E.A.F.O.A.B. Point Of View: Spike's View-1

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E.A.F.O.A.B. Point Of View: Spike's View-1
Easy As Falling Off A Bike Fan-Fiction
by Stanman
E.A.F.O.A.B.Is the ongoing story of Charlie Watts who thanks to being almost runover by Stella Cameron during a thunderstorm, finally realizes her dream of becoming a woman who marries Simon Cameron and becomes the mummy to an ever increasing troop of children who are loved by Henry Cameron, Cathy's father-in-law.

Synopsis:Is where Spike talks about the story.

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I am Spike, I am a dormouse. My Mother is Cathy. Why she is so large and don't live in a house like I do, I don't know, but I love my Mum and that's alright. Mum at first looked and smelled like a Daddy, but then she began to smell and look like a Mum. Is that what I will do later? Will I grow big and smell like a Daddy then Smell and look like a Mum? All that I do know is that I am a Dormouse Mum and tht's alright with me.
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Mum feeds me real well to. Whenever she holds me, she gives me a nut to eat. When Mum does that, I like to thank her and my Mum seems to enjoy it too. I am so glad because I just want to please my Mum so much. But Mum was almost hurt one time. she came to feed me and another big Mum was there too. Mum talked to the other Mum, then they left and I heard the other Mum saying how she was going to hurt my Mum.
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I was scared because who would love me like my Mum? Then my Big Daddy spoke up and I knew that everything would be alright. I heard a loud crack of thunder, then that other Mum was silent. I guess that she went away because she afraid of thunder.
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My Daddy is way bigger than my Mum. he has a big belly and loves to laugh too. I like him and am gad that he is mt Daddy too. One time, my Mum and Daddy had a bunch of other Mum and Daddy dormice around me. Mum held me and gave me my nut. I thanked her as I always do. Then lightning began to flash and I went to my Mum for safety. Mum got me from where I was hid and placed me back home with another nut. I knew she would protect me from harm. i just wish that I hadn't peed on my Mum, but I was really scared. I am glad that Mum loves me so.
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One day Mum got me out and gave me a nut. Then a wee little Mum started to yell. She sounded like a banshee, so I jumped up high to get away. After Banshee Mum left, I saw my mum and flew back to her. I landed upon her then scrambled around and snuggled down upon her breast and got comfy. Mum then put me back home and gave me another nut.
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I live in a nice house filed with other dormice that are my family. Mum brings a Daddy dormouse to me when I feel funny, after Mum takes him away, I then have a litter of babies. Why Mum never has any litters, I don't know. Will I become like my Mum one day? That would be nice. Then I could care for litters like my Mum does.
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End of E.A.F.O.A.B. Point Of View: Spike's View-1
To be Continued In E.A.F.O.A.B. Point Of View: Spike's View-2

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Talented dormouse!

Great to hear from Spike! Great pov - I love the 'banshee Mum' concept; definitely a dormouse from Britain with that reference - are there banshee dormice as well over there?

He conquers who endures. ~ Persius

Sweet

I thought you'd like to know that Trish, my 12 year-old TG daughter, was tickled pink by Spike's POV. She enjoys Angharad's EAFOAB (expurgated by me occasionally for her) and had already dubbed Jemima The Munchkin.

Hilary

Way cute! How long did it

Way cute! How long did it take Spike to jump all over the keys to get her POV typed? She is very literate. Hugs, J-Lynn

Awwww

Absolutely adorable cute story. However it just squeaks by 9).

Kim

Sorry - but I got to ask....

"dormouse" ?

I've seen it showing up in a few stories, but to me, it's a totally new term - which suprise's me, since I've been with the community for many, many years.

So... I'm finally breaking down, and it might make me seem nieve, but what is a "dormouse" in the context of these stories?

Sapphire

Also... Lewis Carroll

Or Charles Lutwidge Dodgson, who wrote the Alice in Wonderland stories, included one in there. At the tea party with the Mad Hatter and Alice, the other two attendees are the March Hare and the Dormouse.

For.Y.our I.nformation: Dormouse

A dormouse is a very cute rodent that inhabits the English countryside. It is a nocturnal animal that is a part of the ongoing sage Easy As Falling Off A Bike by Angharad. Please ask her for any further information.
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Swedish relaives

At least in southern Sweden they also exists, but they are so rare and cautious that they are seldom seen
Ginnie

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