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Part Thirteen
Hey everyone! Here's part Twelve. Transformation part 2!
Synopsis: Glen Evanston is a hardworking young man who owns a record shop in his small town. A witch makes a deal with him that would be beneficial to them both. Or will it?
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Comments
Inconsistencies
In picture #3 it should be "Your voice", I think.
In picture #8 the left arm is missing, but the left hand is visible.
If "Glen" has no teeth then she couldn't talk normally, not under normal circumstances.
Thx for another nice chapter^^
Thanks!
Definitely need to watch for those. I'll correct them in the rewrite!
I Wondered About The Teeth
Where did they go and why? Glen still seems to be in command of his/her essential self. Let's hope he/she heeds Holly's warning.
Is he Glen or Evan?
Grr
Yes, that's Glen. I need to change that panel also, thanks for catching that. While writing this, I stupidly exchanged their names and I thought I caught all the references to 'Evan' but obviously still need to clean it up. Sorry for the confusion!