Okay, the call goes out again from me for a beta/proof reader for another Bobby/Mel story line. Be aware that there is one section that I'm still working on but I would like both:

a. The persons thoughts, opinion on where the story went and how it read.
b. Obvious errors, but be aware there are some places that I'm sure I need to place the dreaded comma's and so forth.
c. What went right and what went wrong.

I don't generally go for the "I love the story" or "I hate the story" without reasons. I don't mind it but I really need a persons input to gain experience in progressing my writing.

For any that know my stories I tend not to follow certain rules of troupes in what I write about.

PM me if interested.

Ibi