Printer-friendly versionQueen Lilibet And The Quest
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Queen Lilibet and the Quest is set in Northumbria & Greece. It has a magical and body swapping theme.
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Comments
Umm, Not sure...
What is going on with this story but every time I try to read it, open it, whatever, I can't do anything with it. Is there a chance you could post it normally instead of an attachment to an actual post? Thank you.
Goldie
UMMM! a bit hard to follow!
But I liked the general Gist.
Needs a little work to make it flow.
Gooluck like to see more!
LoL
rita
Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)
LoL
Rita
Would like it in regular format
It was a pleasant story. It was well done and you show a lot of potential. It was a little too stiff and technical to be to my liking, but I am sure that will come with time. If you can develop your characters a bit more it would help a lot.