in my view.
Best of all, I get to read comments like those above!
Maryanne