Queen of the May Pt Four
By Jacquimac
Thanks To Stanman63 For Editing!!
Synopsis:After suffering from an accident, a young man learns that he has been voted to be the Queen of the May by his fellow students.
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Wednesday morning arrived and I woke up at 6:30A.M. to get ready for school. Today I was to join the gymslip brigade. Oh boy! I could hardly wait! Mum dressed me in my new school uniform, except for the cold round the legs, it was pretty comfortable.
After breakfast, Mum drove us to the school and I was quickly dragged away by a posse of the bigger girls into the warmth of the school. I was taken to the headmasters office where he welcomed me back. I was told I would be excused from Morning Assembly, just to go to my classroom. I was also reminded that I had to use the girls facilities.
I had been given a locker in the girls locker room where I could keep everything instead of my usual practice of carrying everything round all day. That made things a lot easier as crutches and a pile of books don`t mix very well. I finally got to the classroom just as assembly was starting and found an empty desk at the back of room. it would be about 20 minutes before everyone else arrived.
Eventually the rest of the class started to arrive and take their seats, Ms Platt came in shut the door and said hello to the class as she did every morning. As soon as she saw me sitting at the back, she had me move nearer the front on the girls side of room. The boy that sat at the desk in front of me grabbed my books and bag and moved it to an empty desk while I hobbled over.
Class then started with the calling of register, as it was the last week of term there wasn't a lot to do, all exams had been done the week before which I knew as they brought the exam papers to the hospital for me to complete.
When she got my name on the register she stopped a said I needed another name as Jack wasn't a girls name.
I protested, "I am not a girl!"
"For next for few months I was."
"Well, I don't have a girl's name," I huffed.
"Class, we need a girl's name for our new girl. Please help her to come up with one."
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Eventually the blackboard was full of names to pick from, it was decided that my first name was Jacqueline as that was similar to Jack which left a middle name so they started through the names crossing out ones that didn't get a big enough show of hands. I ended up as Jacqueline Marie McConnell instead of simply Jack McConnell. Of course the headmaster was informed and he announced over the school tannoy system so it wouldn't belong before it got around the village.
The weather service announced a snow storm over the next few hours, so the headmaster got us all into the Assembly Hall and told us that just in case it was a really bad storm, he was closing the school at lunch time until after Christmas and that parents were being notified so that those that required transport wouldn't be hanging around waiting.
Well, that certainly got a cheer form everyone, an extra week off school. After the announcement, I was taken by Ms Platt to the headmasters office where a meeting was being held with the Student Council. Oh good! I wanted to speak to that bunch.
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Before I could get a word in, Kathy the leader said "Before you start to say anything, I`ll tell you why you were picked for Queen of May: 1) Your the most popular kid in the village, 2) You help anyone that needs it when and if your able, 3) You were the only choice from all the kids, 4) Your size, build and looks scream girl, 5) We didn't want you to be left out of the festival and being Queen was the only thing that didn't require much physical effort, 6) We talked to your family, they agreed with everything, so you don`t have a choice."
I sat there like a fish out of water after hearing her.
She came over and put her arm around me and said, "Don`t worry, everyone will help and if anybody started teasing or anything, they would be taken care of."
After that, I saw I that didn't have a choice, so surrendered to the inevitable. So Jacqueline Marie McConnell was born.
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At lunch time, I waited until most of kids had left in case I got knocked down in the rush, then went with my brothers went looking for Mum's car. When we got home and had lunch, the board games came out that afternoon. Although there was the usual arguments, it was pretty quiet.
During the night, a lot of snow fell and the roads were blocked, it would take some time before the snowplows got round to clearing the villages. Dad and the boys went and joined the other men and boys to clear the footpaths, especially around the homes of elderly or disabled.
After I was dressed and had breakfast, Mum got out her knitting and sewing bags when a couple of the woman who lived nearby arrived with their knitting and sewing bags. After they had a cup of tea, they started to teach me to sew during the morning and knit in the afternoon, this went on for the rest of week.
By the weekend, the snowplows finally cleared the roads in and around the village so people could get out and about a bit more. I didn't get out much, but with the exercises I had to do, my legs were starting to get stronger. But I was kept busy helping with the housework. It had been decided that I would help mum with the housework as well knitting and sewing lessons
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End Of Part Four
To Be Continued In Part Five
Comments
I guess the question i have...
...why isn't anyone listening to his protests. None of the excuses hold any water, and yet here he is with the entire community complicit in his unwilling feminization. And not just in appearance, he's been given a new name and even accepted as a girl by his minister. Something is afoot, as they say. Part of me would have loved this while much of me is scared as hell over what may be in store for him.
Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
Queen of the May Pt 4
There must be some secret about the child that is being kept from him that everybody else knows about. Could the child be in denial that she really is a girl and this is a weird dream? Could the child have an injury to the groin that made SRS the only way to save her life? Only the author knows for sure.
May Your Light Forever Shine
May Your Light Forever Shine
It is never necessary to perform SRS to save a life, per se...
...removal of sexual organs due to critical injuries doesn't necessarily preclude retaining one's gender. Hormone therapy and reconstruction can address the loss; obviously, since that's what SRS is, anyway. And other than dealing with sexual anomalies at birth, no doctor will perform surgery such as that with the intent of changing the child's sex without informing him or her; we have kids on Oprah and Nightline all the time who are seven or six years old who are already gender aware and want to change. He's ten years old. If he doesn't know why, there's something going on.
Dio vi benedica tutti
Con grande amore e di affetto
Andrea Lena
Love, Andrea Lena
Not necessarily
When it comes to religion. If a visit to the doctors had confirmed the child was biologically a girl. Then it's not unheard of an entire town to be of a religious cult (remember the lottery?) who might see it as a divine intervention saying what the child is and now it's their righteous duty too "correct" the problem.
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I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D
Hmmmmmm???????????????
Why?
Huggles
Angel
"Be Your-Self, So Easy to Say, So Hard to Live!"
"Be Your-Self, So Easy to Say, So Hard to Live!"
Gotta tell you
Even being who I am... I would have screamed bloody murder and threatened to kill myself if someone didn't tell me the truth, ALL OF THE TRUTH.... Because that meeting in the head's office was a joke.
Poor kid got the bumm's rush from his standpoint but why?
As a reader I want to know the motivations behind important characters in a story. IE the WHYS.
Why are they politely, kindly but firmly railroading the child. Why can't they tell him the truth? Why why why?
The explanations the student council President gave were short and vague at best and almost non-sensical... a real snow job/bumm's rush. I mean, ONLY as Queen of the May can he participate due to his injuries? POPPYCOCK! Why not VIP seating? Why not a special ceremony once he is well? And he told them point blank after the rescue he wanted no reward. So why all this subterfuge? I get the impression he is a quiet, self-sufficient, introverted child who is not a great or eager socializer. Why force him to be one and as a her at that? Why all the expense? it make no sense unless it is to pay him back for his or is it more properly her sacrifice?
There are towns with weird festivals, like several with town wide overripe tomato fights but a boy as Queen of the May? That's weird.
Our author is holding back one or more pieces of key FYI.
Cruel author.
I'm soooo proud of you!
Do let us in on the secret(s) soon-ish, okay? The natives are getting restless.
But your tale, you rules . If his being in the dark, having conflicting info is critical to the story so be it. We will try to be patient.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
It really doesn't add up ...
... and I think that hurts the reader's ability to buy into the premise.
For example, when young, sick, and weak Jack tries to confront the Student Council about all this, he is told that the reason he was chosen as Queen of the May was that he's popular, helpful, and well-liked. His reward for such sterling qualities is to be railroaded without consultation into becoming a girl for a year and a half AS A REWARD? Just because his "size, build and looks scream girl?" Heck, why not just change the title of the position to King of the May and let Jack be Jack, if everyone likes HIM so much?
(I know, I know, there wouldn't be much of a TG story there if they did something to REALLY reward him for being a mensch. Hush up, Randa.)
Still, there must be some other motive behind all this that we aren't being shown. Otherwise, it makes no sense at all. Because if there is no secret agenda, then the entire town, Jack's family included, are either cruel, thoughtless, oblivious to the kind of pain a forced gender reassignment can bring to a person, or flat out crazy. They're acting like this is an honor instead of an imposition. A new computer and a flat screen TV wouldn't make me feel any better if someone took me and forced me to present as a guy when I was sick and weak and incapable of standing up for myself. And for my family to buy into this whole wacky scheme, and not stand up for me? I'd be devastated.
I think that's the thing about this story that strains the suspension of disbelief the most: that Jack isn't yelling his head off and wondering why everyone is so keen to push him headfirst into girlhood. Jack isn't presented as stupid, so why isn't he demanding answers? To paraphrase Shakespeare, "methinks he doth protest too little."
I'm hoping this will make sense eventually, and you'll give the readers the real reason the whole town is conspiring like this.
Randalynn
I agree his NOT protesting much is odd but I thnk I have an ...
explanation or two.
One he is being kept off balance by a constant barrage of embarrassing yet seemingly loving things happening to him. He gets close to blowing his stack, to speaking up then gets knocked for a loop again and forgets .
Two: I think he is a shy, introverted kid who is easily intimidated and it goes against his nature to complain or insult others. IE he's too nice and polite to complain unless severely provoked.
Three: maybe secretly he or she likes this, IE his subconscious is female, he is TG and has the soul/brain of a female but he would not let *her* admit it. Mind you that can also be used negatively by creeps IE "You/she /the freak asked for it, to be beat up/raped."
Still we are getting to where it is hard to suspend disbelief in this. We need some reason(s) to say, yeah, this is weird but it makes sense so I'll read on. You need not reveal all, just enough to keep us interested and reading. But it looks like WE need something fairly soon and so probably does the boy.
John in Wauwatosa
John in Wauwatosa
Everything
That was said here and more meow, also... am I the only one irked by the spelling and grammar mistakes? Sweetie, maybe you should find an editor mew to help you with simple things like women is for more than one woman, and woman is just singular for only one woman. Things like this are minor really but can be fixed with someone with a good eye for errors. AKA a editor, anyway good luck mew, I'm curious to see what kind of story it is you are writing. Is it horror? Suspense? Drama? Comedy? I c ant wait mew ;3
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I know who I am, I am me, and I like me ^^
Transgender, Gamer, Little, Princess, Therian and proud :D
Re: Everything
I sent Jacquimac a PM offering an edited version of parts 1 and 2, but I haven't had a reply, so far.
Dave.
OH, COME ON!
The simple point is "everyone" doesn't don't force someone "everyone likes" to accept an honor and reward "everyone" knows he doesn't want. If "everyone" does, they don't like him and are punishing him. So the whole honoring and rewarding reason for feminizing him is out the window. If they don't hate him, and aren't punishing him, then what's being done must be for what they believe "is for his own good" and they don't want to tell him why.
** "I was taken by Ms Platt to the headmasters office where a meeting was being held with the Student Council. Oh good! I wanted to speak to that bunch.
Before I could get a word in, Kathy the leader said ... so you don`t have a choice."
After that, I saw I that didn't have a choice, so surrendered to the inevitable. So Jacqueline Marie McConnell was born. **
He goes in mad, is shown by Kathy's prempting him that he IS being "rewarded" with something everyone knows he doesn't want, and told he has no choice but to to accept it. In other words, for some reason, far from being rewarded, he IS being punished. AND THEN HE DOES JUST ACCEPT IT??? What happened to his anger? I could see an "I can't fight the whole town" acceptance but I can't see him not wanting to, not being really angry about being railroaded like this. It's like he's a robot. I don't know how it's being done, but there's got to be serious subliminal brainwashing going on here.
BE a lady!
Maybe the town is ruled by woman an mom needs a daughter
RAMI
Maybe the town is actually a maitriarchy. The women (yes plural ;-)) rule and each and every mother, must have a daughter to train in womanly virtues. Perhaps, Mother McConnell is the first woman of the town not to have a daughter, and so the town, like the High School in another set of stories, is controlling what is occurring.
Well before anyone questions what I wrote, it is as good an explanation as has been given in the story to date. If so, it would quell much of the criticism of the story.
:-0
Rami
RAMI
That is a possibility...
PennyElaine
but i think, if i were to judge the story correctly as it has so far progressed, young master/miss A. Nonymous is so unwell, that his/her mental strength is extremely limited. Maybe he/she just hasn't got the energy, or sufficient compos mentis to interact strongly, like someone with a high fever?
When that tree fell on him, and later the flood, did it so terribly exhaust him to such an extent that he is in the state that Grace Darling, the lifeboat girl heroine was in through the year after her act of heroism? I know that she is reported to have died within a year from over-doing it - like total exhaustion?
PennyElaine