I am currently working on a story for the BB universe. I am looking to see if someone will be willing to read over the story with critical input. They 'must' be familiar with both Elrod's BB universe and with 'my' characters.

I would say don't be discourage or hampered if I do not reply immediately as I am still in the process of doing some editing an so forth. I will reply to all those interested of course.

I'm not looking so much for someone to 'edit' the document, but more along the lines of flow, structure and so forth. I will welcome both critical and 'constructive' criticism. To tell me 'It's good,' or 'looks great' does not give me the needed feedback that I desire. Nor does the opposite. To also tell me also how you think the story should flow will be listened to but does not mean I will follow said sage advice. Not that I don't want or appreciate it, only that it may not fit in with how I 'envision' my characters either in the now or future.

Oh and for the record I use MS word. Please don't go with the nay saying of what form I should use. This is my choice and no I won't bend on it.

Respectfully

Ibi