Copyright 2007 by Heather Rose Brown
This drabble is a bit more mature than what I usually write, which is why I set the audience rating to mature. It's more romantic than sexual, but it does show adults being a bit ... ummm ... intimate. Anyway, let me post this before the intro winds up being longer than the drabble. ;)
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A sweet, aching buzz rippled through me when I felt Rachel's touch through my blouse and bra.
"Wow, they feel real."
"They are." I lifted her hand from my breast, then kissed her fingertips before holding them between my palms. "So are other parts."
Another ripple passed through me as she stroked the back of my hand with a delicate fingertip. "I know, and I don't care."
I could barely breathe as I asked, "Why?"
My heart nearly burst when I saw her eyes glisten with unshed tears as she said, "Because I love you ... all of you."
Comments
ELIZA Is this the start of a
ELIZA
Is this the start of a new story
ELIZA
Of Stories and Drabbles
That's a good question. The story written above is called a drabble, which is an extremely short work of fiction exactly one hundred words in length. I remember someone saying a drabble might be comparable to a story in the same way a haiku might be compared to an epic poem. While I probably could create a story based on this drabble, I hadn't really been planning to. Of course, my muse can be pretty unpredictable, so ya never know.
Heather Rose Brown :)
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Outside of a dog, a book is man's best friend.
Inside of a dog it's too dark to read.
Groucho Marx
drabble(s)
A really sweet vignette, meaningful, sure doesn't seem to need a 101st word, 102nd, 103rd to make it into a longer story, or a Chapter 2; but I could see maybe a cluster of loosely related & not-neccessarily-sequential drabbles featuring these two lovers; little 100-word shutter blinks of their life together. A day at the beach, Christmas morning, standing by the other thru some bad news, whatever. I don't know, it's just something
I flashed on.........sort of a "drabble cycle". Or maybe a segway.
---Laika
What borders on stupidity?
Canada and Mexico.
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