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I have several stories I've finished recently, and would like to get feedback on them before I post them.
1. A secondary world fantasy novel of 64,000 words. No onstage sex, a little violence.
2. A 4400 word short story, an expansion of my flash story "Instructions" in the January mixtape anthology. No onstage sex, no violence; some borderline mind control via magic.
3. A 17,600 word novella in my Valentine Divergence setting (the same as "Butterflies are the Gentlest"). Not much sex, no violence.
4. A 13,000 word novelette, an RPG portal fantasy. No sex, some violence including offstage torture involving non-POV characters.
Those are finished at least in second draft. These two are still in first draft, one of them *very* rough:
5. A 41,000 word novel, a sequel to "The Family that Plays Together", in Morpheus' Travel Agency setting. (Thanks to Morpheus for his permission to use it.) No sex or violence.
6. A 6,700 word near-future science fiction short story. No sex or violence.
If you would like to beta-read one or more of them, please send me a private message, or email me: trismegistus dot shandy 1718 at gmail dot com. #1 is the closest to being finished (I just started the fourth draft) and the one I'd like to get out there soonest.
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I would love to peek at the Valentine Divergence story
"A house divided" is one of my favorite stories.
I could test read for you
Not much of an editor but I can read and give comments on what I liked, was confused by, make suggestions etc..
You do write some interesting tales.
Will PM later
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
I'm not an editor, but...
I'd like to help by providing feedback on one of your stories, e.g. the 64,000 word one.