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I have several stories I've finished recently, and would like to get feedback on them before I post them.

1. A secondary world fantasy novel of 64,000 words. No onstage sex, a little violence.

2. A 4400 word short story, an expansion of my flash story "Instructions" in the January mixtape anthology. No onstage sex, no violence; some borderline mind control via magic.

3. A 17,600 word novella in my Valentine Divergence setting (the same as "Butterflies are the Gentlest"). Not much sex, no violence.

4. A 13,000 word novelette, an RPG portal fantasy. No sex, some violence including offstage torture involving non-POV characters.

Those are finished at least in second draft. These two are still in first draft, one of them *very* rough:

5. A 41,000 word novel, a sequel to "The Family that Plays Together", in Morpheus' Travel Agency setting. (Thanks to Morpheus for his permission to use it.) No sex or violence.

6. A 6,700 word near-future science fiction short story. No sex or violence.

If you would like to beta-read one or more of them, please send me a private message, or email me: trismegistus dot shandy 1718 at gmail dot com. #1 is the closest to being finished (I just started the fourth draft) and the one I'd like to get out there soonest.

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I could test read for you

Not much of an editor but I can read and give comments on what I liked, was confused by, make suggestions etc..

You do write some interesting tales.

Will PM later

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa