writing update: Portal problems

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For anybody interested in seeing more of Portal Problems, I'm afraid I'm shelving it for now. After publishing the first chapter and seeing the responses, I took a look at the next few chapters, and realized the characters lacked . . . character. They do stuff, but the reader would learn nothing about them.

So unless I can fix that, the rest of the story will not be published.

Sorry for any inconvenience.

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Character development...

...ain't always easy to do. I've run into similar issues with a couple of stories I've tried developing. Hang in there! Sometimes, it can take just letting a story simmer for a while before it feels ready to be told.