Queen Lilibet & the Quest

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Queen Lilibet and the Quest is set in Northumbria & Greece. It has a magical and body swapping theme.

 

Queen Lilibet And The Quest

By Sharp


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Umm, Not sure...

What is going on with this story but every time I try to read it, open it, whatever, I can't do anything with it. Is there a chance you could post it normally instead of an attachment to an actual post? Thank you.

Goldie

UMMM! a bit hard to follow!

But I liked the general Gist.
Needs a little work to make it flow.

Gooluck like to see more!

LoL

rita

Age is an issue of mind over matter.
If you don't mind, it doesn't matter!
(Mark Twain)

LoL
Rita

Would like it in regular format

It was a pleasant story. It was well done and you show a lot of potential. It was a little too stiff and technical to be to my liking, but I am sure that will come with time. If you can develop your characters a bit more it would help a lot.