I'm looking for beta readers to critique the sequel to Wine Can't Be Pressed Into Grapes. Copyediting would be nice, but what I mainly need is for someone to look at it with fresh eyes and see if there are any plot holes, whether anything is unclear or (unintentionally) ambiguous, whether the various plot threads hang together in a cohesive whole, whether the ending is satisfying, and so forth. It's 204,000 words,
and it begins with a synopsis of "Wine Can't Be Pressed Into Grapes", so you don't absolutely have to have already read that, though it would help.

There's no onstage sex, and few allusions to offstage sex, but there's some swearing and violence, and one minor character tells how she was raped some years ago.

Send email to trismegistus.shandy1718 at gmail dot com if you want to beta-read it. Let me know if you're using Mac, Linux or Windows so I can format the text file with the appropriate line breaks. I would like to get your
feedback by the beginning of December so I can start working on the final draft then.