I Am The Night Part-21 (Conclusion)

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I Am The Night-
Part Twenty One (Conclusion)

by:
Enemyoffun


Bruce comes to a decision after his accident, beginning back where he started and possibly adding something new to the equation.

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Author's Note: Here is is at last, the final bit of I Am the Night. I want to thank everyone who had a hand in helping me write this...I think you all know who you are. Seeing as I started with the Bat I only felt it was fair to end with him too. I'd like to thank djkauf for the editing and DC Comics for their character.

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Epilogue:

“Miss Stephanie is on her way home sir,” said Alfred as he walked back into the room.

I smiled at him and nodded. Alfred didn’t smile back. I knew that look on his face, he was criticizing my actions. He’d been giving me that look every night since Stephanie came into my life. He thought I was being too standoffish, too secretive with her. He wasn’t far off. She was so much like her mother that it sometimes hurt to even look at her. Even when she was a guy in girls’ clothing, she looked like Crystal. Not that Stephanie was ever a boy. Now that she was physically a girl she had really blossomed, even Tim could attest to that. Before there was this unhappiness about her that seemed to bring the mood of everyone around her down with her. That sadness was gone now and in its place was a young woman that would have made her mother proud to see.

I sighed as I stood up from my chair. After agreeing to be my student, she and I talked for a few hours. I knew I was being selfish but I didn’t want her to go. Each night after work, ---before she got mad at me---I had a hard time letting her go. It broke my heart when she walked out of the room and went home. Especially when it was to that bastard. Every time she walked out that door, it was like her mother dying on me again. Even now, that’s all I could think about. When I closed my eyes, I could see Crystal’s smiling face and it hurt so much. It hurt as much as losing my parents. When Crystal died, the world fell apart. I felt horrible not being there for her daughter when she needed me, not being there when I should have been.

“Wallowing in the past again, sir?” asked Alfred.

I smiled. “You know me too well, old friend,” I said, looking down at the cane in my hands.

I tossed it aside and went back to my room. I stripped out of my pajamas and put on some normal clothes. I was tired of the pajamas. They were for Stephanie’s benefit not mine. I was still mending when she first walked through my door but just barely. In truth, I was about ninety percent but I kept up the charade so she would come every day. It was necessary to see if she was like I thought. I suspected there was something different about her mother after only a few times with her. She was the brightest, smartest person I ever met. It crushed me when she met Arthur. Arthur wasn’t good for her. He was only attracted to her looks, not her mind. Crystal had a great mind though. She could solve complicated math problems at the drop of a hat and the rate at which she could absorb information was phenomenal. Back then there was no such things as Metas---I didn’t actually hear the term until I was off on my own.

I met a man. He was rough and rugged on the outside but very fair. I trained with him for a few months. I knew something was wrong when he didn’t get tired like I did after every sparring match. I didn’t discover his secret until I accidentally cut him during a sword fight. I watched in amazement as his wound healed. It was the strangest and the most amazing thing I’d ever seen. He could have lied to me then but he didn’t. He told me what he was and how it was important not to tell anyone else. I gave him my word but that didn’t stop him from leaving the next morning. I moved on from there but I couldn’t help but wonder if there were more like him out there. I never suspected Crystal of being one but it was clear there was something different about her. Her twin sister didn’t have any extraordinary gifts but Crystal was so wonderful that she had to be different. I never pursued it though. When I met Stephanie for the first time, things started to go into perspective. Metas were out in the open now and they were cropping up all over the place. I’d met quite a few of them myself, helped them in some cases, even fought with a handful of them. Stephanie was like her mother. She had that same spunk, that same spark.

When she came back after her father was arrested, Leslie confirmed it for me. Stephanie was a Meta just like I suspected her mother might be. To say that I was thrilled was an understatement. I’d long given up on my crime fighting. Not because I wanted to but because I lost the passion for it. I was no match for the Metas out there. When I saw Stephanie, saw how passionate she was for these kinds of things I got fearful for her. Tim had already started taking up my mantle as the city’s protector. He came home each night with numerous bruises. I couldn’t help but see Stephanie with the same and it pained me a great deal. So I put her through her paces when she first got here just to see if she could do it. She surprised me but then again she was her mother’s daughter. But when she found my equipment and came to me asking for me to help her, I couldn’t do it.

I was scared to lose her like I lost her mother. Like I lost my parents.

But she went and did it anyway. There was no stopping her. That’s when Barbara suggested we help her without her knowing. So I called Onyx---an old friend, and we started. Stephanie didn’t know I was behind it all and I liked it that way. When the press dubbed her the Bat, I let her go with it. I was curious to see how she developed. She surprised me. She did more for the city than I ever did. She destroyed Thrill, took out a powerful drug dealer and befriended one of the city’s finest. She did it with style too and charisma, enough to make anyone proud. She also put a fire in me again. Hearing about her in action, secretly watching her training sessions with Onyx, I realized why I started all this in the first place. It was never about me, it was about helping people and making sure no one ever had to feel the pain I felt.

I’m not sure where I lost that drive but seeing Stephanie do what I should have been doing got me to find my drive again.

Alfred cleared his throat. “You’re staring off into space sir,” he said with a smile.

“Just thinking about whether I did the right thing or not.”

“About Miss Stephanie?” he asked and I nodded. He chuckled.

“Take it from someone who knows. If a young person gets a crazy enough idea in their head, there’s nothing you can do to stop them.”

I smiled at that. “You sure tried.”

“May I make a suggestion sir?”

“Since when have you had to ask?”

“The lies sir” he said as if I didn’t make my remark. “You told her you weren’t going to lie to her anymore and yet you kept the greatest one from her.”

I frowned. He and I had had this conversation before, a hundred times in fact. It never got us anywhere. “I’m protecting her.”

Alfred frowned. “You’re a fool that’s what you were. That young woman is marvelous; you don’t give her enough credit. But to make her think that that man is her…”

I cut him off with the raising of my hand. “It’s not time. When she’s ready…”

Alfred frowned. “It’s only going to get harder as time goes on.”
I nodded. I wasn’t home when Crystal announced she was pregnant. I didn’t come home when she had the child either. I was so busy trying to get revenge that it clouded my judgment. She and I left on bad terms. She was dating Arthur and I hated him. I wanted her to leave that jerk and run off with me. There was some nasty words exchanged on both our parts and I ran away. It was that argument that led me into becoming the man I am today. If not for Crystal I would still been that lonely boy waiting for his parents to come home. She helped create the Bat in her own right and I was forever thankful for her. When I finally got back into the city, the baby was grown and her mother gone. It hurt so much to know that the last conversation I had with the woman I loved was with such anger.

I opened my mouth to respond when there was a knock on the door. I didn’t even get a chance to say come in before the door opened. Tim was standing there, shirtless. His body was wrapped in gauze, his bruised face severely swollen. He looked like he’d been hit by a truck. When he stumbled out of Stephanie’s car, I feared the worst. He was so battered that he collapsed in Alfred’s arms. Thankfully, my old friend was a field medic in the army or else Tim would have been in a lot worse shape than he was. I definitely didn’t want Leslie here if I could help it. She didn’t agree with my nocturnal activities at all. She didn’t like the fact that I dragged Tim into it either. Not that I had much of a choice in the matter. When he found out what I was doing, he wanted to be a part of it. He said he owed it to his family too. So I trained himself myself.

He was leaning against the doorframe. “Did Stephanie leave?”

“About five minutes ago” I said and saw the look of disappoint on his face.

When I saw him show interest in her at first I was a bit peeved. There was no way I’d ever let him anywhere near her…anywhere near my…Tim was a good kid but he formed attachments that were too strong. He’d date a lot of girls on the side but he always found one that he loved above all others. Ariana was a fling, something I knew he did to make Stephanie jealous. But there was another girl he’d been serious about and loved her a great deal. She broke his heart when she left and he went into a dark place. Tim had a lot of dark moods. That was one of the reasons why I didn’t want him to do what I did. He was too brash, too violent and head strong. When he started donning his own costume, skulking about in the night, I didn’t have the strength at the time to stop him. But as I started to mend, I realized that I needed to curve him. So I suggested Oracle. She helped him, aiming him in the right direction. He was still brash but he had a purpose. He felt that if he could pick up where I left off---looking into Thrill---then he might prove to me that he could be the hero that I was. Then Stephanie came into our lives and I saw that same look of longing in his eyes. That same passion. I knew what would happen if he fell in love with her and she didn’t return it.

He did too. But to my surprise, she did as well. It was a little rough at first but I came to accept it. Not that I liked it but I understood Tim would pursue her even if I tried to stop it. So I was letting it go for now. Stephanie was a smart girl and I trusted her judgment. Tim was a good kid but he needed discipline and maybe she would be the one to give it to him.

“Master Tim you should be resting” said Alfred as he walked over and helped Tim to a chair.

My battered ward was currently hobbling with a limp.

Tim waved Alfred off as he sat. “I hate lying there and doing nothing, Al”.

“You’ve done enough, Master Tim.”

He frowned at that. I could tell he knew he was in for a scolding. Not from me though. As much as I wanted to chew him out for going off half cocked like that, I was done lecturing. Alfred on the other hand didn’t share my reluctance. I sat with an amused smile as my oldest friend in the world berated the young fool. It went on for a while and Tim took it without saying a word. But his posture told me everything. His head was hanging low and his shoulders slumped like a child who knew they’d done something wrong. It was the first time I’d seen something like that in him. I couldn’t help but smile and realize that maybe Stephanie was the best thing for him after all.

“Stephanie is coming back tomorrow after school” I said, Tim’s head perked up. “I’m taking over her training. If you were to show up in the Gym I wouldn’t refuse you as well.”

He smiled. “I won’t screw up this time.”

“You better not because this is the last chance I’m giving you.”

He nodded and with that, he stood up. I held out my hand and he shook it. Then he nodded to Alfred and hobbled out the door. As soon as he gone, I looked at my watch and cursed. Alfred turned and frowned.

“Really sir, you’re just like Master Tim.”

“I’m sorry Alfred but I have a meeting.”

He looked at his own watch. “It’s nearly four am.”

I smiled. “The person I’m meeting with has strange hours.”

“I’ll bring the car around” he groaned and left the room.

I smiled. Out of all the people in my life, he was the most reliable.

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The meeting was in the Narrows in one of the locations I recently procured from Henry Ballard. I say procure but the truth in the matter was I took it in a hostile takeover. Now that Ballard was in prison---for a very long time---his company was in shambles. It didn’t long for me to acquire it. Most of his property was like the one I was currently standing in front of. He had a lot of old real estate, claiming to have purchased it to develop into high-rise condos. But the truth in the matter was that he ran illegal operations out such places. When I got his company, I got a look at his books and found that Ballard had had his hand in a lot of this mess. When Booster Gold took him down---with my help---things were cracked wide open for the world to see.

“Are you sure this is the place?”asked Alfred with a shudder.

It was clear he didn’t like where we were. How could he. The place was dark and dank, the buildings all close together with tight shadows in-between them. It was the perfect place for an ambush. It was also the perfect place to meet someone who didn’t fit in well in a boardroom. It was my choice to meet here not theirs. In fact, when they first contacted me with their proposal I wanted nothing to do with it. The technology they were offering didn’t interest me in the least. But after my run in with Diego, the world had changed for me. After wallowing in pity for a long time, I realized that if I still wanted to continue then I needed to step up my game. So I made some calls and came to a beneficial arrangement. It was a onetime deal and it cost a fortune but it was worth it in the end. I got what I wanted and my “friend” got a lot of money.

“This is the place,” I said, sticking my hands into my overcoat pockets.

Alfred glanced around wearily. “If you don’t mind, I think I’ll wait in the car. This skulking about in the dark is your business.”

I chuckled. “Suit yourself; I’ll only be a minute.”

I left my fearful butler outside as I made my way in. The building was falling apart. It was old and worn down. At one time, it had been a part of a series of fine upscale apartments. But that was back fifty years ago. When the city started to develop further this part was completely abandoned. It was on the darker side of the Narrows where few dared to tread. Ballard bought the whole block from Carmine Falcone, who knows where he got it from. When Ballard was arrested, Falcone tried to buy it back from me but I’m not the kind of guy who does business with mobsters. I respectfully declined and he went back under whatever rock he crawled out from. Now that Sionis was out of the picture I was fairly certain Falcone would move into his territory anyway. I still owned most of that area but having been out of the game for several months now, it was teeming with scum. Stephanie and Tim had helped to clean a lot of it up but without constant enforcement, it wouldn’t be long before it filled up again.

I guess I was going to have to change that.

I found a flight of rickety stairs that led up to the top floor. I climbed them cautiously and made my way down the narrow hall to the last room on the left. When I got there, the door was already open and a small table was set up. I stepped into the room and closed the door behind me. As soon as I did so my “friend” stepped out of the shadows, half of them still hidden, the other half partially visible in the light shining through the window. I saw long legs encased in black leather and knee-high boots.

“You’re late Mr. Wayne,” said a purring female voice.

I smirked. “I had some other business first.”

The person shifted and her leg disappeared. “Do you have the money?”

I reached into my coat and took out a pen and my checkbook. I walked over to the table and filled out the check. I ripped it off and left it there. “I’ll leave you to fill in the name, Miss…”

“That’s not important,” she said, taking a step forward.

She placed a large metal case on the floor in front of her. I stared at the case before taking a step toward it. I picked it up and carried it over to the table. As I was doing so, she stepped out of the shadows fully for the first time. She was tall and leggy, dressed all in black. She was a very beautiful woman but most of her features were obscured in shadows. She picked up the check and purred. I watched her with interest. Then she walked around the table. She swayed her hips as she approached me before putting her hands on my shoulders. She leaned in for a kiss and I didn’t resist. We held it for a long time before she pulled away then licked my cheek long and slow.

When she done she smiled. “It was a pleasure doing business with you, Mr. Wayne”

She waved a bit and slipped back into the shadows.

I stood flabbergasted for a long time, staring at the dark. What a woman!

After I recovered, I opened the case and took a look inside. I smiled at what I saw. She did good work. I took off my coat, unbuttoned my shirt and slowly started to put on everything that was inside. Ten minutes later, I was down. I opened the window and jumped down to the street. When I landed, I didn’t feel the impact at all, the suit absorbing everything. It felt absolutely wonderful. In fact, it was better than wonderful. She did really good work. Alfred turned around and jumped slightly. He took a step back and then sighed, finally realizing who it was.

“So this is what all the secrecy has been about?” he asked with a frown.

“It was necessary to keep up the secrecy so as not to worry you my friend,” I said, the new tone of my voice amplified by the suit I was wearing.

“So is this truly the course you want to take?”

I nodded. “Stephanie and Tim have been holding down the fort very well. But I think it’s about time that I get back into the swing of things.”

“So in other words, I should expect you home at odd hours for a while now?”

I nodded. “Yes just like old times.”

He rolled his eyes. “Here we go again.”

He turned and walked back to the car, opening the door and getting inside without saying another word.

Me I went to the nearest building and climbed up it without a problem. The suit was amazing, having enhanced my agility and strength. When I made it to the top, I stood on the edge and stared out at the Narrows, my black cape billowing in the cold breeze. I stood and stared for a long time. It felt good to be here again, it felt right. After a minute or two, I tapped my left pointed ear, activating the radio inside of it. I made sure it was patched in to where I wanted it to go. “Oracle, do you copy?”

A few seconds later, her voice came on the line. “Bruce, is that you?”

“Not Bruce, not while I’m dressed like this.”

She sighed. “I know the drill. So what do I call you then?”

I smiled. “The Batman.”

Author’s note: As I’m sure all of you know, comments are life blood to an author. I’m not begging or demanding, but I certainly would appreciate anything you have to say (or ask). It doesn’t have to be long and involved, just give me your reaction to the story. Thanks in advance...EOF

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What a woman?

LOL! If only someone would make THIS into a movie! OMG! Okay no spoilers until a few more commentors has done there their thing, but seriously this is good. The perfect epilog which matches up the prologue to a tee.

As a matter of fact I'm listening to the old Batman theme as I type this. NOT the 60's show!

Hugs!
Grover

Batman Theme

Enemyoffun's picture

I assume you're thinking about the one from the Tim Burton movies?

Silly I know-

but yes. While I liked the themes from the 90's animated series, Danny Elfman's defines how I see the Bat. The music from the newer movies just doesn't do Dark and brooding. Violent and Black, well, maybe.

Hugs!
Grover

Wowza

Drakira's picture

I agree with Alfred, and Bruce should come clean about Stephanie's parentage. However, after seeing Batman back in action again, I could begin to hear the Batman music from the cartoon in my mind.

Drakira

Drakira

Coming Clean

Enemyoffun's picture

I suspect there will be some revelations in a sequel down the road :)

I Am The Night Part-21 (Conclusion)

So, Batman met Logan in the past and just got a new and improved Batsuit from the Cat. WILD!

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

New Bat Suit

Enemyoffun's picture

It was an idea of mine that came late in the story but it worked out really well for the story.

WOW!!

I don't think that it gets any better (of course I say that after every one of your stories) . You are an awesome writer. I can't wait until the next story!!!!!...... Adoy

Thanks :)

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You made my day with this comment :)

Whistles an claps

Very nice ending to and with just a subtle cliffhanger no less. Very nice very nice. I like how ya touched on Batman meetin logan in the past an the brief cameo by Catwoman. Looking forward to your next story whatever it maybe my friend :D.

Next Story

Enemyoffun's picture

I've decided to go into another Retcon after this one...based on a certain Teen Titans with a bit of an emo vibe :)

Hmm I wonder who

Hmm I wonder who it could be...... If it is her, are you staying with her background as half Demon

Doth the Raven Nevermore

Excellent Conclusion

littlerocksilver's picture

I know this is not the end, but just a plateau. I think he will have to tell her what I suspected for a while. She needs to know what happened. Hopefully, she will understand. I think this last section was very well written, very enjoyable.

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Portia

Portia

Big Surprise

Enemyoffun's picture

It was my biggest secret and my biggest surprise :)

Definitely didn't see it coming

Also this whole chapter explains a lot of questions we all had about what was happening in the background. I'm also happy to see the return of the Batman.

I look forward to reading your next story.

It was a great surprise in

It was a great surprise in that it was very surprising and very great! :)

You're evil!

You're just gonna leave it like that? Well, I'll tell you what! I am very disappointed in you. Ya give us the basis for a new story, then you walk away. You...you deserve a good spanking! Holy desertion, Batman!

Wren.

So disappointed. :(

Okay, well, maybe not completely disappointed.

Sequel

Enemyoffun's picture

Stephanie and Bruce will return I promise :)

We'll have to...

Have to find a way to hold you to that. ;)

Amazing!!!!

revolution's picture

Can't wait to read a sequel of a special. should have figured from the way Arthur talked about steven that there was a reason behind it. I wonder if arthur was told by crystal before she passed and that was why steven couldn't see her. in either case amazing writing as usual. didnt notice to many errors while reading it either but will also wait for the edited version to read again.

Revo

P.S.
Hope to read a sequel of this down the road! XD

P.S.S
Can i get a link to the beginning of the catwoman story by chance please? wanted to read it to get some background since she seems to make slight appearances in various stories.

Catwoman's First

Drakira's picture

Catch-as-Cat Can is the first in Catwoman's Saga.

Drakira

Drakira

thanks

revolution's picture

thanks for the name will have to read it tonite XD

revo

Arthur

Enemyoffun's picture

He was a real scumbag but its funny because when I first started this story, the parentage idea didn't even come to me. It wasn't until later when I thought about it that everything just seemed to fit so well.

could have fooled me

revolution's picture

as the subject says i wouldnt have known that had you not told me. the way the father acted around her just seemed so distant. that was the only reason i was thinking she wasnt his daughter until you wrote about the picture and how close in age they were as well as stating that she was there until she went to college and how much it affected him when she left. It just makes me sad that Bruce didnt tell her.....After all she went through and the relief of stopping what happened it could have really been a big pickme up to know she has a real father figure to lean on when she needs to. An uncle, cousin, and friend are one thing but the direct family connection is by far the best.

I also liked the way you had integrated Bruce's thoughts about the relationship between Steph and Tim. Classical protective father.

Revo

Parentage!

It didn't come to a lot of us until we found out later.

Oops! back to the story.

I loved it all, geat action with a nicely woven plot.

Thanks so much EOF.

LoL
Rita

Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)

LoL
Rita

EOF, As much as I often find

EOF, As much as I often find the Retcon universe a bit predictable, this one was good. Thank you for writing it.

CaroL

CaroL

Predictable

Enemyoffun's picture

I try to change things up with each story I write. I'm glad you liked it :)

Thank you

Awesome ending...

I have to admit that I really liked this story even though I was one of the kids that grew up with manga and anime than comic and animation. I don't know the originals, but this was still a very understandable story.

Thank you for writing.
Beyogi

Comics

Enemyoffun's picture

I'm not a comic person myself...the only exposure I had to Batman when I was growing up was the Tim Burton movies and the animated series in the 90s. I didn't even know who Stephanie Brown was until I found her on the Internet :)

nice wrap up!

loved it. my only question is did he get a suit for Tim and Steff also.

see you next time on the Raven channel?

Thanks

Suits

Enemyoffun's picture

Steph should get a new one I haven't really thought about Tim

I like how it's shaping

The entire 'verse that is. :)

Though, it seems that Tim is still sidelined into a lesser role. The Bat is a Meta, the Batman is equipped with the Cat-tech, but the Roving Ravager is apparently still wearing the outdated scrubs, and has nothing else to boost him. :P

Hmmm, I'd really like to see Catwoman's view on all this. It is likely that she will warn some of the former J-Teamers that a few of the active heroes are using Cat-tech, but she won't reveal any names (keeping mum is included in the bill so nyah!).

So, Steph is likely a child of BW. Hmmm, Oracle won't tell her deliberately, Onyx and RR aren't privy to this knowledge, Alfred will keep the stoic disapproval but won't tattletale. So, I guess, she either hears it accidentally, hears it from Bruce himself, or is told by a third party seeking to sow discord (throw a spanner among them). I do hope there wouldn't be the classic "Why do you care you're not my Dad so cut it out" dispute. :)

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Bruce and Stephanie

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I will definitely touch on the parentage issue in the sequel. I'm not a fan of over-the-top drama so the whole "you're not my Dad" stuff...so that won't happen. There will be some drama involved but more of the realistic kind :)

So now we know.

Do you know how hard it was not to gleefully tell people that I knew Bruce was Stephanie's father? But I held it in. Now that it's clear, it will be interesting when she does find out. I just hope it's Bruce who tells her. Though it's fairly obvious more people than him and Alfred know about it.

I also liked that Cat Woman left him in a half daze for a bit.

Hearing things from his perspective was illuminating, too. And yes, he is acting like a protective Daddy where Stephanie and Tim are concerned.

Good ending, and it will lead nicely into the sequel.

Maggie

His POV

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I love writing Bruce...I wouldn't mind doing it again. Its fun to see things from the POV of other characters once and a while :)

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

I have enjoyed this story from the first word. I am still enjoying it at the last. I personally think that this is a better telling of the story with shades of gray like the night not just the the 1940's black and white. The people are fully formed and with depth creating characters that you connect with and care about or hate for a reason. Please keep this story alive and in the future add to it with the same level of craft and quality.

The only bad question is the one not asked.

The only bad question is the one not asked.

Thanks

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I've got an interesting idea planned for the sequel which will have an interesting take on other things in the Bat universe not explored here. I've also got a very Strange villain planned for that one :)

The Suit, the Man in Black.

The question is just how good that suit is compared to her original. Even that early edition was kicking, but nothing compared to what she is wearing now. On the other hand, the Bat was pretty damn good before his accident. I fully expect that in training Steph, he will regain that last 10 percent and perhaps even go beyond it. After all any good teacher learns from his students too. With a student like her, I know she will challenge him. A win-win for both of them. As for Tim, he takes a beating but still keeps coming back. I think his road will be rocky, but he is anything but a quitter.

Wonderful writing!
Grover

The Suit

Enemyoffun's picture

I needed a way to make things more realistic. I love Batman but in the real world there's just no way a guy can do the things he does. So I needed some kind of enhancement, the suit was the answer. It will make him stronger and more durable than ever before, so no more bad accidents like with Bane.

Bruce's superpower-

-as we all know is having a whole lot of cash. Like the man in purple said, "Where does he gets all of these toys?" LOL! Now, we know they come from Cat-Woman. Who knew! :)

Very nice work!

Hugs!
Grover

I've got the Batman theme in my head too...

Extravagance's picture

The one from the 1989-1997 movies, that is. = )

Oh, and "Face-to-face" by Siouxsie and the Banshees, which played at the end of the closing credits of the second movie. ^_^

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Theme Songs

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They're always rolling around in my head. The Wonder Woman song was in there the whole time I wrote Some Kind of Wonderful.

Barbara's Mother

Enemyoffun's picture

I mentioned it real quick but Stephanie's mother and Barbara's mother were sisters...twins :)

And both died young

Ah,

not only did you say twins but several times and way back you said they were cousins so it all fits. Hum, identical or fraternal/ That could mean Barbara might have the meta though the gun shot you think would have triggered it. But then maybe you know who aslo has a trace of meta genes but Gordon didn't and that made the difference?

The you know who as dad was a bit of a shock but I had some suspicions.

He needs to tell her NOW. It's already, what 17 years and he left town for ten or so or however long it was between her getting pregnant and her dying.

WHY didn't he come back until it was too late? Stephanie saved herself in the warehouse fire, he didn't have anything to do with it but then he was laid up to some extent back then. Her supposed dad made her life and her mom's crap and ultimately got her in trouble and in the warehouse where she should have died if not for being a meta.

Her sperm donor was just that until recently. Time he comes up to the plate and embraces his daughter. She is his only heir so far as we know unless he hooks up with Catwoman. Just hope the *cat* suit only enhances him, not changes him.

Hum, when word gets out she is you know who's lost daughter , one with the villains come in droves? and two, will Jens not so nice grandparents suddenly think Stephanie is just wonderful... the suck ups! Hum, it could work. Olivia Queen is doing pretty darn good in her grandfather's place. And Lena could do very well as well if ever Lex dies and he has some legitimate businesses left.

And regarding Tim he is showing signs of being her father first their mentor second. But then he remembered the tragic mistakes he made with her mom so ... Tim and Stephie sitting on a roof... WOOF!
Though with her gymnastic stills once Tim is healed... on his cycle WHILE riding?

-- snicker--

Totally FABOO ending.

John in Wauwatosa

John in Wauwatosa

Some Answers :)

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Lots of questions here...I think I can answer a few. I like that someone asked about Jen. With all these other DC characters running around everyone forgets poor Jennifer Morgan---if interested I suggest looking her up because she's not an original character of mine :) Will her grandparents come around? I haven't really thought about it actually...they were just side characters to me. I'm not sure if anymore will react to Steph being Bruce's daughter because I'm not sure how many people are going to find out in the end---Stephanie definitely at some point and I assume she'll tell Jen. But I don't think the world is ever going to find out.

Jennifer Morgan

for those that did not catch it when you introduced her, her father Travis morgan an air force officer shot down by the russians ended up in the inner world as "The Warlord". Jen later joined him and became a major sorceress.

Thanks...it was great

Thanks for this story. I like the way you kept the Selena and Bruce romance thing open.
I'm looking forward to your fantasy story.

Romance

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Well it was just a kiss but of course Bruce is going to see her in a romantic light because she is really sexy.

erk...

I just picked up on something huge that will have to be explained in the sequel...

Does Barbara sleep at all? 4am and she picks up immediately... no yawn, no grumbles, boing! Up and going...

Maybe something about her injury... something hormonal or somesuch could be giving her the ability to operate on very very minimal sleep... Alternatively, she might be in a situation where she goes for days at a time without sleep then crashes for 24-48 hours and then goes another week or two... Do something fun with it that makes her situation interesting :)

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Barbara

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Maybe she's a Robot :P But seriously, I think she probably sleeps, I'm not sure when but it happens :)

Great story, kind of sorry

Great story, kind of sorry to see it come to an end, hope you decide to do a sequel in the future.

The End

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I'm sad to see it come to an end too but I felt it was time. I do have a sequel planned :)

Well, as I am going to say,

Well, as I am going to say, VERY well written. It was wonderful to see my character used so well. Loved the whole story too. Great.
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Catwoman

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I've been wanting to slip her into one of my stories for a while now...what better place than to have her interacting a bit with Bruce. :)

Awesome.

Is that enough? No? Then I'll repeat it.

Awesome.

Melanie E.

Thank you...

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Thank you...thank you. Two thank yous for two Awesomes :)

You did...

You did really nice work with this series Enemy. I'm familiar with Batman from the movies, but have never really followed the whole history of it all... so I'm judging what I've read not so much how it retcons the original but how it progresses on its own merit. And I feel you really nailed these people in a natural progression to the 'heroes' that we know. Considering how much hand-waving is involved in getting most comic book characters from their 'origin' to their 'on the street hero version' that's a significant accomplishment.

Familiarity

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I'm not all that familiar with Batman except from movies and cartoons. I wrote it how I thought it should be written---how I wanted to write a Batman story. I hit a few bumps along the way but I'm happy with the end result. I'm glad you liked it :)

Brilliant ending.

Great to see the Bat emerge fully, and a lovely little throw away Logan cameo.

Thanks for writing this Enemyoffun, as I've said on numerous occasions and will undoubtedly say again, I love reading your work.
I can't wait to see what you do next. :-D

The Bat

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I began with him and decided to end with him. I wanted it to be a progressive thing. He failed in the beginning and quit but through Stephanie he decided to reinvent himself and become the Batman we all know and love. :)

The Bat Man

Great story! Too bad though that it couldn't have gone far enough for Bruce to tell his daughter the trugh.

Vivi

Vivi

Some things

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Some things need to be kept for a sequel :)

Ack

I have a couple problems with this story.

Just how the hell do you manage to make even the end of the story a cliff-hanger? You call it a future sequel, but I see through this smokescreen. What's worse is, now I'm stuck with one of those TV announcer voices saying "what will Steph do when she finds out? Will Steph and Tim get together? This and many more answers next time. Same bat time, same bat channel". You torture your readers with this, or at least just me, but several of my other personalities (the TV announcer may be one) agree so I guess I qualify as readers. Aaaaand you squeeze in a couple of clever cameos and then just say "the end" (or "The Batman", details!). You expect us to just go cold turkey after that? *sigh*... Anyone make a patch for this sort of thing?

My other issue is the kudos button stopped responding to my clicks after the first one. Must be broken. I really hate when that happens.

But seriously (or maybe just sanely) for a moment, another excellent story. As usual. Now, get back to work. Your momentary idleness does not amuse me and I need.., no..., demand constant amusement.

Same Bat Time...

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Same Bat Channel... :)

Hopefully my next story will help fill in the void left by this one. I'm working on it right now---its not Batgirl---but I'm hoping people respond to it as much as this one :)

The End?

I also find myself wondering if Bruce is about to find himself becoming Bat WOMAN after using Selena's tech, mmmm could be an interesting part of the sequel. Can you imagine poor Steph's confusion when her father now her 'mother' confesses the secret love he had with Steffy's mom? I look forward to more from you Master EoF, please write more when the muse strikes - don't go all Burnt out on us now - OK?

The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!

The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!

No Batwoman

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He'll remand male...I'm not screwing with Bruce Wayne like that :) No burning out, I promise...in fact I'm almost done with the first chapter of my next one :)

Bwaaaahhh!!!!!

~breaks down in inconsolable tears of disappointment~
Only kidding - it's cool, in a way NOT Ka-girling every male in the CRuniverse is probably a good idea.

The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!

The nature of Monkey is - Irrepressible!!!

Very True

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A very good point. I don't think that changing all males into women and vice versa in the CR-verse is a good idea. Leaving some the way they are still leaves a number of good story avenues to pursue. Also, I believe DC created a gender-bent universe as well, Earth-11.

Drakira

Drakira

I'd be upset if you HAD changed him

There are some characters you just don't mess with, after all. Batman and Superman would probably be DC's Big Two, Xavier and Magneto probably Marvel's, with just maybe Wolverine thrown in there (I'm an X-men fan if you can't tell.)

It would be fun to see some of their stories written for the CRU, with the only changes being their reactions to fellow characters and their new genders.

Melanie E.

You must remember there are

You must remember there are two passions of Selena, discovery of new technology, and being the femme fatale. She LOVEs to have men curl their toes when she looks at them, or whatever. It gives her a real feeling of power to know that this big, strong man, who pretty much has everything going for them, is nothing but a puddle of goo when she smiles at them. It's a power turn on for her.

Believe me, she saw how rock hard Bruce was when she licked him, and then had fun watching him change.
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Er

... clothing that is.
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Selina

one thing to remember too is that before the dc people merged their universes Bruce and Selina were married on earth 2 and their daughter was the first (and best) Huntress. something to think about downline sometime

Big secrets

That's one big secret that Bruce is holding back, he will never be Stephanie father, for some of the same reasons as the Cluemaster is not. He gave up that honor when he abandoned his child. He does not even have the ability to say he did not know. He left her in the hands of a child abuser and calls himself a man, some calling to fight crime, when he leaves his own daughter to suffer. He could have saved Stephanie so much pain and he elected to leave her, I would not be very happy if I was her when this information comes to light. Or, with anyone that knew and did not tell when they found out. Other that this, I really enjoyed the story and look forward to reading more.

Alternatively...

Just because Bruce didn't like the guy it did not give him the authority to take Steven(Stephanie) from the man. In order for him to have done that, he would have had to go to the courts and prove his paternity. Knowing the court systems, this would have potentially resulted in a worse situation for Steven as most likely, there would have been shared custody even after Bruce proved paternity(Somehow I can see Cluemaster insisting on that just to be perverse). Not only that, but there is also the issue of the damage done to Steven by being forced to sit through the court proceedings. Finally, there is a strong possibility that the courts would have left Steven in the home he grew up in IN SPITE of proof of Bruce's paternity, for the good of the child. Cluemaster was mentally abusive but not physically abusive until the moment Steven left.

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Plot Points

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I love leaving things open for future sequels, it gives me something to strive for.

Nice conclusion

I like how you endled this conclusion, bringing this story full circle.
Good work!

The Ending

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I knew I always wanted to start it with Bruce and end it with Bruce...sorta bookending the story with him :)

I Am The Night

EOF, this is beyond kudos... it's how you bookended Stephanie's story With Bruce. Please keep setting the bar high, so i have a goal to aim for... That goes for all the writers... you make me want to acheve great writing...for all of you to enjoy.
Diana

Now that is

Continuity just wonderful each chapter so very compelling and cliffhangers that Frank Miller would be proud of.

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Goddess Bless you

Love Desiree

Goddess Bless you

Love Desiree

Thanks

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I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I've got some interesting plans for a sequel which I hope to write somewhere down the road :)

Darn good yarn

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that was, thank for the words, EOF.
Dark moody Hans Zimmer themes seeping up behind Bruce's perch.

Teri Ann
"Reach for the sun."

Great Great Series!!

What a treat to have this story to look forward to and enjoy!
Thanks
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alissa