Rising Dawn Chapter 5

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Rising Dawn

Chapter 5 - Monsters are real!

 
We arrive back at the mall, it is not that late. Me and sis get out of the car also not forgetting my backpack, the officer winds down the window.

"You be fine now ladies."

"Yes, I have my keys."

Sis jingles her keys.

"I need to head back to the Station."

We wave him off as he pulls away to head to the station.

What do we do now, we could of gone to the mall. But with what happened today at the mall, it has been closed so that the bank can be examined in detail.

Both of us head back to the car in the car park, where we notice that a notice has been put up telling anyone who has parked in the carpark today does not need to pay.

"So sis, how long you think will the mall be closed."

"Well with only 1 bullet fired, and only injuries which happend where caused." She looks around. "by You, not that long. Allthough as this is a incident involving a bank, there having to bring in the Treasuary Department and the FBI."

"Makes sense, what does not make sense is why I am a superhero now."

"Yeah, that I am wondering that too."

We get into the car at this point and head off, I think my sister is feeling giddy that she does not need to pay for the carparking today.

As we are heading back home, i am getting a strange feeling that something is following us.

"Sis, I have a bad feeling."

"Why."

"Well I think since I became Soul Syncho, I might of gotten more that just transforming into her."

"Oh."

"I think I got some mystical senses, that I think we have something which means us harm following us."

"Okay, is it coming towards us yet."

"No, its just following us for the moment."

"Okay, I am going to take us to somewhere not near anyone else, once we are clear you should transform."

"Well I do not know if I can transform off the cuff."

"I hope you can, If your feelings are correct."

"I think I be able to."

It takes 15 minutes to get somewhere remote - it is boston, so it will take a while. I notice that the feeling, I had has not gone away.

"Sis, stop the car here."

She Stops.

"What now."

"Sis, I want you to get away from here as soon as you can, once I have engaged with it hopefully."

"Understood."

Then about 60yrds in front of me, something appears.

"What is that."

"I think that what is been following us."

What I see infront of me, can only be discribed as a Cross-Between the Imagination of H.P Lovecraft and Gary Gyax.

"Well, You want to fight me."

The Thing nods.

I hear sis start the car up and head back down the track.

"Well then, as there is no one else around here."

"Soul Syncho Emerge."

A brillant burst of light surrounds Dawn, within the burst of light Dawns entire body turns into light, retaining an outline of her 12 year old body - with no sexual features on it at all.

Then the entire body enlarges to the height and general body shape of Soul Syncho. Then the amulet appears on the chest between the breasts, and then from it the leotard portion of the suit appears as this happens the breasts grow to the size expected of her size.

Then from the now complete leotard the tights form from the top of the hips to the feet, once they reach the feet. The socks and the boots form from the sole up, with the sock forming first.

Once they are complete the Silver Accents appear on the various parts of the costume. As this occurs the Hair and Eye color of Soul Syncho come in, as the color for the hair is slowely appearing the hair lengthens down the mid back area.

The eye colour comes in from pupil and out. Then the burst of light dissappears leaving the now transformed Dawn as Soul Syncho.

"Soul Syncho Complete."


Well Next episode will show the problems now faced by Dawn.

Please leave comments and also if there are any glaring spelling errors or html coding errors please comment as well, heres the next chapter title -

Chapter 6 - Second Soul, Beast Soul

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Seems like Soul is going to

Seems like Soul is going to have her hands full fighting off various "baddies", since they seems to all know about her now. Your story is rather interesting and I would love to find out that each of the changes Dawn under goes bring her more toward the female gender until she finally is a fully functional girl. Jan

Rising Dawn Chapter 5

Could a gag prevent her from transforming?

    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine
    Stanman
May Your Light Forever Shine

It Might

It Might do, Might not - there are features of the amulet not shown yet