A download link for epub and mobi versions of chapters 1 to 43.

I've split the original 1 into 1 and 2.

Book 3 is the morning and afternoon of manic Monday. The trip to the bank to deposit their winnings turns into an odyssey. Susie and Jeffrey may wander aimlessly, but the direction the story is taking becomes clear. As they dispatch increasingly dangerous 'monsters', any plot regarding Jeffrey's TG status recedes into the background. However, I've carried on regardless for another 101 chapters with what might have been better posted elsewhere as Susie and Denise.

https://skydrive.live.com/redir?resid=44D73499B73D4651!105

Missing full stops and unpaired quotation marks have been fixed - I hope. I've written a word macro to highlight suspect quotation marks paragraphs and used it to edit all the chapters posted here.

Susie and Jeffrey must have more quotation marks per chapter than any other story, and it's hard to spot mistakes - the eye just glides over them. But when you do see an error, it sticks out like a sore thumb. Armed with my trusty macro, I've tried to exorcise that particular printer's devil.